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Reviews for Mending a Heart and the Tie that Binds

By : McKennaEspenshade
  • From ANON - Setare on June 07, 2004
    Ahhh! Thank you for this new gorgeous chapter!!! I´m loving it. Please more! And hopefully soon!
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  • From ANON - Azzy on June 07, 2004
    OMFG! i ought to seek you up and give you a woop-ass for that cliffie - HAHAHAHA.... j/k - Amazing job as always hon :) - cant wait for the next chappy.
    and BTW, king pup and Elrond are adorable *smiles*
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  • From ANON - Kat on May 08, 2004
    Hehehe! I liked the dashes of humour thrown into this chapter! ^_^ They were a welcome change from the scary ending of chapter 9. I most enjoyed the Season Berries *cackles* At first, I thought something really was wrong with Elladan, that something was hurting him due to the dream, but when it was revealed it was the berries I laughed =D Silly elf, putting things into his mouth before he knows what they are, hahaha. And the mudball fight at the end of this chapter was classic. Mud fights seem to be a bit of a trend in Rivendell, eh? Not that that's a bad thing of course, it's rather amusing! ^.^

    And...and..and, the Glorfindel and Haldir... why oh why do you torture me soooo? *wails* You know you want to get those two together, you know you do! And so do I! Waaah, pleaseeee, what happened to this bum feeling thing? *whimpers* Wow, you're making this torture for a Glorfy/Haldir fan such as myself. Sheer torture! Although, however killing you are, I must say that the tension you build between them is riveting. I can cut it with a knife, look see! *cuts a slice of tension and eats it* Mmm.. yummy ^_^ Well, I'll keep hoping things evolve between them. I knoooooow Glorfy (not Glory like I just wrote XD) wants Haldir. Oh yes. *cackles*

    Ahem, well yes. That's my ranting over. I really do keep checking back here every day, jto mto make sure I'm not missing an update. I love this fic so much! Your excellent writing always keeps me interested =D Keep up the superb work, my friend! Keep it up! 'Cos I'll keep reading!
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  • From ANON - HHS on May 04, 2004
    Whew!You really scared me!I really thought that Elladan hurt Legolas.You got me.
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  • From ANON - anette on April 27, 2004
    you are really a gifted author, but do you want to kill us? please continue as soon as you can!!!!!!
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  • From ladyazmodan on April 24, 2004
    oh yay! that was SUCH an amazing chapter! wow you just saved my weekend :)
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  • From ANON - Setare on April 23, 2004
    Did I wrote bad cliffhanger? Sorry, I meant EVIL, because I think you like to torture the readers with it. Don´t you?
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  • From ANON - Setare on April 21, 2004
    GREAT new chapter (and a very bad cliffhanger) Please continue soon!!! PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - HHS on April 19, 2004
    That was only a dream right?
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  • From ANON - Kat on April 19, 2004
    Wow! Such a turn for the books! O_O That last paragraph had my eyes widening, I've never seen Elladan so scary! I'm really anxious to see what the hell is going on, because it's giving me the jitters, eheh ^^;; Crikey, this chapter had a lot of feeling in it, and it was great to read, apart from the obvious uneasiness during certain parts *cackles evilly* That was just excellent. I really liked the demonic twist to things at the end of the chapter, as opposed to all the pleasure that it had been about. (which, by the way, was very, very, veeeery hot *sizzles* Hehehe!). I'm just hoping that the whole Elladan-Beast thing is some sort of dream or something o_o Otherwise, I'd be afraid XD *cue spooky music*
    Welleat eat update! This fic seems to be getting more and more suspense filled everytime I read! And still waiting for that all important Glorfindel/Haldir turn *giggles* Hope that comes about! *__*! Hehe, but fabulous work my friend, keep it up! 'Cos I'll keep reading! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Luthi on April 19, 2004
    Sorry i dont want to be rude but i hate the end of the chapter. i don't know what is going to follow but i have honestly to say that your story is not going better with each chapter.

    dont missunderstand me, i loved mending a heart, it is my favorite story! i cannot tell you how much ie ite it! but now, i thing you should have stopped with the first part, for you are disenchanting your own story. your style to write was nearly like tolkien himselve but now i isn't any longer. sorry english is not my native language and i would like to explainbetter what i mean, but i cant. maybe you want to write back, you have my address, so feel free to do it, i wold like to talk to you. i know how hard it is to write a chapter and than comes a stupid bad speaking girl and tried to tell you, she hates it. it's just my oppinion, and because of curiosity i'll read the following chapters, but im sad that it goes this way with your story!

    take care of you luthi
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  • From ANON - anette on April 18, 2004
    I really love your work! Now I am longing for the next chapters! Please I can't bear it any longer! Help me and give us more, please!
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  • From ANON - ashley on March 24, 2004
    no. you ended that there...i have this sick feeling in my stomach. great story. i dont want it to end with legolas losing ellaran. in fact i think you should end it right there. this story can only end in pain. and i dont want to be sad.

    great grammar and spelling. i have extreme happiness towards your beta. if you have no beta i simply bow before you.
    i like the story line. its clear and the twists are not confusing and unreal. scary as it may seem, i could understand the twists after reading them.
    the characters all stick to one personality. there are no changes in the persons that are not simply a different emotion or caused by something.
    i like the h and g idea. i have trouble with names so i will leave it up to you to know who i mean. haldir and g (ancient guy, knows about the moon evidently).
    you havent babbled and repeated yourself. i actually enjoyed the enceence structure, which means that you have imagination (not that i couldnt alread guess that).

    thank you for this wonderful read. i think i want you to continue, but i really dont want to see legolas lose another. i just couldnt.

    respectfully,
    ashley
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  • From ANON - Azzy on March 16, 2004
    YAY, goodie a new chappy... but you did leave with quite the cliffie there..

    and me confused, i think i need to reread or something, cuz i cant remember a orc.. :/
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  • From ANON - Kat on March 15, 2004
    Jesus Christ! You really know how to put suspense into play! o_o That last line that Elrohir stated before the chapter closed made my eyes widen, I keep thinking '..huh?? Die?? *wail*'. You do these things to me, heehee. And wow, such a great chapter, this was WELL worth the wait! The length was amazing, and even more so was the content, you really are so talented at writing! You manage to put descrip int into this fic that really gives me a mental image of the surroundings. From the descriptions you gave of the inner part of Gaidon, I was able to conjure up a visual easily, which really added to the story ^_^
    Also, the first section with Thranduil being a little crude when discussing Glorfindel and Haldir made me smile; I never knew he could be that dirty *grin* That little bit of character added humour to the chapter which was a pleasure to read. Glorfy's blushing gave me a really cute image ^.^ I'm still rooting for Haldir and Glorfy to get together, all the way baby! =D
    Towards the end of the Gaidon section was intriguing, with the twins being mistaken again for gods. Poor guys don't know what to make of it, eh? Heehee!
    Wow, loved this chapter, every bit of it. So much seems to happen within each update, and I'm always checking back with anticipation to see if you've updated! Yeah, I'm that eager to read the next installment! ^_^ Your writing is just so enchanting that you've hooked me. Keep up all the fantastic work, and here's to hoping you update soon with another rapt and exciting chapter!
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