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Reviews for Lost Out Of Time II, : The Coming Together

By : brindlemom2
  • From Recordkeeper on November 12, 2010
    Yay Another chapter! It was kind of a set up chapter but still well written. i am glad owen is getting married and he seems happy. cant wait to see more!!
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  • From Recordkeeper on March 31, 2010
    finally a new chapter. She knows she needs to hold her tongue yet she still says too much. I had a cliche soap opera moment where i thought it would be cool if she had a twin that she thought died but she didnt. for some reasons i love adding twins to story lines. lol. sorry im rambling. I cant wait to see where the plot goes with this cause i mean it seems like you are just scratching the surface. Keep up the good work! ^.^
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  • From mearas3019 on March 15, 2010
    I love this story and it's outline. I can't wait until the next chapter. When will you be putting out the next chapter. I hope it is soon.
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  • From Recordkeeper on September 06, 2009
    yay he won! I like turin. Its too bad Elleian wasnt born with a twin. That would have made a cool plot twist. Maybe not original but i would have liked it. please keep writing!
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  • From Recordkeeper on July 05, 2009
    well im glad you finally updated. too bad there was not all that much to the chapter. I hope to read more sooner than this one came along.
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  • From Heidi191976 on March 22, 2009
    This is an amazing story. Please update soon. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From chickaboo on July 13, 2008
    This is freaking amazing! More please!!
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  • From ryzmah on March 04, 2008
    I am really enjoying this story. I am really looking forward to your next update. One question though. You have all of this happening in the second age, but with everything going on in your story shouldn't it be the third age? I know you said that you were messing with the timeline, but this seemed really drastic since the twins and Arwen weren't born until the third age. But other than some confusion on how things are going to fit together, I thing this is really great.
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  • From puisin on February 21, 2008
    Hi, I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoy your story. I only found it yesterday and I couldn’t stop reading and so you made my day. I like how you describe everything to a point where I can see it like a movie in front of my eyes. I also enjoyed your style of writing and I do hope you'll continue with your story. I really can’t say what I like best because the story as a whole is just amazing and I'd love to read more. Especially what the elder twins will say to their new sister and how Ted and his son will fare. Please write more!
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  • From sisterkitty on November 08, 2007
    Another new story I have discovered and I have read part 1 and 2 up to here.

    This is really good - I like the blend of earth and Middle Earth
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  • From angelstar3999 on October 25, 2007
    I am surprised not many have reviewed this story so far. I mean it has 24 wonderful chapters so far and under ten reviews. You should be up to hundred by now. I love your main character she is such a sweetie. I found the last chapter that you have updated to be a page turner. Anyways I am reviewing in hopes it will encourage you to keep up the good work.

    Angelstar3999
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 23, 2007
    Great story. I look forward to see revelation of Eleiann’s origin. I would like to see more interaction betwwen elves and Eleiann.
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  • From Madietta on June 11, 2007
    I like your story very much, it is well researched and well written. I am looking forward to reading more. I just have one minor problem - how is it possible that your characters gained such a good command of Sindarin? What is left in Tolkien's writings is certainly not enough to construct the entire language. I realize your whole story is totally AU anyway but this kept niggling me.
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  • From Macheil on April 12, 2007
    Wow! Thank you for this wonderful story. I love the way you are preparing the characters for their journey to Middle Earth. I can't wait to read what happens next! Thanks again
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