Reviews for The Lost and the Hidden City

BY : pippychick & BronxWench


  • From ANON - wanderingaddict on March 02, 2017

    new chapter, same old AFF!

    I have to admit, I was a little surprised at how readily Glorfindel bottomed for Gildor! but you set it up really nice with Gildor disarming him beforehand with some of those reveals - especially that he's completley aware of Glorifindel's sneaking about and being not-so-stealthy. shoulda rolled some levels in rogue, glory-boy, instead of maxing out them fighter stats! 

    this was layered in their love and excitment for each other. having Gildor take control - but with Glorfindel being so readily willing about it - is like sort of... hmm it feels like you're revealing, here, the next step of their relationship, where there's a slight step away from their extremely romanticized, sort of very Arthurian mindset (super fitting for LotR of course!) and moving towards an actual... much more sustainable understanding of each other. they seem to have really reached a strong point, here, in what's created between the two if them. :)



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  • From ANON - wanderingaddict on January 27, 2017

    alrighty, up through chapter 5: gotta say I'm terribly amused by the two of them just wiling away a few decades doing nothing but boinking each other. personally I was pretending a few weeks had gone past between each chapter and, since elves move so damn slowly, they were taking their sweeeeeeeeet long time just eating, sleeping, sexing, then doing it again. haha lulz I really can't underscore enough how much I like having gay elves in LotR.

    hopefully in a concrit term, I'd say that it'd have been nice to get a little bit more of an intro into Gildor before running with him. it wasn't until chapter 3 that I thought to look him up because I'd conflated him as Glorfindel in BOTH places in my memory and so had just assumed he was an OC! Glorfindel had some nice nods to his accomplishments and unique status btw if some more of that had been woven in for Gildor it'd have just let me get a better handle on who he was right at the start. doesn't distract from my enjoyment as-is however!

    I gotta say chapter 5 and I am iiiiiitchin' to see Gildor just straight up murder Glorfindel's ass with whatever he has to. Glorfindel is so dom, such a grabby tease - it gets to me! I gotta see the tables turned! Go for it Gildor I'm rooting for you! tear that big warrior-elf ass apart! I bet he could take A LOT.

     



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  • From ANON - wanderingaddict on January 27, 2017

    BW I was talking to shadowknight and then decided to look you up and HOLY COW how is there only ONE review for this nuggety, sweet-chocolatey treasure of goodness??

    Hi other author, Pippy, I say the same thing to you as well. I've only just read the first chapter here but this sates a deep, thirsty need for the Tolkien world I always wanted but never actually had. Thank you both!



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  • From The_CL on October 14, 2016

    Okay, finally got around to reviewing this. Sorry it took so long. I have to admit, I don't know these two elves but with the two of you writing, I have to say, I don't care! So far so good and I'm sure this is going to just get better and better.

    On to the next chapter.

    CL



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