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Reviews for The Crux of the Problem

By : Shanastay
  • From ANON - Elendili on April 08, 2004
    Please...keep writing and don't change a thing!!!!! You mentioned that you may revise this after it is completed. NO!!!!! It acts as a stand alone piece, and is perfect. I love the use of songs, I always have a soundtrack going through my head! I relate to songs. This story is so much more than sex (although thatAMAZAMAZING!!!)
    Thank you for sharing your talent...this story has been a gift in more tha than you'll know.
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  • From dawnenab on March 30, 2004
    Hi again! Just dropping by to beg some more.

    PPPLLLEEEAAAASSSEEE update soon! Please?

    ~Ali
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  • From ANON - Rainien on March 29, 2004
    Well done, once again, darlin'. Sorry it took me so long to post this review. I actually read this chapterouplouple of day ago. Anyway...great, excellent, wonderful, and a host of other positive adjectives. *S* Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Lora on March 28, 2004
    I am so impressed. I am a LOTR fan, but never read any fanfic before. I had no idea. You are so talented. I must admit I had mostly noticed Legolas, but this is some serious competition.....maybe not even competition. Talasi was right! I have to read several things over a few times to get all the positions right, but that you are able to explain them in suchail ail in the first place is downright scary. I am so sheltered. Rollercoaster.....damn right!!! Yeeeehaw.

    Last night I read Crux and Forsaken. Fantasy is next. I'm supposed to be working. he he Keep up the writing. You are wonderful!

    Lora
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  • From ANON - rashida7777 on March 25, 2004
    So happy that u r back in the saddle again. Can u send me fantasy. where do i find it? Have a great day! Shalom!
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  • From ANON - Tami on March 25, 2004
    I am following all of your stories, but hadn't reviewed yet. I know, bad me. Back to business: WOW!! What a great chapter. You never cease to amaze me. Keep it up. I am thoroughly impressed.

    Tami
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  • From dawnenab on March 24, 2004
    Shana Shana Shana. Can I tell you often enough how much I LOVE your storytelling? I almost broke my hand trying to clink on the link to get here. I have directed so many people to your stories...they are wonderful.

    Let all the bitter people and flamers HEAR ME NOW... This woman is sharing ALOT more than her imagination here folks. And I DO NOT know her personally...just perceptive enough to know the real thing when I read it. Have a care...a soul is being bared to you for your delight...your enjoyment...your sharing. If you do not find these things...seek on.

    Love it! Can't wait for more girl!

    ~Ali
    Proud member of the Tattooed And Pierced Women Of The World
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  • From ANON - Talasi on March 24, 2004
    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. That was beautiful! As always, perfect choice of songs for the occasion and emotion. r apr apologize for using songs/lyrics. You always use them perfectly. I also never tire of seeing the softer side of the Marchwarden. I am, without doubt, not the least bit disappointed at having no elfsmut in this chapter. While my mafia title is still fitting, I'm a sucker for anything you write.

    Talasi
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  • From dawnenab on March 22, 2004
    Girl...I must confess that I do feel pretty dumb! I have no idea why I waited THIS LONG to read something of yours besides Fantasy! Holy crap! You are soooooooooo good & I love Janessa. I can identify with her on so many levels, yet I am drawn to want to emulate her in so many others. Really greamalemale character. I never thought you could top what went on with she & Leggy...but I tell you that I have this real soft spot for that fussy Marchwarden and now I know why.

    Great stuff here! I really hope you are still doing well in WA and that the updates continue. This makes No. 2 that I'm now waiting to see another chapter of. At least I know I can now run off and go explore Twisted too.

    Keep up the great work & I will faithfully read and review!

    ~Ali
    d med member of the Pierced and Tattooed Women of the World!!
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  • From ANON - Tammy on March 10, 2004
    Wow! Such an insatiable elf. *sighs* This story is definitely addictive. It would seem Haldir has met his match on many levels. I love how he massaged the tension from her tired muslces before taking rest himself. Such a powerful, yet sweet elf. I also liked the brief hand holding. That is very reassuring. These positions are very inventive. Never ceases to amaze me. Please continue. You are very talented. The way you are able to describe in minute detail these complex positions and put a naughty picture in my head........

    Can't wait for the next chapter.

    Tammy
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  • From ANON - AmberRose on March 06, 2004
    I'm happy you've found ae age again. I'm also happy that you can update again. I just love your stories!
    A~R
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  • From ANON - Tal on March 04, 2004
    *winks at Shana* The rollercoaster has left the building!!!!! You have outdone yourself with coupling gymnastics. Good thing I know you so I now apply the towel warning to everything you write. I had to read the scene a few times to get the positioning correct (hated every minute of it..lol). Of course, this was for purely educational purposes. *tries to keep a straight face and look innocent (but failing miserably)* I'm glad you like it in Washington. Maybe we will be neighbors soon.

    Tal
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  • From kwannom on March 01, 2004
    Hello there!

    Before I start babbling I would like to say that I’m Brazilian, so please forgive me for butchering the entire English language : )

    Girl you are really talented! Rainien tells me about your wonderful work all the time and I had to read it. I began with Twisted (which I’m going to review separately another time) and then I ended up reading The Crux of the Problem. I have to say that this story is waaaaaaay much better than Twisted in my opinion. I don’t know if it’s because I think Haldir is much more interesting than Legolas, or if it was the perfect time of the plot, or the love scenes (erotic beyond all reason)... The list of reasons has no end…

    It’s incredible the way you come out with a song that fits perfectly with the scene you’re describing. son song is like another character in your story. And the fact that I know all of the ones you chose until now contributes for me to get into the mood of the scenes more easily. I play them on my computer, and sing along, and dance like crazy…

    Talking about dancing, the scene where Janessa remembers her Ballet classes meant a lot to me, because I’ve danced ballet for over 10 years now and I had a tough time to conciliate the dance, my work and the college. I almost gave up on it, but I love dancing, is a part of what I am. When I wear a pointe shoes, is just as you said: a sweet torture. I just couldn’t live without it and so I kept practicing it. Fortunately, my teachers never complaint about my weight (and I’m over weighted for a baldancdancer), so I could enjoy the pleasures of dancing completely without anybody pissing me off.

    Before I end this looooooong review I would like to tell you that I don’t know why people are so hard with you in their reviews. These fanfictions are yours alone, those people don’t have the right to criticize you in such low ways. If I were you, I wouldn’t stop writing this fiction (The Crux…) because of the flamers. It would be giving them the victory. Tell them to shove it! Tell them to go kiss an orc! You should continue to write as you will, telling these wonderful stories that come from your imagination and from your own life. Don’t stop because of these jackasses. Unfortunately, I’m not pierced or tattooed (My doctor forbid me because I have a terrible cicatrisation problem), but be sure that you have my entire support!

    A big hug from the (unfortunately) not pierced or tattooed,

    Kwannom

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  • From ANON - Mia on February 11, 2004
    Sorry to hear of your diffculties. I just wanted you to know I really enjoy your stories and think you are a gifted writer. Hang in there!
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  • From ANON - rashida on February 09, 2004
    I am so sorry for this difficult time in your life. I hope that you don't mind if I pray for your continued strength and singsings. I too and having some tribulations as some would call it at this time. Sometimes all we can do bow to the absurdity of all and know that we have NO choice but to continue. Shalom!!!
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