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By : mirasaui
  • From ANON - Dragonbait on January 26, 2014
    Brilliant!
    Once of the best LOTR fanfics I have read yet.
    Well written, edited and delivered.
    Thank you for sharing this gift, your gift, with us!
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  • From ANON - Ishy on March 31, 2005
    Okay, I love this and am dying to see more of it!! Please write some more, you've left it on a real cliffhanger and I really need to know what happens.
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  • From ANON - susan on September 03, 2004
    i love your story and i cant wait for you to update it again.
    PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON
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  • From ANON - seelenspiel on April 13, 2004
    wow! a magnificent story! i cannoit fit for more!
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  • From ANON - Toni N. on February 12, 2004
    Great story so far - thank you! But you need to reload chapter 26, as it is not there.
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  • From ANON - Mawgy on January 29, 2004
    Ok, well, I think I shall take your lead and also thank Lalaith Nienóri for her contribution, because I think the sub-plot with Vand is just amazing! I love how the villain is twisted into being the victim, and there is always two sides to every story, and though it does not excuse him for doing what he did, it does gain him much sympathy. Can't wait to see if his escape plans works or not. Though, I have a wish for Elves to learn to accept him and then he can be happy living in Imladris with ELvan friends. Though, somehow I don't see that happening, just want everyone to end up happy.

    Now, sorry, but I'm going to start whining about your major character here. LINDIR! MY GOD! First he claims to be selfish with what he has done in the past, yet he still does it in the present! How could he not expect everyone to come running after him? Maybe if he told everyone the truth then ran away, he could be clear of conscious that no one would want him. But doing so without a reason apparent to everyone is going to cause worry to everyone who knows him! Besides, lindir was only little and had his whole life ahead of him, of course he'd want to live rather than die, he still had so much to live for. Sorry, but he's just pissing me of right now. (But makes for one hell of a good angst story! Well done Mirasaui!). Besides, 1. she shouldn't have been eavesdropping, and 2. He shouldn't be listening to rumours and speculation as it is! Even if it is half true.

    Now, I've been thinking what this conversation could have been that Elrond, Glorfindel and Erestor had that they want to keep from Lindir, and, while this is only a guess, and is probably wrong, it's just what I'm thinking so far (don't correct me if I'm wrong, or tell me if I'ght ght as I want it to be a surprise of we find out, I just can't keep it to myself any more). I think that maybe Lindir's parents' bodies were found. And, as they were a long way away from where Lindir was found, maybe they think that Lindir didn't know they were dead (or something like that). Anyway, just a thought, and I can't wait to find out the real reason behind all the secrecy. And, Lindir, seriously needs to learn howtrustrust those around him, esp. Glorfindel. After all he has done for the minstrel the past few days, it's the least he could do.

    Anyway, loving this fic and 't w't wait for the next update,

    Luv Mawgy
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  • From ANON - Mawgy on December 13, 2003
    OH! Another brilliant chapter! However do you do it so consistently?

    Poor Lindir, it seems everything is his fault, according to him. He really needs a good ego boost, soon. But, luckily Haldir is there to make him feel a bit better, hopefully.

    I feel so sorry for Elladan and elrohir, they're just curious elflings wanting to know what's got into the adults. No need to send them to their room. Stupid Elrond. It's his fault for not hiding his feelings better!

    What is it with Elves and their pride? It's not like that's all there is! Or is it just a male thing in general?

    I must admit,ealleally like that half/elf person now that I've seen him through Lindir's eyes. Strange how a different perspective can change a person's opinion like that.

    Anyway, this is going wonderfully. I look forward to your next update.

    Luv Mawgy
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  • From ANON - Brin on November 18, 2003
    WOW! My heart is beating fast
    and screaming "yeah Glorfindel!!!"
    I can't wait to read what happens next.
    More please!
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  • From ANON - halandleg4ever on October 26, 2003
    I'm loving your story. I loved Haldir's story in the beginning, and it set up your story perfectly. Of course, I could never resist a story with Haldir, but I find myself liking Lindir just as much. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 26, 2003
    one thing that is a little off: the second word in the chapter. Market has a 'k' in it, you may want to fix up the chapter title, huh?
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  • From ANON - EAlhswith of Skye on October 22, 2003
    Excellent chapter. You write very well. Keep up the good work and please update soon. I love your story.
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  • From ANON - elf_pixie on October 22, 2003
    Hi, just wanted to say that I'm enjoying this story very much. I love the personalities of the characters,Haldir is a riot! I also love the Lindir/Glorfindel pairing, though any Glorfindel pairing I'm partial to!

    Thanks, keep writing more!
    elf_pixie
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  • From ANON - Mawgy on October 20, 2003
    NOOOO! Oh, just when Glorfindel and Lindir have each other, Glorf goes and gets himself into, quite possibly, a deadly situation! Stupid elf! Now, I know you're not gonna let him get hurt, (right? RIGHT?) but that won't stop me worrying. I mean, Tebring lost a leg and is fading, you won't give Glorfindel the same fate, wyou?you?

    Hehe, I liked the part of the cook almost putting Haldir in her lardar. Course, I'd put him in my bed.... but, everyone's different, I suppose.

    Anyway, please update soon, I just HAVE to find out what happens to Glorf. So loving this fic.

    Luv Mawgy
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  • From ANON - Ealhswith of Skye on October 19, 2003
    AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! Why do you guys insist on cliffhangers? Hurry up and update. I want to know what happens. Seriously though, your fic rocks! Keep up the good work and update soon.
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  • From Mawgy on October 19, 2003
    AAAAAH! Oh, that was just TOO beautiful for words! So hot and sexy, yet sweet and loving. And Lindir comparing Glorfindel to a mountain predator was just wonderful! I laughed when imagining Glorfindel pouncing on a piece of material like a cat would a mouse. It's not osmething everyone would write about, I give it two thumbs up, both for originality and humour.

    Sorry I haven't reviewed for ages, uni work has increased since I'm coming up tam pam period. I'll try to do better from now on.

    And, thanks for reviewing my fic, it's much appreciated.

    Just one thought. Now that Lindir and Glorfindel are Lovers and no doubt spend the rest of their lives together (and probably even after then too), has Lindir ANY idea as to what he should get Glorfindel?

    And, I'm starting to wonder, who did Glorfindel get? Is it possible he got Lindir's name? That would be so good if he did!

    Anyway, can't wait for the next update, plase let it be soon.

    Luv Mawgy
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