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By : Shanastay
  • From ANON - anonymose! on April 25, 2004
    Pretty good!! i thik its good!
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  • From ANON - whimseyrhodes on April 25, 2004
    I must concur with AHSmith, two separate points of view allow the writer to completely engulf the character of the chapter, otherwise, it would be half-hearted and rather lengthy to distinguish between which character is thinking what. A truly unique new way to approach this story, and Hazzah to Mistress Shanastay for yet more heart-racing mind-numbingly pleasurable reading. MOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!
    p.s. I'm very glad you are no longer wandering...best of luck in all you do!

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  • From ANON - elizabeth on April 25, 2004
    oh my god! you are so good!! you must have had a lot of experience. haha. and those techniques are wonderful, my fiance and i tried a few and they worked miricles!
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  • From ANON - A.H.Smith on April 25, 2004
    I just had to leave another note... sorry Katherine, but I disagree completely. What makes this story work in such a tantalizingly good way IS the separate points of view being in separate chapters. Otherwise, there is no rope to pull us to the next chapter. Each POV has its own unite sensuality that you crave to see the next side of the story just as much as you do the next set of "action" so to speak :). what you suggest Katherine may be a pnal nal preference, but is certainly not the standard or gold seal of a fine writer. Good style matches its story, and I think that this story is more than good :) (Please please please update hon :))
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  • From ANON - Katherine The Celt on April 25, 2004
    I like the playfulness and humor. I normally like fluff, but not necessarily this time. I'm sorry if that sounds harsh, just being honest. I don't like how each scene has two chapters, one for each point of view. A good writer incorporates both points of view together to make a flowing piece. I hope one day you will consider it. :)
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  • From ANON - Amazed on April 25, 2004
    Holy shiz...PLEASE UPDATE!! This is awesome! I need to know what happens!! please!
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  • From ANON - Serene Ice Mage on April 25, 2004
    I love this, please update soon! I can't wait to see what's in store for legolas!!
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  • From ANON - Lady Undomiel on April 25, 2004
    Whoo-hoo! all i can say is great chap, can't wait for the next, and I must compliment you on the point of view changes, they're great for the story.
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  • From ANON - JadeDragon (JadeDragon29@hotmail.com) on April 25, 2004
    By the gods I wish i were her! You're good! REALLY REALLY GOOD! Glad to see you're back. I enjoy reading this, again and again and again and again, (I think you get the idea). Great storytelling, and I love how you switch between both view points, really creative.
    I WANT MORE PLEASE? (yes, I'm on my hands and knees begging you to write more.)
    JadeDragon

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  • From ANON - A.H.Smith on April 25, 2004
    Have mercy and post the next 2 chapters :-D :-P ;-). Amazing. I can say very little else at the moment, sentient thought is a bit beyond me (hehe)
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  • From ANON - Interested on April 25, 2004
    this is good, nice to see the more playful, human side of legolas. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Starz n Moonz on April 25, 2004
    WAS an active member of ffnet. But i will pervail and get my rights as a writer back!
    Anywayz . . .
    o.0, GOOD *LORD* THAT WAS GOOD! My face is officially flushed! Good, very good! In MANY a way!
    More now!
    Please!

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  • From ANON - miroku-2/22 on April 25, 2004
    Ah! Need more now! Update soon...losing...control...AH!
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  • From ANON - uhhh. . . . I have no name on April 25, 2004
    you must have some God-given talent because that . . . that was . . . good, it was good, because it was tasteful, and yet . . . good, okay I'm going to stop talking before I sound like a total idiot, update soon!
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  • From ANON - RedHandedLillian on April 25, 2004
    E! yey! please continue! so super good! post the next one!
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