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Reviews for To Capture the Heart of a Warrior

By : islandwight

From ANON - Newtype on December 19, 2005
Sweet fic! I loved reading it even though it took me like an hour and a half to get through most of it. Please by all means do write more! I like it and well you have as of yet to state the whole Legolas and Gimli thing ansd well I want to know more so please plase write more!

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From ANON - CherryCoke on October 12, 2005
Okay, last review-I've finally finished! Okay first off, I am now sooo totally in love with Boromir and Pippin it can't be healthy, so thanks so much for that new obsession! lol Second, I like your OFC Miriel, she seems really sweet and I like that Merry got some too! hehe Third, I really, really, really want you to update on this story! PLEASE! I awesomely love it and it needs to be finished, pretty please? With Pippin on top? ;p And just so you know:

GREAT STORY!
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From ANON - CherryCoke on October 12, 2005
YAY! He's alive! *Does happy dance* Poor Pippin though having to suffer like that. I like angsty-Pippin, though I like it better when he's happy. On to the rest of the story!
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From ANON - CherryCoke on October 12, 2005
YOU DID KILL HIM!!! *Wails uncontrollably* Well there is obviously more to this story though since there is still about 15 chapters to go, so on I read...maybe he will come back to life somehow? Maybe with having to do with that fairy stuff? *Hopes really, really hard*
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From ANON - CherryCoke on October 12, 2005
The last piece of candy....yummy! And now I'm addicted! I LOVE this story! You're making me laugh and aww out loud and my family is starting to think I'm being even more odd! lol You really have a way with words you know, a real gift there. I also love all the funny moments-truly comical! I have a feeling since you like to follow basic canon somewhat, you're going to kill Boromir off aren't you? Noooooooo! Well I need to read and find out!
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From ANON - CherryCoke on October 12, 2005
Okay, well truthfully I was rather doubtful this (Boromir/Pippin) would work when I first began reading it, but I must say that by just reading 2 chapters so far that I think this rocks now! =D I am hurrying to read the rest of it now as I'm really hoping its as good as the beginning.
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From ANON - Yulara on June 03, 2005
Mae govannen!

First of all, let me tell you that I'm quite happy to have found this fic. I haven't read a Pippin/Boromir before. Now, I#m going towrite this review while I read the story - be prepared for a long one! (and I Do mean really LONG!)
Your description of how lovesick Boromir is in Ch.1 is nicely done, and the sex scene in Ch.2 is the most intriguing, sensual one I have ever read. Normally I don't like them at all, and in my own fics I can't bring myself to write one, but I enjoyed this more than just a little. Truth be told, if I had a partner, I wouldn't have stayed at my computer anymore, once I finished reading chapter 2. ;) And I don't seem the only one to think so, since Legolas was starting getting wicked thoughts about Aragorn.
The last line of Ch.3 was hilarious.
What Boromir did to Pippin in Ch.4 was...weird - oh okay, I didn't like it at all, although it's true, you don't go around telling people of your sex. But well...it's your story. �So this is Men. I must know for myself. I must know for myself the truth about Men�� - that's killingly funny ^^
And in the chapters after that, well, Aragorn/Legolas...it's just so funny!
The end of Ch.7 is sweet, truly lovely - I already asked myself if Pippin olny knew - excuse the language - fucking, and yes, it seemed he did... and then you make Boromir so gentle & tender. �I gave you what you wanted, my sweet. Now I must give you what you need." Awesome line! And the ending - huh?!
Now I've read Ch.8, and I must say, this fairy thing is great *g* At first, I thought WT*, but then I remembered the stories about the Tooks & the fairy blood. Cool someone involved this in a story. The little bit between Pippin and Gandalf was cute, I'm a sucker for Gandalf-Pippin interaction. �Please put your clothes on, I don�t care to lie next to a naked fairy.� - LOL!
Gandalf's explanation in Ch.9 why everyone likes Pippin is nicely done and logical, considering his fairy blood. A great role to play before the end, indeed. I hope in this AU he will save Faramir, too. That would be great, since that's one of my favourite things in the original book/film. Boromir's love saving his beloved wee brother ^^ "He's an innocent." I agree with Gandalf on that - Pipin has always seemed innocent to me, in the book and the films, more than any of the others (although his predatory nature when it comes to sex does slightly disturb this view - to me ;) Oh...now they bonded, how cute!
Ch.10: It's just so like the Hobbits to find something like wine in the middle of a forest ^^ �You look like a cat, holding down a kitten for a good wash.� - what a cute mental image! Aw, and now you've paired up Sam and Frodo, too. I only hope there won't be anything with Gimli *shudders*
Ch.11: Well, I like the fairy magic, but I like "just Pippin" even more, and I'm glad that Boromir asks him to do no fairy magic during their (for now) last time - and that Pippin is happy with it (God, I'm not making sense, am I? Right now I'm asking myself if you're annoyed about this unholy, novel-length review...;) And "poppet" is just such a fitting pet name for Pippin.
Ch.12: Pippins chattering about the Shire and Boromirs thoughts about that...aww, so beautifully sad, so true! "I watch him sleep and I see my sweet one, yet deep inside is a small stone on which my soul is shattered." - how do you manage to come up with such sentences?
Ch.14: "He was a fool and a freak and worse." Oh, no... Pippin-angst!!! Poor little one! (Can you tell I love when this happens? I'm all for angsty stories, even more so when there is some cute, little, innocent, frightened boy/Hobbit in it ^^) And again such a nice scene between Gandald and Pippin... I wondered whether or not the Boromir/Ring issue would occur, and there Gandalf comes and starts talking about it. I like how he makes the two of them look after and protect one another. I also liked the scene when Pippin comes and lies down with the dreaming Boromir (but you could have left out the sex this time, honestly).
Ch.15: Huh... poor Pippin! Er...I love seeing him like this, sick girl that I am. I think it's some kind of helper's syndrome many women have *sighs* always want to somehow get into the story and be the one who comforts them (oh, well, Boromir dies it quite nicely...^^) And a very clever strategy to make him snap out of it!
Ch.16: Oh my GAWD! Now you have me bawling like a baby...Boromir is just so...I WISH I COULD BE THERE! *lol* You manage to describe his terrible struggle quite lively and convincing. I love seeing men cry (in stories), even more so when they're supposed to be all strong, like Boromir. (*whispes* But - had there to be sex again? Yet again?)
Ch.17: OUCH! "Pippin had saved Faramir from a terrible death." - that's it? Disappointed. Severely. Ohhhh okay, this is all about Boromir and Pippin, I see *grins* Oh, now I'm satisfied - the end of the chapter was sweet and gentle, just as Faramir is ^^ (Normally, I'm a Faramir fangirl).
Ch.18: Mouth and eyes sewn shut...you are sadistic!
CH.19: Oh, Boromir is still alive! YAY!
Ch.21: Ouch! Gimly is in love with Legolas... well, I DO like this pairing, so I'm curious if there will develop something. -- WAH! SUICIDE?! No, Pippin, you fool of a Took!!!
Ch.22: Oh...oohh...Pippin is not dead. You have a very relieved woman sitting here! Oh, and now Boromir is alive, too, great. A very moving scene. And the obligatory hint at sex *shakes her head* *lol* If I was them I would think of anything but sex....honestly.
Ch.23: Last sentences by Aragorn: once again hilarious. You have a knack on finishing chapters funny ^^
Ch.24: Pippin DOES look just awesome in this uniform! Every time I watch the film, I find myself drooling over him, especially when he's wearing it! And a wonderful sex scene again (the second best after the very first one, to my mind).
Ch.26: "But truly, Pippin, it is your heart, your dear, innocent heart that makes you so perfect for my brother." - How many times are you going to make me *aaww*? You did it yet AGAIN!... "Insatiable", yes indeed - you are ;)
Ch.27: You know, so many authors never put in references to cannon in their AUs but you do, and I like it very much. Diamond of Long Cleeve - great you mentioned her!
Ch.28: The whole encounter with Miriel is cute! "A real live courtesan?" *giggles* Usually, I don't like OCs, but I do like Miriel. -- And now there's even a threesome, nice!!! So Pippin finally learns about the joys of being with a woman ^^
Ch.29: Awesome. How do you manage making ME like graphic things? �I want one! I want my own halfling!� *laughs* Well, there's still one available. Merry, I fear for thee!
Ch.31: Uh-oh, so the "being of age" is an issue here...bad move. I hope his father will give them his blessings. -- Pippins letter si so beautiful and sad. Good he never had to send it.

Er... now it's 2 in the night, and I'm sure you have gone mad, if you have read all of this, that is.

Namarie!
Yulara
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From ANON - Penny on January 26, 2005
So glad to find an update to this! Your writing is just so beautiful and sensual! I am quite addicted! And I will be looking forward to more! Soon?
Penny
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From ANON - breathless_girl on January 12, 2005
Wow!....

I have to say this is the best LOTR fanfic I ever read!!!!!!!!. I just started reading it and couldnt stop, you have a talent, please write more.

I had never thought of pipin and Boromir as a couple, but you wrote it wish such passion that I just get caught...

Excelent job =) =)
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From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2004
I don`t like the last two chapters, plain and simple: Those two are perfect for each other, they don`t need a woman in between. I don`t know why you had to put a woman in. Don`t get me wrong: I love and adore this story, it`s perfectly written and the feelings portraied are perfect, but there is no need for a woman. I`m kind of sad because of this turn of events. But still: I love your writing, keep going!! (I hope you get this right: I`m not flaming, just criticising... I`m German, so I hope my English isn`t too bad for you to understand.)
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From ANON - CathyAPA on July 11, 2004
I've only read part way through this, but I must stop to tell you how amazing this story is. Your tone, pacing and use of language suits the story perfectly Every story I read of yours is decidedly different from the others. You have your own voice, that is clear to see, but the uniqueness of each story just astounds me. I hope you continue to write more,
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From ANON - Carmen on April 07, 2004
ok now im mad at you. i read your story a couple five months ago, maybe more, and have been witing patiently for an update. and u havent yet you little buggar!!!!!!! i will kill you!!!!! this was one of the first fics ive read, and its probably my favorite. its addcting and if you dont update i'll hunt you down and steal pippen. lol. im just kidding i wont hurt you or anything, but its ridiculous now. stop messing around and add another chapter. im on my knees begging and groveling. *gets on knees* ppppllllleeeeaaaaassssseeeeee ghostie love can we work something out? like maybe you could add like a paragraph or something i dont kno. even tho u prbably think im some sort of crazy stalker freak could you at least email me and tell me if ur gonna continue w/the story? it would be very apreciated. thank you. and good luck writing!!!!!!
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From ANON - me on March 03, 2004
Increiblework. This boards in true greantess!
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From ANON - pervyhobbitmanlove on March 03, 2004
You have towrite more! (grovel grovel!)
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From ANON - bopipfan on March 03, 2004
GO GHOST! PLEASE!!! MORE!
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