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Reviews for The Hook

By : pip
  • From PyTerato on October 10, 2016

    You certainly have a talent for beautiful despair. The way you sculpt your impressive vocabulary lends itself so well to stories like this. I liked that struggle between being resigned to his fate, rebelling against it, and craving it all at once. The characters and their desires were made so real, relatable, and fantastically heinous all at once. It's understandable why Sauron (sp?) would be so fascinated by the elf's personality. I mean, how many centuries of this torture, and still that elf hadn't become even remotely jaded or bitter. He remained so sensitive despite everything he'd been through, and I think that just made it all the more tragic. 

    So fucking awesome. Well done. 


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  • From CL.Mustafic on March 29, 2016
    Okay so you were right, this was dark and depressing and I feel so much for poor Maglor. But you were wrong in thinking it's too much and that people shouldn't read it because it only made me want to go back and find the other story with this pairing and if not for you and BW raving about TAFKAB's new story, I would have done just that last night. Maybe tonight...

    (had to fix my goof so just redoing my earlier review as me)

    CL
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 28, 2016
    In a word, exquisite. I will never be able to forget the flawless music of your prose, and the delicacy of the evil you unleash, nor would I want to forget.

    Sauron is, as ever, darkness made flesh, vicious and contrary, the master of all lies. But Maglor, gods, he is extraordinary. He retains a curious innocence despite it all, and it makes every violation all that more dreadful to see. So terribly, tragically broken, and yet, yes. He still hopes, and he still loves. I can't imagine a more refined torment. Even that moment when he simply stops, and waits for death... he is still beyond remarkable.

    I bow to your talent, my dearest Pip. You have surpassed my darkest dreams.
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