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Reviews for Adventers

By : slayer-of-evil
  • From ANON - Anon on August 01, 2009
    Please consider writing in your native language...
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  • From seductivemessiah on May 23, 2008
    you REALLY REALLY need a beta...i can't emphasize that enough...there's nothing to really tell when people are talking, the story is very choppy and barely any good descriptions at all [tis always better to hint than to just say outright]. is english your first language? i can't tell in this story if it is or not...and that is usually an indicator that you need a good beta.
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  • From tomfastic4 on July 05, 2007
    Very nice story man.
    Maybe you can add some more chapters.
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