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By : Nyssa
  • From ANON - SallySimpson on January 25, 2005
    Oh my goodness, you stopped *there*??? Such a wonderful passionate yet tender set-up- more please, soon!
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  • From ANON - Julia on March 14, 2004
    You write great, with the details and the slow (!) build-up, and I like the way you give credit to it that not every man (certainly not every man as macho as Eomer) is ready to get topped without hesitation. And I'm resigning myself to the fact that this story is probably an experiment on how long a slash scene can be drawn out. My guess is 20 chapters.
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  • From ANON - Anita on March 12, 2004
    *groan*

    You do know how to keep us in suspence!! Ten chapters of sexual tension and the haven't even done 'it' yet...you're good :)
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  • From ANON - Rozzan on March 12, 2004
    The sexual tension between these two is perfect. I so enjoyed the incredible build up, it was like I was there. Well Done.
    “Not so fast”, he whispers softly, and there is tenderness not only in his voice but also in his eyes as our gazes meet. I can tell that he can read the doubts and concerns and, I admit, also the sudden unease in my face, but I don’t dare say anything. Motionless I lie under his heavy, heated body and await his reaction.
    I also await his reaction with baited breath.What an agonizing point to leave us at! Please update soon I cannot restrain my impatience to find out where you will lead these two stunning men and how.
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  • From ANON - Julia on February 28, 2004
    Hey, you aren't planing to do anything cruel like, for example, leaving the two in this state? Seriously, the Tokowhá styou you started is very promising, but I hope you'll finish this one. Pretty please.
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  • From ANON - Julia on February 19, 2004
    **drums her fingers on the desk**

    **purses her lips**

    You _are_ enjoying this, aren't you. "I cannot wait any longer" my ass.

    Incidently, the scene is red-hot. Do tell, you plan to make it to twenty chapters?
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  • From ANON - troublegirl on February 17, 2004
    Ohhhh!!!!! Very hot! Can't wait for the next chapters!!!
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  • From ANON - Julia on February 10, 2004
    UST:= Unresolved Sexual Tension. The kind of story which has you yelling "shag already, will ya!" at your computer screen. Like this one, darn it. Congrats for managing to keep this up for, oh, about three chapters by now. Good use of background info, and I like the thoughtfulness Boromir shows.

    Shag already, will ya!
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  • From ANON - Arnettra on February 07, 2004
    More please and soon! The thought of these two together is so unbelieveably hot, and you write them so well. Hot, hot, hot, update soon, please
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  • From ANON - Arnettra on December 23, 2003
    I love this story! What an unexpected pairing, I never would have thought of them together, but they are oh so delicious! Please continue and make it as dirty as possible!
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  • From ANON - Julia on December 19, 2003
    Bloody d**n .... this chapter is so great, and it leaves off just when it promises to get really interesting - don't those two know that life is short and time ld nld not be wasted? What _are_ they waiting for, an engraved invitation?

    **grumblegrumblegrumble**

    And now I'll have to wait for the next update....
    Lemon scene? Pretty please?
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  • From ANON - Julia on December 15, 2003
    Oww, what an evil cliff-hanger! Like the chapter (only Eowyn was kind of... like you had to write her but didn't like her much). Hope you'll update soon.
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  • From jilly on December 08, 2003

    Nyssa,

    Hi, honey. I know I told you this when I first beta'd this chapter, but it bears repeating. This is such an amazing departure for you. I'm usually an all-Elf gal as you know, but with two such lovely warriors as the main characters in this fic, I'm happy to make an exception. *g* The tension between these two is palpable and quite delicious.

    Keep up the great work, sweetie!

    Your friend,
    Jilly
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  • From ANON - Julia on December 07, 2003
    Oh joy, you're writing a new story... *very happy*.

    I like the way you're doing Boromir, a bit bigmouthaybeaybe but anything but dumb. The pairing is promising, the tension so far, and the respective "how does _he_ feel about that incident" riveting, and I'll probably be looking out for an update dayly.
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  • From ANON - sueb on December 07, 2003
    I do like the first person telling of this, it is a difficult medium, but i have always found it brings a different, fresher dimension to a fic. An interesting pairing, both skilled warriors but with different expectations placed on them. looking forward to reading more
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