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Reviews for A Healing Touch

By : Gore

From ANON - Steph on January 07, 2004
Wow...just...wow. That was beautiful, and sooo worth the wait. I actually squeeked out loud when I saw you had updated this. And I had no idea you would give us this awesome chapter so soon. I love that it has progressed so far with the three ofm. m. It was done really well, and I was not at all put off by the familial relations they have developed. It is written with just the right amount of love and eroticism to make it perfect!
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From ANON - Kuba on January 05, 2004
WOW! Its really hard to think of anything other then wow. You are a great writer, and I had a hard time stepping away from my computer as I read this. You made me cry, laugh and smile. I'm a Legolas fan and your rptirptions were beautifly writen, and the child Legolas was so cute!! I hope to read more things from you, I also thank you for the use of elvish... it really adds to the story. ^_^
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From ANON - Silent Archer on January 04, 2004
LOL, hmm.... I won't kill you so don't worry. I'm an open minded person. Everytime I come on here I must miss ur updates. This is really starting to make me angry. Anyway! lol Thranduil comes back..is iis isn't the end right? Please don't let it be the end. Update again soon and I will hopefully be able to review quicker.

Silent Archer
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From ANON - Lupusdragon on January 02, 2004
Hmm, this is ly gly good so far. I do like the scene between Glorifindel and Legolas. It covered such a wide range of emotions, it was funny, and tender, and a bit heartbreaking (poor little Greenleaf) I am very excited about this story and I cannot wait to read more. I have a few issues with how you are characterizing Legolas, but it works for the story, so I will not make any complaints ^_^ So when do we get more slashy goodness?
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From ANON - mel on January 02, 2004
I love this story - little Legolas is sooo sweet. I like how the twins interact with him. Glorfie was the perfect one to help Legs with his little "Problem."
While I'm glad that his father finally showed up, I hope he doesn't plan to take him back to Mirkwood now.
Please post soon!
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From ANON - Mawgy on January 02, 2004
Ooops, I forgot to put my name at the top. How silly. But never fear, for I shall always be the one, the only, Mawgy, your faithful reader and reviewer extrodanair! (even if I do sometimes forget it myself. lol)

As much as I hate to be the bearer of bad news, but, if you were aiming to have me crying in this chapter, well, sorry, but you failed. I did get close whenh Leggy said to Elrond he really thought his father would come, and when he became so terribly lost as to what to do when he became aroused, but no tears actually fell. Yet I'm sure you'll find heaps of more opportunities to have me blubbering like a little girl in chapters to come.

Oh, don't worry, I LOVE cartoons too! Esp. Disney, I was practically raised on them!

Now, I was really pissed off Thr Thranduil didn't come, but, I guess as he is there now, I'll let it slide for the time being.

You know, Erestor is turning into my favourite character! I don't know why, but, when he found the elflings and told them off for spying on the females, I thought it was for the reasons he said; invading their privaNeveNever, EVER, would I have thought his anger be born of hatred for the kids got a better view than what he did! Any chance you might give him someone special, so he won't be alone any more and have a happy ending, well, for him at least? I'd really appreciate that. Maybe Lindir or some other elf, even Haldir, possibly? Please? I'll get down on my knees and beg you to give Erestor some happiness, he deserves it.

Oh, so so glad Glorfindel helped Leggy out with his little pro. I . I truly think there couldn't have been a better person for the job, not even Elrond. I think he might have been too clinical about it, as he is a healer.

Anyway, thanks for another great update. And, not only the quality of it either, the quantity is also something to enjoy immensely. Can't wait for the next chapter,

Luv Mawgy
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From ANON - Relenquinix on January 01, 2004
A couple of things I wish to say about this chapter and the next. For starters, happy New Years as well. Next, not only females read slash stories, both genders will, myself included. Second, the way you explained Legolas� attitude in this makes it sound like he�s haviemalemales hormones running rampant through his body, not regular testosterone.

Most females who write get this wrong, so don�t worry. But all women should know men act much differently then women, the exact way you described it made him sound like he was going through the menstrual cycle except without the females reproductive parts, but of course it�s because of those parts that women go through it so Legolas� just doesn�t make sense.

Part of it could be explained off by frustration from his fears and family, but he wasn�t broken by what the orc did, and he still does have his Imladris family to take care of him, and then tare are mostly males, so he�s not going to turn out like a female.

And lets face it, the reason these elves are so sexually attractive is because they ARE males, and they ARE extremely hot. Why don�t we keep them as males and hot, and stop writing them as females. And while that sounds like it could be meant mean, I do not intend it as such so please do not take any offence.

Sincerely, Relenquinix
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From ANON - Steph on January 01, 2004
Ch 10 and 11 - Oh how absolutely wonderful!! I hope you had a lovely holiday, and I'm so happy you gave us this gift for the New Year. Legolas is growing and and I love it. You handled the scene in the woods beautifully. I felt nothing but love and trust in the moment. I honestly could not imagine this story going in any direction other than where you have taken it. It is just as I would want it to be. Your story, and Laurelin's "Wish Upon the Stars" series, are the two best lotr fics I think I've ever read. Thank you so much for sharing it! I was really looking forward to it.
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From ANON - Dreamseer on January 01, 2004
Poor Leggy. ;; Such an innocent, sweet, little baby. ^^ Beautiful work on the last two chapters, as always. :D
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From ANON - Zoe on January 01, 2004

I love this story - your Legolas is so very lovable that I was captivated from the first. The slow healing over time is wonderful, and I'm very much looking forward to further slashy moments! Thank you! Zoe
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From ANON - Dreamseer on December 27, 2003
Ahh!~ So cute, beautiful work, love. I can not wait to read more. ;; And especially when the slashy goodness comes in. >D
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From ANON - Lindeinde on December 23, 2003
Ah, I'm in love with this story! But Legolas needs to grow up faster and get together with Elrond and Glorfindel! I definitely agree with you about Legolas in Return of theg. Ag. Absolutely gorgeoAnd And the circlet... *melts* When he entered Frodo's room in Rivendell, everyone in the theatre started clapping! Haha, Legolas was the only one they clapped for too! It was wonderful. I'm definitely seeing that movie again. And so much slash evidence. ^__^ How he was racing to try to save Aragorn.... heheee, don't want to spoil anything for anyone else, but you know what I'm talking about? He was so... panicked. Write more soon please! Legolas is REALLY cute in this fic.
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From ANON - breach cannon all must die on December 22, 2003
I reais ais at fanfiction .net I like add additon of the dragon and I'm glad you put it here. I'm the one who suggested it to you via email
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From ANON - Silent Archer on December 20, 2003
Jeez, I have been so busy I haven't been able to check back on this. I've never read 'The Hobbit', a few people I know have but I personally never had. I was so sad, he had to give the dragon back! Glorfindel was mean, attacking her like that.... he should be... uh... i dunno. ::shrugs::

Well update again soon, and if I don't review ya before the holiday,

HAPPY HOLIDAYS!

}}}~~~~~~~~> silent archer
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From ANON - isisisatis on December 20, 2003
Yeah, me like very much! :-)
I'm glad you didn't make me wait too long after the last chapter, you got me a little bit worried there.
And I think this chapter with the dragon was so lovely, even if it doesn't serve any purpose in the future story. I think I would have been very cross with you if you hadn't shared it with us.

CU,
Isis
(you got my name right , but you can go with this shorter version in the future *g*)
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