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Reviews for Aragorn and Legolas: Three shot.

By : bonksie
  • From ANON - Enelya Séregon on May 13, 2014
    I really like it and I can't wait for more :)
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  • From iceshinigami10 on August 21, 2010
    that was totally awesome and hot hot hot hot hot hot hot!!! smuty goodness awesome i so can't wait for the fourth installment i look forward to it.
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  • From MAC49124912 on September 18, 2009
    this is very cute, I love this pairing the best, I really hope to read more
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  • From nekluvshp on July 22, 2008
    Whoo!!! That was awesome. Can't wait to read more!!
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  • From JazzieXGackt on July 13, 2008
    [Chapter 3 review]

    I have to say...even though I was picky about the first chapter and their love making, I have to say I am proud, you are one of the few I have found that have the Seme coaxing the Uke to relax and continues to pleasure them. I know some people disagree, but I find too few stories that write it down, and mean it threw feelings and actions.

    Kudos a bunch! - I cannot wait for the next chapter ~^^~!
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  • From JazzieXGackt on July 13, 2008
    [Chapter 2 review]
    Awwww ::huggles Legolas plushy:: that is horribly sad! But well written; kudos - you've grabbed my attention - you are the first for a MPreg story. I hope this continues, and if not I shall have to hunt you down and force you to continue XDDDDDD
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  • From JazzieXGackt on July 13, 2008
    [Chapter 1 review]

    1)Okay...you need a beta....badly - no offense - my spelling sucks and I have to type up a lot of things I write in WordPad....but...seriously....beta :I
    2)"He. lifted his head and smirked at the *URETHRAL* being in front of him." - I just want to let you know, the word "Urethra" is part of your urinary track, it's the thin tube the runs from the bladder down into the penis and helps transport urine to the outside. Maybe ethereal? But I busted out laughing when I read "urethral" - It was odd with all the passion you had with the story.
    3)....I don't know about you...but according to my gay best friends....being taken without being prepared...hurts like a b----h. Even with 2 fingers, they have told me it hurts, and you bleed if it's not stretched right. I know it's a "fan-fiction", but...I don't know but sometimes I like a little reality too.
    4) On the topic of my gay best friends, when one of them read this story they said they loved the passion the two had, envied the love, and was confused about timing. I quote, "Once the spot is hit, you’re over. An hour is TOO long of a time to be getting banged there without a c-ring to stop from cuming."
    5) Story was sweet sensitive, and cute - made me get all anime like and be ~^^~!

    Apart from this, I hope you don't think I hate it or you, I seriously liked the chapter and I can't wait for chapter two. I'm just in a really picky mood right now : sorry you got hit with a punch.
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  • From midnightrose on July 10, 2008
    Please update!!!!!!!!! This story deserves to be finished!!!!! Please!!!
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  • From Elftart on June 17, 2008
    love it
    keep going
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  • From gedebe on June 14, 2008
    i love it..so sweet n fluffy..im very sure Legolas will be preggers later..i'd prefer if he gives birth naturally instead of going tru a c-section like some other fics..i mean c'mon, mpreg is already impossible so lets's just make Leggy able to give birth naturally eh?n pls2 do finish the story.
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