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Reviews for Prince in Training

By : Pippychick_TAFKAB
  • From Joyeuse on August 12, 2016

    Legolas is walking on a narrow ridge between the devotion and love for his father and the seduction and enticement embodied by Erestor, and it is delightful to see how he is slipping from it to both sides.   
    It seems that Legolas is just a little restrained by guilt. I wonder if he will be able to surrender completly to Erestor, without the reassurance given by his father.  I hope so!

    Waiting for the next chapter...

    Thank you for sharing this story! 


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  • From ANON - Anon on August 07, 2016

    Ah, Legolas... he is beyond wonderful, isn't he? He is so responsive, and so obedient, but he needs to to be taken outside himself to truly enjoy it, and I wonder if he will ever be a truly submissive as Thranduil. Erestor is the consummate Master, however, and thanks to the insights I'm gleaning from your lovely "Taming the Twins" I can appreciate him much more now.

    And that wicked tease aqt the end! Now I can't wait to see what morning will bring...


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  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2016

    I'm all but breathless, thanks to the cliffhanger on which we've been left. Whatever will Legolas find in Erestor's room? I have so many notions, and I do hope some of them come to pass.

    Thranduil doesn't seem terribly chastened, does he? For all his punishmnt at Erestor's hands, I don't think the King of the Greenwood would have done a single thing differently. He's quite a handful, and it's clear Erestor hasn't kept him on a tight enough leash.

    But Legolas... what a vision he is, and so very sweetly submissive. I wonder if he'll find the proper steel to be able to master Thranduil. He shows glimpses of it, but he doubts himself, and his worth still. Let's hope this evening lets him know how very precious he is.

    Thank you, for an exquisite chapter!


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  • From ANON - Anon on July 08, 2016

    Ah, so Erestor shows his hand a bit here, and I must say, I was nearly as surprised as our sweet Legolas. I expected a bit more resistance from Erestor, but instead it was Legolas who was reluctant. I wonder, though, what Legolas will look for from Thranduil come nightfall. Absolution for enjoying Erestor's offer, or a possessive reclaiming of the young prince? 

    I'll be waiting happily for this to continue, my lovely and very wicked authors! :D


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  • From ANON - on June 29, 2016

    Oh my... 

    I really think that might be the best way to sum it up. I can't imagine.... or rather I can imagine all the mischief the three of them could get up to with Legolas's strength of will worn thin by sleep and warmth. And maybe just a bit by his father's touch. (Can't ever spell his name right)

    So anxious for the next chapter!! 


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  • From Joyeuse on June 28, 2016

    I like the twist this story has taken. I confess that, after reading chapters 17 and 18, I felt myself like Legolas must have felt; I hated Erestor!   Then I read "Taming the Twins" and I understood his role in "Prince in Trainining".  I guess that Erestor not only is revealing the submissive aspect of Thranduil, but he's also turning the sweet debauchery between Thranduil and Legolas into something more stern and darker.  And I love it!

    Such a morning it will be...

    I shall be waiting for the update of this delicious story (and "Taming the Twins", as well).


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  • From ANON - Anon on June 27, 2016

    There is something utterly charming about Legolas trying so hard to defend Thranduil from Erestor. Even when it's abundantly clear Thranduil wants what Erestor can give, Legolas still can't accept it. But Legolas isn't ready yet to give his ada what Thranduil needs and so Erestor has his place.

    I'm quite eager to see what the morning brings, however. Legolas is indeed very beautiful when he submits, and I can only imagine how Erestor would love to try the young prince. There's certainly no shortage of temptation here.

    I'll be waiting to see what daylight brings! 


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  • From ANON - Anon on June 17, 2016
    Right, Erestor has my back up, although I know Erestor was within his right to do what he did to Thranduil. I did, however, quite like Legolas reminding Erestor that he is Thranduilion, and not a shy thing who will back down because some elf of Imladris growls a bit. I'm glad he chose to wear his father's collar again, though.

    I will admit, I'll be eager to see what the discussion between Thranduil, Legolas, and Erestor will be like. I'm not certain I'll like Erestor any better at the end of it, but we'll see.

    Thank you, my lovelies! :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 15, 2016
    Ah, such lovely evil!

    It seems Legolas has met someone his father knows all too well, and someone his father is inclined to obey, perhaps? And this right after being seen by a servant indulging in a small game with Thranduil, in the dusty corners of the palace. Hm. I wonder if a certain long-time family retainer thought to interfere by sending for an elf he knew Thranduil would not defy? Ah, but I have a feeling what's between Thranduil and Legolas now is something neither will surrender. in spite of Legolas' little fit of pique. In fact, I'm all shivery thinking about the consequences of removing the collar.

    Utterly wicked, and wonderful! :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 14, 2016
    Somehow I missed a chapter, so this is for chapters 15 and 16, which are so gorgeous, and touching, and tender, I needed to read them twice.

    How hard it was for Legolas to submit as fully as Thranduil wanted. It was indeed perhaps too soon, and too much for the proud Prince, but I was very happy to see Thranduil willing to talk, and to allow Legolas time to recover himself. Galion is terrifically interesting in this story, since I think I agree with Thranduil. Galion isn't ready for this sort of servitude.

    But I do think Legolas has reached a deeper understanding of what it means to submit, and he's also tasted, just barely, the headiness of exerting his will over another. I'm eager to see how this unwinds.

    Thank you, for this glorious story!
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  • From AFFModerator on June 13, 2016
    Man, I didn't realize how far behind I was on this. Chapter 13 - Ah daddy riding to the rescue! I loved it and the end was absolutely perfect. I'm going to catch up on it tonight!

    CL
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  • From savoriesavorie on June 13, 2016
    so very good, I can't wait to read the update! good work, you two!
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  • From Joyeuse on June 12, 2016
    An intense chapter for an enrapturing story. I have been utterly enjoying it and it's getting better chapter by chapter. I congratulate the authors for you are both very good writers. With a delicious prose, you create beautiful and evocative scenes in a delightful mixture of sensuality and tenderness. I love everything about this story, its thread, its characters ... A seductive Thranduil, complex and dominant, an already not so innocent Legolas surrendering to his father and both surrendering to love and lust. Beau!

    Thank you for allowing us to immerse ourselves in this bewitching story. I can not wait for the next chapter!

    (Excuse me for my english as it is not my mother tongue)
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 10, 2016
    Such a powerful chapter, and glorious.

    Legolas has indeed truly discovered what it means to be Thranduil's, and he is right. There is no turning back now. He is forever marked by this moment, and nothing will ever fill the place that submission to Thranduil has created in his heart. Legolas is simply perfect; Thranduil is right about that.

    Thranduil's rage is equally marvelous, and I thought he exercised great restraint in his dealings with the man who dared to wound Legolas. It would have been oh so easy for the keen blade to slip, just a little, and bleed Edwen like the pig the poacher is. And Thranduil is right again. Who would miss such a piece of insignificant trash?

    I am looking forward both to Thranduil's meeting with Boromir, and to Legolas exploring this new stage of his training. Lovely, lovely tale... and lovely, lovely authors who make me so happy!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 06, 2016
    Oh, this was lovely indeed. Legolas is so very well loved by Thranduil, and it was quite exciting to see how Thranduil rushed to protect his precious son. It was even more exciting to see how well Legolas has learned, and how deliciously he submits to Thranduil. And all the lovely things in store for Legolas... I confess to a shiver of delight myself.

    Another perfect chapter, thank you! :D
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