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Reviews for Melethryn ned i Brennil

By : TAFKAB
  • From CL.Mustafic on March 29, 2016
    You'll have to excuse the AFF moderator thingy, I needed to clear my cache because though it said I was logged in as me, I wasn't but it was me that loved your story! :D
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  • From AFFModerator on March 29, 2016
    Hi there so I'm new to LOTR elf smut, thanks to BW and dafdes I was lead to this story and OMG am I glad I was!

    I don't know what it is about Legolas and Gimli but *wipes sweat from forehead* I love them together and you did it superbly. I have to admit I'm also a sucker for a little MMF so you hit almost all my buttons with this story *coughs* spanking *coughs* LOL I'm going to have to go and read your other story now because your writing is excellent and I'm completely hooked.

    CL
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 27, 2016
    Where do I begin?

    The voices, there's a good start. You've captured them all with exquisite flair. I could hear them clearly as I read. Legolas, so shy and untested, Gimli, full of passion and fierce need, and Galadriel, wise and farsighted, as well as sweetly wanton.

    The setting was so beautifully described, it was as if I was there in the mallorn, in the quiet dimness, watching the glorious tumult of the love play.

    And the sex. There aren't words expressive enough to capture how you made me feel. Every sensation, every kiss, or touch, or taste, every thrust was so exactly right that I'm in awe. This line just summed it up so well: Starlight and daylight, the two of them: mingled now in one sky. Just splendidly written, flawless and graceful as the three lovers in the story.

    Thank you, from the bottom of my heart, for this story.
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