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Reviews for The Crux of the Problem

By : Shanastay
  • From ANON - Your Worshipfulness on April 24, 2004
    I really like your story, it is very interesting and the writing is exemplary. I actually like the piercings and the tattoos, though I don’t have any myself. The amount of body art that she has makes the sex scenes more interesting and the reason for them helps to give your character more dimension. Keep up the good work.
    ~Your Worshipfulness

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  • From ANON - Miss Independent3 on April 24, 2004
    hey,
    I dunno whats w/ all these idiotttintting on your case about crap. They're fricfricken idiots. Don't take it personally k?
    And whats w/ all the tattoo and piercing stuff? What's wrong w/ tattos and piercings? I've got my belly pierced but I don't have any tattos. But that's just cause I'm an athlete anmetimetimes I have to wear costumes that show alot of skin and I don't want to have a tattoo showing. It's not like I dont want one.
    I think all your stories are great! Maybe you might want to finish your first one before you finish the spin-offs, but that's your desicion not mine. I know how you feel, I love to write, but I haven't figured out how to post anything on this damn website. It's like, in the middle of one story, I get this idea for another and off I go! it's kind of funny. So, don't feel down or anything, I think you're a great writer!

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  • From ANON - heiders on April 24, 2004
    that was absolutely fantabulous! i love your stories (all of them) and really like your technique. you weave love, lust, a little angst and some mental battles in to create this gorgeous story.
    can't wait for elladan and elrohir's dance. how are you going to get janessa and haldir apart? from the way he is holding her now, he may never let go!

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  • From ANON - Babmidnig s on January 24, 1920
    I see you've written another good chapter. :( *pouts* Though I still want to know what the 'sandwish' was about with Janessa and the twinhe she scene with Haldir carrying Janessa away when he got her out of a tree with her cursing in different languages... now that was funny...now I have to wonder what Legolas thought of that one!! :)
    Brenda

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  • From ANON - Aranel3 on April 24, 2004
    *big smile*
    rough and raw, always the best.
    Catching flies, just imagining it now..hehehehe

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  • From ANON - babmidnight on April 24, 2004
    good chapter. I liked the idea with galadriel's dress. Certainly sounds pretty. and for Janessa...well doesn't surprise me that she wears leather for a party. :) So now you need to post more...so we can find out what those two are planning.
    Brenda

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  • From ANON - Mesopotamia on April 24, 2004
    *still blushing from previous mistake* lol. I love that Garbage song! In fact, I was blasting it yesterday in my car. :) Another wonderful, steamy, passionate chapter. You are the queen, my dear.
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  • From ANON - Fallen Angel on April 24, 2004
    I feel bad for Legolas, tell me will he come back? Why not just turn this into a L/J/H fic?
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  • From ANON - Miss Independent3 on April 24, 2004
    col. very unique storyline. I really like it.
    it's cool how you've made this little 'side story'
    from twisted road to life.

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  • From ANON - Thala on April 24, 2004
    REALLY! what do those two have in store for Celeborn and Haldir!??! I can't wait!
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  • From ANON - babmidnight on April 24, 2004
    oh that was good. :) I think the next chapter will be real nice. Want to know how those two ar dressed. Nice way to bring Haldir back to life from his day dreaming. :) talk to you later
    Brenda *who falls asleep on floor all energy used up on laughter and picking on haldir with shanastay*

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  • From ANON - Thala on April 24, 2004
    This story makes me want to giggle, very much lol! You write really well...I'm not allowed to write anything like this...mostly because o-auo-author won't let me, but again because I have no idea how to write stuff like this. Anyway, good job, it was really fun to read.
    -Thala

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  • From ANON - the_earth_guide on April 24, 2004
    My Lord woman! This is incredible. You are a very talented writer. Your visuals are so intense it's like being right there ;).
    I think I am in love with your Haldir. Athough, poor Legolas. I can't wait to read the scenes of Janessa and Legolas to see how their relationship compaires to her's with Haldir.
    the earth guide

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  • From ANON - Phoenix Lumen on April 24, 2004
    Please write more soon
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  • From ANON - Andrea on April 24, 2004
    I'm enjoying the sex scenes - if you ever decide to write romance novels, yofinifinitely have a corner on the sex parts.
    I also read your response to the reviewer who criticized your writing. I have to say, I understand that you would be upset that someone doesn't like your main character, but I don't think it's right to curse that person and sick all your fans on her. Perhaps the review was harsh, but she did not attack you personally or say that you are a bad person or a bad writer - as you did to her in your response. As an author myself, I understand what it's like to develop a bond with your characters and it really sucks to have someone come out and say they don't like something you write. But honestly, there will always be people who don't like the things you write and people who think your writing is awesome.
    So don't let yourself get bent out of shape over a review. Sometimes even the critical reviews can help you to see things you can improve on or give you ideas for a future story. If everyone who reviewed your story onaid aid positive things, how would you ever grow as a writer? The best thing you can do is take it in stride and stay true to yourself, and by all means keep writing!

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