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Reviews for Underneath it all

By : ladyazmodan
  • From balrog on June 19, 2008
    This was a sweet story. Although I disagree with what Thranduil did, Elrohir took up the reins. It's amazing how a little life in Imladris will change people. Nice ending.
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  • From ANON - Shivawn on January 01, 2005
    Since I have only read the first chapter...I'm not sure about the rest of the story...but I think, if this was a song-fic "Forget It" by Breaking Benjamin would be a good one...at least for this REALLY good chapter...I love the beginning of the story...angsty in its own way...I love it so...and since it's completed (I think) I don't have to wait for any updates =)
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  • From ANON - Az on March 01, 2004
    WOW kirameki, i am honored i kept you from sleeping :) i tend to do the same myself, so i know that a fic gotta be catching to do that to you... im SO SO glad you liked it

    Neldie & halandleg4ever ; i hope you like the sequel too


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  • From ANON - kirameki on January 29, 2004
    Just so you know this is the first Mpreg I've ever read, and was surprised how much I enjoyed it.
    Lets make a check list of all the things I liked.
    -The point of view you told it from was awesome, because it was like we were going through what our poor little male elf was going through. I cried several times.
    -I loved how you portrayed ir'ir's brothers. They were so cute.
    -And Elrohir was extremely sweet. I like Elrohir shown like that, though normally I wouldn't be happy with how ELladan is portrayed through the first half, it works well for the story.
    -I also loved Legolas' denial about the baby. Like how he won't admit it consciously as more than a *thing*, but when he's not really thinking he treats it as the precious gift it is.
    -the mood swings were great. Always perfect timing. |^_^|
    Such a touching ending. I'm glad that *he* was the father. (don't want to give it away to someone checking the reviews who hasn't read it yet.) it just seems so fitting. And good luck with your own new baby. |^_^|
    Yeah that's it. I think I'll have to check out the sequel now. First some mucedededed sleep. G'night. (OH and I sacrificed staying up 3 hours past my bed time just to finish reading this. Damn, I'll only have 3 hours of sleep before my college class, but oh well. It was worth it.) Um, yeah, that should be taken as a compliment. |-_-|
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  • From ANON - neldie on December 15, 2003
    i'm so sorry it's over! now i have to read the sequel! that is absolutely the sweetest story i've ever read in my entire life! oh, Amcar has so many daddies. that's wonderful! i love it! Elrohir's the best, i love him.
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  • From ANON - halandleg4ever on November 23, 2003
    Wow, I don't usually like mpregs, but I really enjoyed this story. And I'm so glad the baby was Haldir's. Although it sounds like now, the kid has more father's then he'll ever n I I'm looking forward to the sequel.

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  • From ANON - Azzy on November 16, 2003
    yes i will include thranduils reaction, and the possibility of more kids, the secuel have a mpreg warning too :P im SO glad you liked it thanks for your kid words :)
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  • From ANON - ammunett on November 16, 2003
    Awwwww... This story actually made me cry. I am so glad you are doing a sequel! I cant wait to see how Legolas tato mto motherhood. I can just imagine little Amcar running round as a todler, driving them all up the wall (except his favourite uncle Glorfy of course!). Any plans to involve Thranduils reaction to having a grandson in the next one? Or whether or not Legolas can have more children, and if so why? Keep up the good work!
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