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Reviews for The Crux of the Problem

By : Shanastay
  • From ANON - ladyjouster on July 25, 2004
    Well, first I love all of the stories you're doing. But I have to admit I prefer Legolas to Haldir.
    But either way I will continue to read and enjoy your tales.

    How about leaving her with the twins?

    LJ
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  • From ANON - kwannom on July 19, 2004
    I'm sure your wonderful fictions are going to be a great success around here. I love the two songs you chose for the latest chapter of The Crux. They are wonderful and I know them by heart. They set the mood of the scene perfectly. This is my favorite story of all that you have written, as I already told you, and people who are fond of Haldir should read it for sure. Please, keep doing this wonderful job!
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  • From ANON - kwannom on July 19, 2004
    I'm sure your wonderful fictions are going to be a great succarouaround here. I love the two songs you chose for the latest chapter of The Crux. They are wonderful and I know them by heart. They set the mood of the scene perfectly. This is my favorite story of all that you have written, as I already told you, and people who are fond of Haldir should read it for sure. Please, keep doing this wonderful job!
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  • From ANON - the earuideuide on May 02, 2004
    Well, you've done it again. Every time I am convinced that there simply cannot be a better sex scene, the next chapter gets publish and I am blow away *fans self*. I am loving this story! Janessa and Haldir are so incredibly intense. I am generally a Legolas fan but they are so good together I am hoping that Haldir wins. Of course I haven't yet read abour Legolas and Janessa being togther in Me (hint hint hint update Twisted soon!). Seriously though, you are one of if not the best erotic writer I have encountered on the web. Keep up the good work.

    the earth guide
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  • From ANON - Elendili on April 25, 2004
    Oooohhnew new chapter! I love it! I thought poor old Haldir was gonna get dumped, but maybe not! Again - this was so well written - you know when you read something, and you can picture it so perfectly? You don't notice you are reading the words? That's what your writing is like. Also, I never liked Savage Garden, but I am gaining a new appreciation for them!!
    Thanks for the chapter!
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  • From ANON - Talasi on April 25, 2004
    Wonderful chapter! I wish I was better at writing reviews. I sometimes feel I don't do the story justice. I loved the part where she followed the water droplet down his body. What a luscious visual *sigh* And I quote Sonia "that just slays me." The way he waited for her to finish her appraisal of him before drying off, not afraid to let her drool to her heart's content...completely comfortable in his perfect nakedness. *drool.......swoon.....THUD*

    Seeing Haldir come to the reationtion that he loves her and then voicing it in song was yet another very intriguing side to the arrogant Marchwarden we love so much. Perfect songs for every occasion, as usual. //Harder to Breathe indeed// LOL. Is it hot in here? I think it's hot in here. I feel another THUD coming on.

    Having her break down and nearly fall apart at that time was somewhat painful to read, but necessary. I definitely agree with the twins, and Haldir would wan want her keeping anything like that from him. Love the "nancing" comments regarding Legolas.

    Your poem gives me goosebumps no matter now many times I read it! Amazing!

    Talasi
    Haldir Worshiper, Wanton Elfbanger, and Keeper of Erestor's Heart
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  • From ANON - Gypsy on April 24, 2004
    M'lady Shana,
    I have been absorbing your fics Twisted, Crux, and Two Much. I say absorbed because to call it simple reading is a vast understatment, my apologies for not reviewing in the past, But decided that I would just simply have to tell you how much I love your writings.
    the writings are whitty emotional, suspenseful, and totally enjoyable to the mind's feast.
    I like how you are making the three separate stories into their own story.
    I hope that you keep writing and gifting up with these treasures of your imagination.

    Sincerely
    Gypsy.

    P.S. I heard a rumor that you would be writing a story with Jan and Good Ol' Glorfindel? I hope so, there just are not enough fics out there with that beautiful elf.
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  • From ANON - sweetazzhoney on April 24, 2004
    this is pretty good, i hope to see more.
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  • From ANON - ACE on April 24, 2004
    I love this story! please leep it going!
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  • From ANON - thala (NSI on April 24, 2004
    I can't believe you updated!! I'm so happy! I thought when you said that you were homeless we would never get to read anything from you ever again! I'm glad you've found a new home! No one should go without a roof over their head. Thanks for not forgetting all your readers with your hectic life, and take all the time you need in updating!
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  • From ANON - KnowInsight on April 24, 2004
    *hugs* I'm glad your so happy luv.
    Thanks for that. *smirks*
    As always I look forward to more of your work. =)
    Cheers.
    Am ^_^

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  • From ANON - Miss Independent3 on April 24, 2004
    Hey! awesome chapter upadte as usual. As if I've comeexpeexpect anything else from you! lol. how in the worlld do you keep multiple stories going at the same time? sheesh. I'm so glad your not homeless anymore. you had me worried there for awhile. well, I'll be wng fng for your next update, ttyl! --Mel(Miss Independent3)
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  • From ANON - Princess Shido on April 24, 2004
    Sex in ballet shoes...I'll have to try that.;)
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  • From ANON - Alex on April 24, 2004
    I need to read more!
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  • From ANON - babmidnight on April 24, 2004
    I like how Janessa was dancing in the fic. I could see it in my imagation. I must say tho whe when Haldir wanted to dance, I thought he really wanted to dance. Should of known that it would not be dancing! :) I like Centerstage too, which made this chapter even more enjoyable. Wonder if you can burn a dvd :) lol
    Brenda (only pierc.no .no tattoos)

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