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From ANON - lilith on January 20, 2004
...I need a tissue...again...
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From ANON - Mawgy on January 20, 2004
Crap? Really? Actually, I think it would have to be one of my fav chapters so far!

So, it seems my psychic abilities have grown, yet I still have to work harder on my teleconetic capabilities if I want them to work any time soon. Damn, but, one special skill is better than none.

Still, I'm so glad Leggy and Thranduil have made up. at first i thought Glrfindel was being reckless and putting Leggy/Elrond and himself in danger, so I'm very relieved they're still ok, and even more happy tharandranduil approves of their bond.

Oh, I swear *my* heart stopped beating when Leggy was fading. I was so scared something sinister was coming up, so, once again, so relieved when he opened his eyes. *phew*

But, congratulations, you had me crying once again. When Leggy said that the room used to be his old nursery and his mother and father used to play with him in there, I just burst out in tears. so sad to think how far that family has come since those happy days. Still, if it helps Leggy sleep better at night, then there's no real harm being done, I suppose.

Anyway, yeah, I really loved this chpater. It had everything. It had fighting, sorrow, almost a death, some sickly sweet emotional stuff, angst, betrayal, friendship, love, and people making up. It really was good. All it needed was a good fuck or two, and it would be perfect! And, as Leggy's is still healing, it obviously couldn't be him, so if it were Erestor, that would most definitely make it my favourite chapter! (Sorry, but I don't think I'll ever get over him, so you'll just have to suffer my silliness when it comes to him).

Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter, no matter how crap yu may think it is, I'm sure I'll still like it,

Luv Mawgy
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From ANON - giggle on January 20, 2004
I am sorry you had a acheache but I thought the chapter was just fine.
I really enjoyed Glorfindel's explanation of the scar. You need to be a glass half full person or life will just beat you down. Legolas needs to look at things in a more positive light. He may be a grown up warrior elf but he still is emotionally very young.
At least Thranduil may get his act together now. Everything is out in the open and he is goio geo get help from the other realms. According to people who research these things. Mirkwood had more elves than any other realm. The also were very good archers and warriors and other elves considered them dangerous so the king should try to look on the upside. I know that must be hard when orcs and spiders kill more and more each year. Easy for me to say bright side.
He also can accept Elrond and Glorfindel binding with Legolas. Think about it, this is like a political marriage. This could be a good thing.
I enjoyed this chapter very much and I look forward to more Thranduil machinations in the future. giggle
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From ANON - Steph on January 19, 2004
Angst and reconciliation! Perfect combination in my mind. I loved this chapter because they both stood firmly behind Legolas, and no matter how nasty Thranduil got, I knew they would handle it for Legolas. I love how you ended it too, with Glorfindel closing the door on that tender moment between father and son. Lovely!
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From ANON - Mawgy on January 18, 2004
Well done on over 100 reviews. If anyone deserves it, then you surely do.

Thanks for the web address. And don't worry, I won't check out the rest of the story, I'll wait patiently for you to update here. I'll only check it out for any new chapters of Leggy when he was young, provided you tell me when you've added more, please?

What? As long as I stop predicting the future and reading your mind, you'll support me being able to move things around with my mind?

OK, thanks for that. Can't wait till Erestor gets a little bit of happiness too. You have no idea how much I appreciate you doing this for him and me.

Anyway, back to *this* chapter.

You know, the burn might have been intended to mock the prince, but, for some reason, I think it's good for eggy to remember where he comes from. He is from the house of Thranduil, even is he has spent more of his life in Rivendell than in Mirkwood, and nothing will ever change that, so I think it's good that the Orcs reminded him of where he came from. So, I may be comepletely wrong with this prediction, but I think that maybe Leggy will grow to like this mark, even if it does bring back horrible memories each time he looks at it. *shrugs* Just what think.

Oh, I LOVED Glrfindel and Elrond in this chapter. They were so sweet and caring. Kinda makes me jealous of Leggy. I want two lovers like that! *sob* In fact, I'll be happy with just one! Poor Glorfindel. For a moment there I thought Leggy would shun him and cling to Elrond and let no other touch him but the lore master. I was so relieved when Leggy came to his senses (a bit). I just hope he will be able to hold true to his promise and stay with his lovers, despite Elrond's doubts.

Ok, I liked the flashback, but I thought it didn't go long enough. Sorry, but the flashback was Tallen remembering how Leggy demanded to have another room, yet you never quite got round to that part of the conversation. Sorry, I hate to criticise, I really do, but I just thought that maybe at some stage we'll get the rest of that particular scene, or something? PLease? (I know, I ask for a lot of things, and you don't have to give them all t, bu, but if there's any chance I might get them, I can't help but be selfish and ask for them. *shrugs* I must have been quite spoilt when I was a kid *g*). But, anyway, I think the whole scene did still work because it showed how much the palace had come into dis-repair, no one even fixing Leggy's room, especially when they were expecting him, and how Leggy and Thranduil were getting on, but I couldn't help but remember the original reason for the flashback was never quite reached to it's fullest potential. That's all.

Ooooh, I like the tnsion put in due to Thranduil not coming and greeting Leggy and the others, that was really well done. Especially how Leggy says he's never not greeted him before, and always finding time for his youngest, no matter how busy he is. It was sweet to think of the past like that and that Thranduil still wants to be a good father, atteatter what he's going through, which, for me, gained him a lot of sympathy. But, then when Leggy later went to see him, he lost a lot of it when he hit Leggy. I realise and understand he's going through a lot, but his son needs him right now. He should just get over himself and put someone before himself for once since his wife died. Though i liked Leggy forgiving his father. It showed how much Leggy loves him and still wnats him in his life, even if he does get hurt in the meantime. It was such a sweetly sad moment. I really liked it.

And, when Glorfindel told lerond he couldn't save Leggy from being hurt all the time, I got quite choked up about that bit as well. It's true, they will have to let Leggy learn his father isn't in the best state of mind anymore, but that he will have to learn the hard way, and that his two lovers are just going to let this happen is so sad, but if it's gonna happit sit should sooner rather than later. But, even after all he's been through, Leggy is still quite innocent, so for him to realise his father isn't there for him in the same way he was as a child is going to make him understand how disollusioned the world really is, which is always depressing, no matter how old a person is. And, i know i said it would be better that this happen sooner rather than later, but, I'm not so sure it should happen so soon to him being raped for the second time because it might only speed his fading.

But, whatever happens, I have every confidence in you to make it as gripping and wonderful as this fic has already been. Thanks for yet another great update, and i can't wait for the next chapter.

Luv Mawgy
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From Dream Dre on January 17, 2004
::clutches Leggy plushie::

;; Poor elfy, he needs a hug...or two... or a good shag. :D
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From ANON - lilith on January 17, 2004
I swear, I cried while reading this chapter ! Don't ever stop writing ! This story is absolutely wonderful !
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From ANON - giggle on January 17, 2004
I think not bothering the king right now is a good idea. He obviously is losing his marbles. Maybe Legolas' problem is genetic as well as orcs. The House of Oropher may be prone to depression.
Well at least Legolas has Elrond and Glorfindel to help him get through this. When he was a child he didn't understand the full ramifications. Now he does and this might even make things worse.
Poor Legolas. I bet it does feel as if someone is out to get him.
Thanks for the angst and now it is time to get angsty with Mirkwood and the king before the prince can be healed. I look forward to it. giggle
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From ANON - Steph on January 16, 2004
ch. 16 - Wow~ so much happened in this chapter that I don't know where to start. I love how well you progress with each update, giving us enough to satisfy, yet leaving us wanting more. I am so in love witorfiorfindel in this! He is such the hero, and he knows when to stand back and watch protectively from the side lines too. He is a great characterizaiton, as they all are. The scene where he finds Legolas tearing at his own skin was just riveting. And I love how he vows to Elrond that he'll not let Legolas fade. Oh the drama...;) Thank you so much for this awesome and timely update!
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From ANON - Silent Archer & Arwen Slayer on January 16, 2004
Arwen Slyer: *Attacks Thranduil and slaughters him*

SA: That was effective.

AS: Yes i know. I'm off to kill Arwen, maybe now she won;t run a scream like a little girl.

SA: ::shakes head sadly:: Well very good chapter. I'm enjoying this but not the part where he returns to Mirkwood. But whatever your the author so I can't really say anything. Arwen liked it too, only she totalkippkipped all parts mentioning Arwen. So update again soon and I'll check back after work. BYE!

AS: *dances happily* I got her! Oh yea I got her!

SA: No u didn't... she's still alive ::stands up life-sized poster of Arwen::

AS: *Very angry* DIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - louise_oblique on January 16, 2004
Exceptional, love this fic. jeez legolas is brave. poor darling

huggs
louise
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From ANON - Silent Archer on January 15, 2004
I had a 2 hour delay last time. LOL. I don't even have school tomorrow. Oh poor leggy. is he going to be emotionally damaged for now on? please update again soon. Please? lol, I'll try and get to review it as soon as I can but no promises my internet connection blows. loldatedate please!

Silent Archer ::shivers in cold::
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From ANON - Cally on January 15, 2004
I just finished chapter 12 and I want to commend you on how well you have done writing the sex scene. They are so much more difficult when you have three players instead of two, usually one is cought up writing the action and one of the characters is left out for a large gap. But you where amazing with the way you kept it equel between them.

There is one thing though.... I have to say I would have liked more lust *winks at you* Or perhaps a spanking!
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From ANON - Isisisatis on January 14, 2004
This was quite intense and horrible! I really want to see what reason there is to let Legolas suffer again like this.

Isis

P.S.: Even if I don't comment on every chapter, I sure as hell won't desert you and your fantastic story.
And, please, let Erestor have some fun! And don't make me and the others wait too long ;-)
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From ANON - lilith on January 14, 2004
ooooh...poor Leggy !!!
but there will be a happy ending, right ?
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