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Reviews for The Crux of the Problem

By : Shanastay
  • From ANON - Zirconiatheblue on April 24, 2004
    Whoa, calm down, I guess I should clarify myself. I didn't mean it as the writing isn't good, on the contrary, you write very well. And also, I didn't realize there was a first part to the story until yesterday. (which I read and liked) I'm very sorry for my bluntness, I was not meaning to flame because you write very well. I was just surprised when I read the discription of Janessa. But, like I said, I read the first stoo noo now I understand this one. My sincerest appologies. Next time I'll get my facts straight.
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  • From ANON - Zirconiatheblue on April 24, 2004
    she's a slut...last time I checked elves were respectable...
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  • From ANON - Shanastay on April 24, 2004
    Hi! Yes, I'm the author, but I needed to address something. If you're reading the reviews there is one where the person refers to my fic as slash. Slash is SAME-SEX sexual conduct. I only write HET (HETEROSEXUAL). I have nothing against slash, I just don't write that. Just needed to clear up the apparent confusion. Any questions you CAN e-mail me directly. Hope you enjoy the story, I know I'm loving writing it. ;)
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  • From ANON - Mesopotamia on April 24, 2004
    You know...I'm not usually into straight-out slash stories, but I must admit that this is so fucking intelligently written I had to say something. You make sex beautiful and not ugly and mechanical. As for those flamers, this is your story and you can write what you like. FF.net has its terrorists, but don't let them bring you down. Trust me, I've gone through those people myself. "Hey! so-and-so doesn't act like that blah blah whine whine bitch bitch" The best thing to do is to realize that you have fans and that these people (like this person who flamed you) probably has no talent in writing of her and and feels that she has to attack people that do. So do not be mad. Pity her for being an uneducated, no-talent moron and update!! :)
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  • From ANON - babmidnight on April 24, 2004
    "She is quite a firebrand isn't she?" First I must comment on that. Firebrand is the meaning of my name! :) okay now back to reviewing. lol :)
    Hum I wonder what your going to write next. I can just see Galadriel acting young again. :) we all do that time to time. lol Cd player...hum...maybe something to do with loud music and dancing. :) so when you going to post more? huh huh?!
    Brenda

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  • From ANON - babmidnight on April 24, 2004
    my my my was that good! I'm surprised Janessa screamed the right name. lol How I managed to eat and read the same time isoundound me. :) Now I have to wonder how Legolas's reaction to that was. Did he feel it etc. :) Guess I'll have to read the next chapter to find out huh?!! oh and the writing was very good, no errors. :)
    Brenda

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  • From ANON - dinah47 on April 24, 2004
    Great going. Please send chap 2 to me. I'm dying to know what happens. Also, don't stop with chap 3. I now that Glad and Jan are up to no good and am dying to find out how Celeborn and Haldir cope with being upstaged.
    Dinah

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  • From ANON - Elerrina Rose on April 24, 2004
    you can top THIS chapter??!!?
    I'd love to see you try!
    Keep writing because I assure you, this coeasieasily become addictive :)
    a fan,
    ~ Elerrina Rose

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  • From ANON - Aranel3 on April 24, 2004
    hehe
    *much inane gigling ensues while Aranel collapses on the floor whimpering 'More More!'*

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  • From ANON - Miss Independent3 on April 24, 2004
    I likes... But what about Legolas? I hope he isn't mad. He sd bed be a good sport about it if you ask me.
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  • From ANON - noone on April 24, 2004
    hahahaha someone is getting a little dirty...good stuff...lol
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  • From ANON - Cam on April 24, 2004
    Oh yes! This was fun. What a way to start the day!
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  • From ANON - Kwannom on April 24, 2004
    PERFECT PERFECT PERFECT!!!!

    MORE MORE MORE!!!

    Haldir is the best and If I were Janessa I would not think twice about dumping Legolas. But after reading the story The Forsaken, it seems that Hal and Jan won't be together in the end of this tale *snif*

    Linkin Park is wonderful and I love when you use their lyrics to set the mood in your stories.

    Until the next chapter :)

    Kwannom
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  • From trekqueen on April 24, 2004
    mmmmm love making water scenes are always yummy! ^_^
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  • From ANON - AmberRose on April 08, 2004
    wait... i'm confused!!! I thought Janessa was with Legolas... and now she's with Haldir? Hurm..... I will have to wait for your conclusion. :)
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