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By : loveforelves
  • From NessaT on September 18, 2003
    It seems to me that your writing has improved somewhat (after the last few stories). You've inserted paragraphing, and that's always a good start! Keep bettering yourself, and i'm sure you'll be an accomplished writer.

    NessaT
    PS: You are 15? I'm not sure if you should be here but while you are, i'll say that you exihibit maturity. So that's a good thing too. Good luck for you future fic.
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