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Reviews for Prince in Training

By : Pippychick_TAFKAB
  • From ANON - Anon on April 15, 2016
    For Chapter 1:

    A wonderful beginning, ominous and terrifying. I can only imagine what was going through their minds, although I do believe Thranduil would have been that calm when facing death. He's far too strong-willed to panic.

    But this line: "The ticking of the clock of eternity, echoed in the rhythms of body and breath: a miracle he had preserved against the greed of time." Just gorgeous! What a perfect sentence!

    You are both masterful writers and it shows in this brilliant collaboration.

    For Chapter 2:

    Ah, Legolas, so innocent and so eager to please, and look where it brings you... Thranduil is simply sublimely dominant.

    This line: "And he knew he had been claimed and broken and remade by the very elf who had created him." I am just breathless with how perfect this is, and I'm entirely hooked on this story.
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