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Reviews for Tithen dulin

By : Mystkyten
  • From ANON - giggle on December 07, 2003
    I am so sorry that you have been ill. I have gotten caught up on a lot of fanfiction because my entire family has that lousy flu and I have complete control of the computer. They prefer stupid TV. HA.
    We even had flu shots but they don't work against this kind. I hope you didn't/don't get this because with your asthma it would be a nightmare.
    Glad you are better now and you feel up to writing and posting. I look forward to reading. L in a fatherly mode is very fun. giggle
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  • From ANON - Teri on December 06, 2003
    I most definitely want you to continue this story. But I would rather you be in good health first. I also have asthma and I know you need your rest. Health first, then story.
    Take C
    Te
    Teri :):):)

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  • From ANON - giggle on November 24, 2003
    OOh! Bad person, elf, whatever. Slap him silly and then coat him with tar, feather him and run him out of town, the woods, something.
    Poor T, and poor L who is going to learn something about his family very soon that will be a big shock.
    I like the long lost family secret plot. So much anquish and I am into that pretty seriously.
    Can't wait for the bad guy to get his. I prefer a long drawn out chase, lots of gritty dialogue, much angst and then having nature in one of its many forms, spiders, orcs, lightning, falling into a raging river, well you get the drift coming down on the bad guy to illustrate even nature and the divine is out to get the slimeball. I look forward to what you and other readers come up with.
    I usually don't read this type of story about humans and elves but it was a slow day and I have come to like your rendering of T and L very much. I don't mind T being a little hot headed and not open to much persuasion but not mad as a hatter. Well usually, if he is mad as a hatter it has to be for a really good reason. And it is nice if the reason is finally explained.
    Thanks for the new chapter and I look forward to more. giggle
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  • From ANON - LeggieGirl on November 23, 2003


    When is chapter 5 published, want 2 know wat happens 2 the little girl with the bad elf.
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  • From ANON - Debbie on November 23, 2003

    Hi, love the story very good so far. When is the little girl going to grow up? hopefully soon. When's the next update? can't wait.
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  • From ANON - Cait on November 21, 2003
    OMG! NOOO Dont hurt her. Please. Please dont let that be the king, let legolas or the king come and rescue her. Please update soon. The story is fabulous.
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  • From ANON - Cait on November 20, 2003
    Aww! This is such a sweet story. Please comtinue. You are doing aulouulous job. later.
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  • From ANON - Debbie on November 20, 2003
    I just wanna say, I'M LOVING IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It says that it is going 2 have Hot sex in it does that happen to Legolas/and that little girl when she's older? Hope so keep it up.
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  • From ANON - louise_oblique on November 20, 2003
    Ahhhhhhh! very very cute! looking forward to next chapter. great fic

    huggs
    louise
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  • From ANON - louise_oblique on November 18, 2003
    That is so sweet, fantastic
    huggs
    louise
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  • From ANON - Voxian on November 17, 2003
    Wow, cool! It's so... Pretty! I can't wait for the next chapter!

    Vox in Sox


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  • From ANON - Teri on November 16, 2003
    Nicely done! I can't wait to read more. I really hope Thranduil's heart warms to the child.
    Take Care,
    Teri

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  • From ANON - JastaElf on November 16, 2003
    Hi Mystkyten,

    For a first fic this is very good! I think you write very well, and have a good handle on Legolas; his caring for the little child was very nicely done, and his outrage at what the Orcs did was nicely handled. His loyalty to the child he has rescued is quite nice too.

    I have one little suggestion... Please show us, in future chapters, why Thranduil hates Humans so much that he would roar his fury in the face of a terrified, bereaved child, and refuse to give it sanctuary. You hint at the end that he seems to be fighting within himself over the issue; I look forward to knowing why. Did Humans have something to do with the death of his wife, perhaps, or his mother? Does seeing a child bereaved by Orcs--even if Human--bring back memories so awful that he can't handle it? And why can't he, as he is an elder Elf with lots of experience dealing with these issues?

    I have a problem with stories where Thranduil is made into a bad guy, you see, and would be most distressed if you chose that as an easy route to showing Legolas as a Really Nice Elf (tm) :-) We already KNOW he's a nice Elf, and don't need a Bad Elf to make Legolas look good... :-) So please consider giving us some really good, carefully thought-out reasons why Thranduil has reacted like this. And maybe further down the line, the little child could worm her way into aff affections? Most adult males are absolute suckers for little girls, no matter what species of male the Male is... (grin) It might be kinda cute to see her have a nightmare about her mother's death, and go running looking for comfort--and run into Thranduilkneekneecaps... he might be annoyed at first and then unable to resist her tear-stained little face.... and Legolas might find them later sitting in front of the fireplace in the King's study, both asleep, with Tithen Dulin cuddled in the King's arms... :-)

    Anyway, it's your story, so do with it as you must--those are just some ideas from a Thranduil fan and long-time fanfic reader/writer. I think you have made a very fine beginning indeed; your "voice" as a writer is uniquely your own, and you handle dialogue pretty well for a firstfic. I look forward to seeing where you go with this!
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  • From ANON - louise_oblique on November 16, 2003
    Very cool, looking forward to next chapter

    huggs
    louise
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  • From sivan325 on November 16, 2003
    It's look very promise so far, please update soon.

    Not bad for a shot, go on, and update soon.
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