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By : pip
  • From CL.Mustafic on April 08, 2016
    Okay so Elrond just opened a whole new can of worms... and I am glad he did because I just have a feeling Thranduil will push this issue now.

    Can't wait to see where this goes now.

    CL
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 07, 2016
    Oh, Thranduil... you beautiful, daft elf. How could you think Elrond would ever hurt you? You tease him, and torment him, but he loves you as deeply as you love him, and he would never hurt you, or Legolas. It's not in Elrond at all. It's why you love him so much, and trust him, and why he trusts you.

    And Galion... Oh, my, what a delicious little surprise you are. But I'm glad there is another elder elf to watch over Thranduil for Elrond, and to watch over Legolas, too, it seems. And possibly Elrond himself, when he needs it?
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  • From CL.Mustafic on April 05, 2016
    I have to admit I was a bit apprehensive about the whipping part but you did it wonderfully and I enjoyed reading it.

    The scene afterward was so packed with emotion that I could almost feel it radiating from the page, they really do love each other deeply. Oh and as always the sex was hot!

    CL
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 03, 2016
    Oh, how hard that was for Elrond, and how profound a healer he is.

    I love how Thranduil is as fragile as he is powerful. That is so deeply moving, to see the very depths of his love, for Legolas and for Elrond. I can't say I blame him for wanting to keep Legolas safe, but it is no longer his place, and Elrond did what was needed. Legolas has his own fate.

    In truth, the whipping really was secondary to the healing that it represented. As Elrond broke down every bit of Thranduil's resistance, he was healing. Each blow was a benison, and I do believe Thranduil and Elrond will be the closer for it.

    As ever, your writing is gorgeous, and your elves intoxicating. Thank you! :D
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  • From CL.Mustafic on March 26, 2016
    I always love having a chapter of this story to read before bed time. This one was a bit sad, to learn of Thranduil's need but also it made me happy to know that he loves Legolas so much and hopeful that he will express that love to let him know how important he is to him.

    What a good thing that Elrond showed up when he did, Thranduil needs... something and I can't wait to read that something in the next chapter.

    Good job once again!

    CL
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 25, 2016
    Beautifully done, just superb. Elrond's happiness in the beginning of the chapter is the sweet counterpart to the sharpness of the sorrow that waited for him in the Greenwood. As strong as he is, Legolas does need that closure Thranduil isn't ready to give, and Thranduil needs to come to terms with his love for legolas in balance with his need not to lose another elf his loves.

    Even if it means taking Thraduil to the edge, I think only Elrond could give this release, and relief, to Thranduil. I have to admit, I'm eager to see how far our Peredhil has come, and where Legolas will fit in this particular bit of healing.

    So beautifully done...
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  • From CL.Mustafic on March 21, 2016
    Oh, that Legolas is just a naughty little boy, isn't he? Leaving a mark that he knew would get poor Elrond into trouble. I love the dominant playful side of him that you've written, I think I may be in love...

    Now on the other hand that spanking that Elrond got for punishment was seriously yummy. Spankings administered bare handed while over the lap are my favorite kind so you got my number on that one.

    Can't wait for more now that I'm caught up.

    CL
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 20, 2016
    That was exquisite. I'm actually trembling almost as much as Elrond, I think.

    Thranduil is such a powerful Master, having learned so well from Nimbrethil, and it amazes me every time Elrond succumbs so beautifully. There is something compelling in his surrender, I confess, even more so than when Thranduil surrendered to him.

    I did so love that very last bit, however. What a perfectly Elrond response. Delightful, and I cannot wait to see what comes next!
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  • From CL.Mustafic on March 16, 2016
    Okay, I feel so bad, I'm on chapter 28 and have yet to leave you a review. First, you've made me totally fall in love with Elrond. I hate that he lost his first love, that was so sad. I love Legolas in this and now I'm torn because I want Elrond to be with both him and Thurindil since Thurindil lost the love of his life too. But that would mean Incest and I'm not sure that's where you're going with this but if it is, I will gladly follow you into that sticky situation. :D Oh and I hate spiders!

    CL
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 10, 2016
    I'll admit I wasn't quite expecting that, either, so I was as surprised as Elrond. I'll admit that Elrond no doubt had the advantage of me in terms of pleasure, though, and I am decidedly jealous, too.

    So many lessons to learn, and to be taught. It's a lovely journey, and I am eager to see what comes next.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 03, 2016
    What a lovely chapter this was! Celeborn has taught the teacher a lesson indeed, and even if Elrond will not remember all of it, he will at least know why Thranduil, and now Legolas, yearn for him so.

    I must say, I did enjoy Celeborn exercising his power, though: “Thranduil will make no further 'reports' to you about me, Elrond,” Celeborn said with infinite tolerance, but also some amusement. “Show kindness and do not ask him.” I cannot imagine not obeying that request, really.

    This sets the stage for what's to come beautifully!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 02, 2016
    Every chapter I read of this is better than the last.

    This chapter sang so sweetly of love, and healing, and the sweet joy of being reunited with a lover. The tryst in the rain was beyond beautiful to read, I could hear the drumming of the drops, and taste the wet air as I read, so wonderfully did you paint that picture.

    And then, that bittersweet confession, Thranduil waiting for something he believed would never be, just as Elrond waited long ago for Oropher, knowing Oropher would never return. Such sorrow, and I wonder if Elrond could truly let it go.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 29, 2016
    Gűr nîn glassui!

    That was sublime. There's really no other word for it. It was beautiful, and otherworldly, and just sublime. The love and trust between these two is beyond measure, and I feel like it's a gift to be allowed to glimpse their sessions.

    Thank you, so very much!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 26, 2016
    I am simply overwhelmed by this chapter. The trust between Elrond and Thranduil, the bond they have, it's truly magnificent. I cannot fathom how intense this is for them, although you portray it with utter grace and beauty.

    I was more than moved by Thranduil's simple confession of loving Celeborn. It was one of those gentle touches that so perfectly underscore the need in both Tranduil and in Elrond, and I'll wait for the next chapter with bated breath.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 23, 2016
    This story is pure delight. Every chapter deepens the bonds between Elrond and Thranduil.

    Elrond sums up his own trepidation quite nicely: he is a healer, and what Thranduil needs is a kind of healing outside Elrond's experience. I did like how Elrond realized how very similar this was to what Thranduil did for him, when Oropher died. To be taken outside oneself, until one heals...that's a rare and wonderful gift.

    I'm also quite taken with Thranduil's open responses. He is more in need than even he realizes, to have let his guard down this much, even with an elf he trusts as much as Elrond.

    Just superb, Pip!
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