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Reviews for Narcissist

By : loveforelves
  • From ANON - Anon on January 18, 2004
    love it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 18, 2004
    one of a kind!
    please continue! ^_^
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  • From ANON - TicTac on January 17, 2004
    Great read as always, bring on the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - sd on December 30, 2003

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  • From ANON - Sonsy on December 30, 2003
    Is this meant to be funny? Because it really is. I had to stop reading after the chapter where Orlando's house is broken into. I just couldn't take any more.
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  • From loveforelves on December 28, 2003
    I'm glad you all like it :D
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  • From ANON - Cait on December 13, 2003
    PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THE STORY! I'm hooked on it and it must continue. Maybe you could do a raping or orli cheating on legolas or the opposite. Just keep writing.
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  • From on December 13, 2003
    It's not a bad story. The idea is very original and rather fun (although you've run in to too many cliches for my liking).

    Your writing is definately coming along. I suggest you try to be a little more descriptive of certain situations.

    Good luck!
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  • From loveforelves on December 13, 2003
    thnx for the help considering the "encore''
    but however i do meant you taste and not you are, since Orli was tasting his body so i leave that how it is, i apreciate u tried to help though :)
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  • From ANON - Pretty Lilith on December 12, 2003
    Hi !

    I enjoy your fic.

    May I help you ? I am French girl.

    For more, it's "encore" and no "plus"... encore (again) is the correct word for that...

    you taste so good, hum, your french is not correct... and we don't say it... you taste so delicious... so in french... tu es délicieux (you are delicious)....

    Bye

    Li
    Pre
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  • From ANON - Cait on November 14, 2003
    OMG! How could you end it there? I was gettinto ito it and then u stopped. WHY???!!!
    You have to upgrade soon!!!!! go now! TYPE! TYPE NOW! jk lol
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  • From ANON - Cait on November 11, 2003
    Ahhh! How could you end it there? why? why? why? Now you have to upgrade soon! GO NOW! UPGRADE! Love how the story is going by the way. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - lovingelves on November 01, 2003
    Thank you for the reviews, it makes it much more fun to continue writing :)
    will update soon
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  • From ANON - jennifer on November 01, 2003
    aww this story is so cute

    you should continue
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  • From ANON - Cait on October 30, 2003
    Thanks for updating so soon but why did u post the same story 3 times? Its probably not your fault but upgrade soon. The story is getting really good.
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