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Reviews for Bound (complete)

By : bluegold
  • From ANON - sinheart on June 18, 2005
    aragorn is such a SOB!!! u must really hate him. and poor legolas!! but i do love your storey i almost cryed at the end!! plus u have a few spelling errors that make your storey kinda hard to read.but i totaly understand if your computer sucks lemer butt.
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  • From ANON - anais on May 01, 2004
    noooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
    please you can't let the story end like that! please, i beg you! Don't let that big bully get away like that! we need some moralistic end, you know: like Elrond roasting Aragorn's entrails?
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  • From ANON - Mehla Seraphim on May 01, 2004
    That was an all around odd story. I did read the entire thing. Although I didn't enjoy it. Perhaps it was mostly the major amount of out of character behavior. It started to feel rushed as well. Not too planned out. Espescially the last few chapters.
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  • From ANON - Cibi on April 30, 2004
    How can that be the end?!!!!!!!!!
    You must make a sequel. PLEEEEASSSSSSE!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 30, 2004
    Cant u ehm....i dont know! U killed Thranduil. He done many great things, if u do a sequel cant u let the Valar send him back? Pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase?
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 30, 2004
    are you gonna do a sequel? I mean we want revenge. Kill aragorn! He's mean *sniffle*
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  • From ANON - LadyDrea on April 30, 2004
    EEEEEEeeeeeEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeEEEEEkkKKKkkKKKkkkKKK!!!!!!!!!I'm sooooo sad,Thranduil had to die!!!! *sighs* and I'm sad the fic is finished too.........T_T
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  • From ANON - JennL on April 30, 2004
    While I really did enjoy the story. Somethings just didn't flow right for me. The ending seemed choppy and kind of abrupt. My main problem is Thrandrail. O.k. so he loves Elrond , thats cool, but this is still the elf who would have beat legolas for making arwen cry. Not only that het he (elrond) literally choose to give legolas to aragorn and possible death to try to prevent his own daughter from choosing mortality. That just doesn't jive for me. Despite freeing the wrolly lly enslaved mirkwood elves in the end, Elrond was still kind of a dick and had no problem with them being slaves originally as long as it worked to his advantage.

    I really liked the premise of the story, but not entirely the exeon. on. I just don't see Thrandrail as being able to overcome Elrond rather asshole-ish behavior to marry him. The way you wrote him he just doesn't seem like he'd be able to immediatly come to terms with the sudden equality in a marriage; no more just ordering his lover around or the other elves for that matter.

    I loved the twins, arwen seemed a mite bit dumb, fellowship was great, just Elrond and thrandrail bugged me. Just don't see a happy shiny ending there (beyond the whole death part.)

    Keep writing. Good job.
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  • From Nileregwen on April 29, 2004
    oh no aragorn killed Thranduil!!! fantastic ending! I found the ending with Eowyn and Aragorn quite amusing! are you going to have a sequel?? *puppy eyes*
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  • From ANON - Yakkorat on January 30, 2004
    Just an ibittbitty comment: you describe Legolas in this chapter (4) as prone but prone means lying on the stomach. Supine means lying on the back.
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  • From ANON - bluegold on January 27, 2004
    Just occured to me to do this *shrug* Thanks everyone for the wonderful reviews and I hope you all will keeo enjoying it.
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  • From ANON - kirameki on January 25, 2004
    Nice chapter. Elrond dressed as a queen? Buahahaha. I'd *love* to see *that*. |^_^| And down with Aragorn!
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  • From ANON - Tanesa Etaleshya on January 13, 2004
    I have enjoyed your fic! Please keep writing more as I am eagerly awaiting your next chapter,suo see how Legolas fares with Aragorn- and by the way I hope there are more nasty scenes with him- can't help wanting to see Legolas abused just so that he can come out on top in the end. I think your story is great- I am currently writing my first fic of my own so I hope mine is as good as yours. Maybe I will be able to post some of it soon. Thank you fortingting Bound!
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  • From ANON - chibifae on January 10, 2004
    I really love Bound! Aragon is in big trouble now lol! please write more soon!
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  • From ANON - belle on January 10, 2004
    your idea is interesting, but in all honesty, i found it very difficult to get through the first chapter. you constantly switch tenses, and your flow seems to be quite irratic and, therefore, makes what you're trying to write, very difficult to follow. i also suggest that you mark this story as AU, for a couple of reasons, one being that the mirkwood elves are obviously not slaves, according to canon, and the other one being that i feel you have written aragorn completely out of character. i might try and get through the rest of this story, because, as i said, i do find the idea interesting and am slightly curious to see where you're taking it, and what you're doing with it.
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