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Reviews for A Healing Touch

By : Gore

From ANON - Autore on January 13, 2004
My sadistic side certainly enjoyed it, as did the romantic part (the cuddly bit at the end ^_^), but my Elf Defense side was quite unhappy. Oh well. Poor Legolas... but I love having him tortured, and I'm sure Elrond and Glorfindel can provide some.... consolation. Hehehe... looking frd trd to more ASAP!!!!
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From ANON - me on January 13, 2004
It's because of the angst that I enjoyed this chapter! You made me cry, you fiend, with poor Legolas' trauma. Love the story. Don't ever stop writing it.
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From ANON - Mawgy on January 13, 2004
Oh yes, enjoyed very very very muchly. Thanks.

Yes please, I'd love to read anythinng else you have on Leggy's childhood. What's your website address please?

Just one little thing, (well, 2 little things), first off, Leggy has just been branded, so I was wondering what his branding looked like? Or are we to find out in another chapter when Glorfindel gets to his two lovers and inspects them himself? And, Leggy was just raped, so I don't think he was in exactly the best condition to ride without going through absolute helll and torture. Ok, that was all. Mainly I'm just being technical with the latter.

Welll, at least Erestor was mentioned in that chapter. *g* (silly, huh? Leggy and Elrond have just been cruelly hurt be the Orcs and could well have died (and Leggy may yet fade away, despite what he promised to Erlond), yet all I'm concerned with ien Ien I'll be hearing more of the gorgeous and wonderful Elf named Erestor! Well, I can't wait until they get back to Rivendell and he'll be back in the story).

Anyway, i won't dwell too much on the parts I did and didn't like in this chapter as that will indicate how much of a sadistic brat I am, just know that I loved all of it, and can't wait to read what happens next. Thanks,

Luv Mawgy

P.S. Psychic? Damn, if anything I'd want to be teleconnetic! I'll have to work at that. *g*
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From ANON - Steph on January 13, 2004
Oh poor Legolas! But you let Glorfindel come before the chapter ended, so I don't feel so dejected. It was a good idea to add the rescue when you did. Now he will have to be saved all over again (from himself), and that is the good part. In regards to your note, I did not get your e-mail, but I didn't want to bother you again about it so I did not mentio. I. I'd really love it if you would send it again. You are so sweet to ask. And thank you for the lovely update!
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From ANON - Morelwen on January 13, 2004
so-...-cute! ...-.-... o this is such a good story!
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From ANON - giggle on January 13, 2004
Rotten Bad Orcs. Of course if it isn't orcs it's men and I would rather it be orcs since I am of the race of Men.
I hope this doesn't send Legolas into a spin again. He has just learned to enjoy unconditional love and that took long enough in his short life so far.
The twins and Glorfindel to the rescue and about time. We now need to get Legolas and Elrond healed of their wounds.
Thank you for another elf torture and rescue with a lot of angst chapter. giggle
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From ANON - Morelwen on January 13, 2004
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, Legolas is so sweet, I feel sorry for him. It's good to know that some one around here is following the book, and knows what they're talking about too ^.^ I hate reading fics if the writer dosn't know much about the books, but you seem to know a lot. Great job. I love the first chapter and I pray that the rest will be just as good if not better

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From ANON - Leannan on January 12, 2004
I started reading your fic this morning, and i couldn�t stop until i finished (or at least i finished reading what was online), i can�t say how impresed i�m about your writing skills, very few authors can retreat (i don�t know how to spell it) such scenarios and such feelings in one fic. I repeat, i�m impresed, and i love your fic.
You think it�ll be possible a bit more young legolas?? I can�t wait to read more about this fic.
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From ANON - Mawgy on January 12, 2004
Yeah, I figured he'd be shorter but not by much. Thanks for that.

You know, if anything I thought he grew up just a little too quickly. I woulve pve prefferred you to have kept him as a child for a while longer, but you can't undo what you've written now, so I like the idea of flashbacks. And, thanks for letting us know the reasons behind why you do things, many authors just do what they want, don't listen to their readers and end up stuffing up their stories, so thanks lettletting us know what's going on.

Soooooo, I'm guessing it's Vilya the Orcs are after? Can't wait to see how Elrond gets out of this oOh, Oh, and Leggy, of course. (can't forget him).

Mayhap Glorfindel will come and save both his s? Ds? Doubtfull, but still a possibility. So, there you go. Last time I was able to guess what you had written first time round, (see, I said you'd change it just because I guessed it right ! lol), and now I have no idea what-so-ever as to how they shall be saved. Or, maybe they'll get out of it themselves. *shrugs* I guess there's only one way I'm going to find out... another chapter?

Hope I don't have to wait too long for it. Thanks for this one.

Luv Mawgy
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From ANON - Silent Archer on January 12, 2004
::looks around:: good, she's not here. Jeez is she annoying! anyway I'm liking this story soo much. More pain torture! it's great! LOL. Yeah.... well I have to go to school now, update again soon!

Silent Archer
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From ANON - giggle on January 12, 2004
So Legolas has been living in Mirkwood and centuries have passed. He still spends most of his time in Rivendell. I hope I got that right. He is returning after a v to to Mirkwood and things have changed. Boy have they changed.
So he is a mature, gorgeous, skilled warrior now. Oh my it is getting warm ire. re. And Elrond and Glorfindel have noticed how their elfling is maturing.
They are right he will probably never be able to bond to anyone unless he knows and trusts them completely. Arwen was quick to him him know that the feelings he has have been noticed and reciprocated. These feelings are acceptable to the majority of the elves so basically what is he waiting for.
So they bond and very delightfully too. That was very sweetly erotic. Now the two elf lords can care for and protect their elfling for all eternity. Legolas has lucked out hasn't he? giggle
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From ANON - giggle on January 12, 2004
chapter 11
You get more packed into a chapter than most writers do.
An interesting day indeed. Where to start .
Good the nasty bullies are going to get slammed. They deserve it.
Then Legolas gets his questions answered in the most gently poy possible. After all Glorfindel is his teacher in physical things and this was physical. In many cultures an older man or woman is appointed to make sure they young get an education in physical pleasure. I don't happen to live in one of those cultures but I have no problem with the idea.
I liked Erestor pointing out that if the bullies told the young she elves about Legolas' condition it was only fair to tell them about the bullies condition also since the bullies ght ght the she elves would be honored. I don't know that they would or wouldn't have but at least Legolas will never know.
And then the nice scene between Elrond and Glorfl. l. It is nice for Elrond to have such a nice supportive lover to depend on.
Ada did show up and with Legolas' sibs. They can only stay two days. All that way and then back again for that length of time. Legolas is disappointed. Thranduil still drinking I surmise. I am glad that Legolas is supremely happy right now. giggle
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From ANON - giggle on January 12, 2004
chapter 10
A lot happened in that chapter.
So Legolas' family is not very close and his father is drowning in guilt and sorrow. Legolasnks nks that he is neglected because he is tainted by his experience. Communica is is key in family life and I don't think there is enough of that in the House of Oropher.
Nice party. And Elrond's speech and present were just right. Even if Legolas doesn't want to be a prince he is and he will be valued for the warrior he will become.
Now about those girls at the lake. If the she elves were concerned about not being seen shouldn't there be a place where they could bathe in private. If they were just out on a lake nekkid maybe they didn't mind if someone saw them. Of course Erestor and Glorfindel could be old school and want to give the she elves the benefit of their gallantry. Which was sweet but not necessarily needed.
Yes Legolas has hit purberty and needs a talk about the elven birds and bees, at least the equivalent in elven. And we have the bullies back again. Sigh. Why don't they just go lose themselves. giggle
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From ANON - giggle on January 12, 2004
This is for chapter 9
I had the flu for a long time and ended up with a bad sinus infection. I am trying to get caught up reading and reviewing.
I knew that the mommy dragon would have to come back get her baby. Mothers are like that. I was glad to see that Legolas finally realized that his baby dragon had to go evhoughough he loved it so much. It deserves to be free.
It was good that Erestor and Legolas had a good talk and now understand each other better. Poor Erestor's back story was sad. I think elves come in all kinds of temperments just like people so when reviewers say elves wouldn't act like that I realize they haven't read the Sil. Elves act just as bad as humans sometimes.
Everyone is so kind to Legolas. He is a sweetie pie all right. giggle
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From ANON - Steph on January 12, 2004
I love the flashbacks. You were right to move it along when you did too, because we are all a bunch of slash *****s anyway;). But the inclusion of flashbacks is a perfect compromise, as I love the young Legolas too. Chapter 14 is full of angst, and you can never go wrong with that can you? Lovely update!
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