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Reviews for Leaf Lust

By : lostmarbles
  • From ANON - Lily Valentriea on September 05, 2004
    so great! I absolutely love this story...i wish autumn would hurry the fuck up...*grumble, grumble* wonderful imagery. very vivd...fantastic job, keep up the great work...
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  • From ANON - Dea Puel x on January 24, 1920
    Ok that was fluff with sex mixed in. Maybe half and half. I rocked really. Probably my favorite, so far.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 25, 2003
    oh how i loved this story. it´s really nice, couldn´t believe my luck here. just too short:( ever considered making a real long term story out of it...?? please??
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  • From ANON - hatorisohma on December 19, 2003
    Really nice piece of writing. Lovely metaphors and hot lovin' -My two favorite things. Your use of leaves and autumn in the story was so poetic and visual. Very lyrical. I love your writing style. I, myself am a slash/yaoi fangirl of the gothy variety who appreciates the ungodly beauty of Orlando and Johnny. We are kindred spirits! Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - DarkBubbleGum on December 07, 2003
    Your fics totally rock!
    I now pronounce you the Queen of PWP!!!
    Great as per usual, well done......some...entertainment that kept me sane during really boring TV programmes, Family!
    Thanks for thjoymjoyment
    YOU ROCK!

    DBG
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  • From ANON - Ib on December 05, 2003
    I am in awe. That was such a beautifully written story. I loved the vividness of Orlando's leaf dance. And the sensuality of his and Johnny's coupling. A*maz*ing.
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  • From ANON - Edward Uwnhai Silverfang on December 01, 2003
    To be perfectly honest, I was very close to not reading this at all. Your start out was very much newbe-ish, and while I’ve seen your name once or twice, I’vt ret really seen you around nor other author’s talking of you. Your whole style is very off putting when it comes to the openings, and I think you need to write better summaries. But, DAMN, I will tell you this; I loved your story, completely!was was very refreshing, and exciting.

    Though the part where they were caught by ‘Mr. Weaving’ was more then a bit sad, and not in a good way. It kind of ruined the over-all effect you were aiming at, methinks. But then your story continued, though I think if you had elaborated just a bit more with him being only allowed to stay while he was in school it would have been even stronger. The very ending, though, was absolutely perfect, very romantic, and just brought a simple smile to my face to know that everything was all right with them.

    So over all I must say that you should lay off with the melodrama a bit, and I will guarantee people will read your work more often; though your fun attitude towards things and your explanation of the autumn leaves and all that was loveable and enlightening in the way of explaining to us what this meant to you, which is a good thing.

    Find better summaries, and if you can’t, you can actually get people to help you with that, like lets see… ‘Autumn, a time of adventure and love, brings together a love stricken student, and his entranced Professor.’ Then, so they know what pairing, just add it after you have the summary, ‘Orlando Bloom/Johnny Depp’. And next time I would definitely think about adding it to the outside, imoremore tempting then “My little tribute to the autumn season. It's a AU and PWP. Johnny Depp/Orlando Bloom” and also it gives readers a plot to hold onto, and yes, this did have a plot, though it was a One-shot.

    And last, but not least, you could use a beta-reader that can see things the writer doesn’t, try to find one, there’s dozens upon dozens of people outre wre who love to do this for people, myself included.

    Lovely story, though, and I will be looking at your other works here,
    -Edward Uwnhai Silverfang
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