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From ANON - lilith on February 14, 2004
Oh ! I forgot to ask: did Thranduil noticed Legolas� leaf-shaped scar ? He should have, right ? After all Leggy was naked in the tub so the mark should be evident (especially if his skin was wet). I know it may not be important but I was just curious.
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From ANON - Lomawien on February 13, 2004
Eep! -runs to catch up- haven't been on in a while and more chapters just appear like that! -snaps fingers- ^_^ So I'll just enter my little running commentary while reading them.

-crows- Go Legolas! Left, right, duck! And booyah baby! Down the big bad spider.

Whoa! Where did /thcomecome from? Erestor and Narofea! Knew you were planning something with ol' Erestor but this? It's like Wham! Bam! BOOM! Where did that ceom from? -grins- Like when I run into a door....or a pole. more often a door, but poles happen too. ^^ And Restor bottoming? -grins impishly- And never with an ellon? -cackles- This chapter is the best! Well, I still like the Flame Master Parts I, II, and III best. But Elf smut is always good. ^^

Oooh Nava, you just got burnt! To a crisp! -chuckles- No warrior is greater than Glorfindel, didn't you know? -rolls eyes- Duh! ^____^ And yes Legolas, it's all /your/ fault -dripping with sarcasm- Silly Elf-boy! Your just too darned cute to do anything bad... Except when you decide to play Captain Obvious, Mr. 'A Diversion'. o________o;;; That's it?! Gah! -falls over- Glorfindel has awoken and whoooosh! Legolas is gone... Then Bam! 'Glorfindel?' -chafes at imaginary bit- Mow... Shall have to wait then. But suspense, no matter how small or big is good. Think I usee wre wrong forms of the adjectives... I dunno! -covers head- Anyhow, wonderful story /again/ and wrte more. ^_^

Oh, Whoops. -blushes- Kinda forgot. Her name is Patata, like Potatoe but Patata. You know, Tomato, Tomata, Potatoe, Patata! -grins- And -winks secretly- Thanks for keeping it a secret, they yell at me enough for riding like a wild child.
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From ANON - Silent Archer on February 12, 2004
HE LIVES! Muwahahahahaha lol. Sorry.. a tad bit sy thy there. Ah, keep going... Glorfindel.. glorfindel.. ::chants along with Dexius::

Keep going!
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From ANON - lilith on February 12, 2004
Finally an update.
Legolas taking care of the little girl was such a cute scene. He would be a good father I guess :P ? I liked his talk with Haldir. With the Balrog Slayer and Elrond out of the picture now, Hal-dear has a chance with our Leggy-lamb.
I didn�t quite understand the end of the chapter (I�m stupid, I know). Something happened ? Something...I can�t even say it...something bad (ugh...I said it) ? Or was Legolas just relithatthat Glorfindel was awake ?
Legolas taking care of Elrond was so adorable.
I wander what will happen now,t tht the prince wants to be a diplomat...

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From ANON - Mawgy on February 12, 2004
No, by all means you can delete it. That's why I put a second one up, so you could and everything wuold go back to normal. I'd feel better if you did
because I personally hate having to move the screen to the left or right to see what people have written, so I'd imagine other people would too, and
I don't want to be the cause of people having to do that. Yeah, so I actually feel really guilty about that right now. Sorry.

Well, I just hope my kiss did actually work and I didn't just pash someone's foot just for the fun of it. *g* Course, as that person dist wst write a whole
Erestor slash chapter for me, I really should do a whole lot moren jun just kiss a foot.

I know you don't want Haldir to come off as the bad guy, but when he asked Leggy what his position in the royal family was and Leggy couldn't think
of anything, I REALLY could have kicked Haldir's arse right then and there. I felt so sorry for Leggy because it seemed to me he might have started
crying at any moment because by leaving his family he had also left any chance he had of entering it again. Yeah, so I'm quite relieved that you've
given him a chance to join the royal family again.

Also, what the hell is wrong with Elrond!? First he refuses help w wil will only injure his hip more, then he gets Leggy to make love to him which will no
doubt have serious effects on him later anyway! I really could throttle him right now, just see if it'll knock some sense into his big fat head!

YAY! Glorfindel's up! Though I can't help but think something's wrong, else Leggy would have gone straight to him and jumped into his arms.

Still, only one way to find out, and that is with another chapter, please? And soon? (Not putting any pressure on you, am I? *g*)

Luv Mawgy

P.S. You didn't sound very bitchy last chapter. Then again, if you live 2 metres down from the queen of all bitches (aka, my sister) then no one ever
sounds mean at all! So you have nothing to worry about as far as I'm concerned.
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From ANON - Steph on February 12, 2004
Ch. 24 - Awesome scene with Elrond. I also really liked the interaction between Legolas and the little girl. It suits his character to be so gentle. Your endind note mentd a d a part two! I'm so excited that you plan on that. This is one of my favorite stories out there, and I hate to see it end. Thank you for updating.
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From ANON - Morelwen on February 09, 2004
Elf smut yeay! But what is to happen to Glorfindel *tear* and Legolas? And if Haldir is supposed to be bad, then what is he going to do, what's in store for him? *imagining possible options* oh the possibilities. please up daate, I love your story, obviously cause I keep coming back for more
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From ANON - Morelwen on February 09, 2004
nooo! now my prespective on Turgon will be forever tainted. He was my favorite in the 'Silmarlion' I thought he would never die, until the chapter of ' The fall of Gondolion' seriosly, Tolkien needed to have better chapter titles in that book.
And omigod :D Legolas is so pretty *squi*
and I noticed you answered my review, *tears* I feel so loved *sniffle*
I'll reveiwe when I get to chapter 24 too, I just had to mention the thing about Turgon
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From ANON - giggle on February 09, 2004
We all need a little pointless elf smut in our lives once in a while. So I fully intend to enjoy Mawgy's chapter to the fullest.
Thanks for the mention of the dragon too. I like the little baby dragon and wish it could have stayed around but it was just not to be.
I hope you feel better soon. February is such a lousy month in the Northern Hemisphere that I am glad it is so short.
Looking forward to more when you are more up about writing. giggle
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From ANON - shannondey on February 08, 2004
Aw, poor you. Really, I mean it. Not being facetious. Thanks for getting Erestor laid! You have made my day. You know how people say about someone who's too uptight that they need to get laid? Well, mmm mmm good.
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From Mawgy on February 08, 2004
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Hope I enjoyed it? You silly fool, I LOVED it! Oh, I've been waiting for this moment for how many chapters now? And it has surpassed all my expectations! I especially like when Narofea said "Since I was old enough to take myself in hand and imagine you wriggling in pleasure beneath me." Actually, more than liked. I think that would have to be my favourite line in the whole chapter! But, on a whole, the entire chapter was absolute brilliance, especially when you've been having such a rotten time lately and had many obsticles to overcome to get this chapter out.

And, guess what? I think I love Erestor even more now! hehe.

And, about that beastiality thing. You weren't planning on Erestor being paired with anyone (once again, thanks for that), so you couldn't have had any warnings about it as you didn't know you were going to have it. Still, I think I prefer Narofea to the dragon. Thanks.

OH, yes, I LOVE you!? How could I not? IN fact, I think I shall worship you wherever go go from now on. *bows down to my god*

And you dedicated the chapter to me? Awwwww, that's so sweet of you, thanks (I seem to be saying that a lot this review, huh?), but I mean each and every single one of them. You truly outdid yourself Ashie, and went far beyond any expectations I had. All I wanted was for him to have a good, hard fuck and relieve some tension. But being bound to Legolas' best friend? WOW! Didn't see it coming, gotta admit, and never really thought of them as a pair, but they totally work! And I wouldn't want it any other way. You're an absolute credit to yourself Ash. *g*

Sorry about the ankle. I'll kiss it better for you. *kiss*

Ok, just to show you how truly grateful I am, I'll draw you another stick pic for this chapter. Ok?

Anyway, can't wait to see how everyone reacts when they find out what stuffy old Erestor and fiery Narofea have done, especially Legolas, though I think he'll just be happy his friend is happy. Still, I'm sure there'll be at least one person not so happy about the bond. Anyway, you wrote the story, so you know, and as of yet, I don't, though I'm sure i'll find out if I'm right (again *g*) or wrong.

By the way, I didn't annoy you that much, did I? All I did was ask you once, then you said you would, so I just naturally took every oppnitynity available to remind you of your promise. That's all. *looks totally sweet and innocent of any alleged 'annoying' claims against me*

OH, and please tell Isis "you're most welcome" from me. "It was a lot of hard work, but I have this wonderful author wrapped around my little finger. *g* Much like Ungoliel and the orcs! *gg*" Thanks

Anyway, until the next chapter (which is hopefully soon) TTFN (yeah, thanks for that too!)

Much Luv, Mawgy

P.S. Sorry for ruining your review format thing. If you want, you can delete the previous review as I have spacspaces between stuff in this one. Sorry.
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From ANON - lilith on February 08, 2004
Well, was certainly different which doesn�t mean it was bad :D And Erestor and Narofea ? I would have never guessed ! Brilliant.
I cawaitwait for an update. I�m so curious what will happen next, especially with our 3 lovely Elves (Leggy, Elrond and Glorfy of course) and Hal-dear. I�m really glad that you�re not planning to end the story soon :D
One question: where did the name Narofea came from ? It�s just my curiosity.

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From ANON - Isisisatis on February 08, 2004
Erestor! YAY! Though I was not pestering you with questions about him I really appreciate that you brought him such a lovely smut scene :-D And give my thanks to the nuissance that made you write this ;-)
And who cares if this chapter was pointless? It was so beautiful!

Ciao,
Isis

P.S.: I hope your ankle soon will be better. And how did that happen anyway, if I may ask? I too only shortly ago had an accidant with my foot (rammed the heel of my dancing shoes into it while dancing viennese waltz, and then my partner choose the same spot to step on shortly afterwards). Now I have a nice bruise on a part of the foot where it is difficult to find shoes to wear which don't hurt.
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From ANON - Mawgy on February 07, 2004
OHIT!HIT! Well, haven't I just made the biggest fool of myself? Narofea isn't the dragon, it's Legolas' childhood friend! Hey, Ash, could you please just do me one of two little favours? Either forget everything I just said in my last review, or squish me (sorry, just been watching A Bug's LIfe). BUt, you get the general idea. OK? Please? Thanks.

Luv Mawgy
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From ANON - Mawgy on February 07, 2004
Well, a lot of authors have difficulty with action scenes. Maybe you do too, and it doesn't live up to your exectations? Perhaps that's why you're not happy with the way it worked out?

But, I loved it! Not only did Leggy save the day, but so did ERESTOR! Yes, that beautiful dark haired Elf that has captured my heart saved Elrond's life (therefore also Legolas' and Glorfindel's for surely they would fade if their lover died), so, technically, if it weren't for him and him alone, (and, well, maybe the mudslide that stopped them from getting there on time), all Elves would be dead, and Ungoliant would posses the Ring for surely she would at least swallow it as she eats Thranduil's body.

Well, no, I never did read that story. Ihad a teacher that read it to me though. Yeah, the grasshopper plays all summer while the ants work. Something about hard work pays off later (ants), but laziness always pays off now (grasshopper). So when winter came the grasshopper had nothing to eat. An ant took him in for the season, and after 3 months together, the grasshopper ged ged his ways and became like an ant and never played all summer ever again. I think that's right. It has been a good 13 years since I last had it spoken to me.

Anyway, apart from all the elves that we don't know of, everyone's alive (well, the main characters, which is what I was getting at), well, at least,... for now *dun dun dun!* Hmmm, will Glorfindel snap out of it? Will Thranduil give Elrond his ring of power back? Will Erestor top or bottom? All in the next eing ing chapter of 'A Healing Touch'. (well, hopefully all in the next chapter, though I'm willing to wait a while longer for the last one. Absence only makes the heart grow fonder, so I'll no doubt love whatever you happen to do with him, even if it is absoultely shit. (not that I expect it to be, just saying)).

Luv Mawgy

P.S. I'm so ashamed of this, but who's Narofea? I know that name, well, I think I do. Wait,... he's the dragon you idiot! (*cowers* just kidding, honest) Well, thanks, but no thanks. I would prefer an Elf, if that's alright with you. Somehow that seems to appeal to me much more. Besides, (not that I'm stating this as a challenge for you to try and achieve), I'd like to know how a dragon is supposed to give head without burning off the poor elf's cock? Besides, to a dragon Erestor would be puny, so Narofea would get no pleasure out of it, and he would be too large for Erestor. The best way I can see Erestor helping out were if he bottomed, but instead of Narofea being inside him, (Which would *literally* split him in two) Erestor would have to wrap his whole body around the dragonhood and slide up and down on it. So, sorry, but, while I'd like to see how that could be done, I don't think it would really fit into the whole 'feeling' of this story. But, hey, you're the author, do what you want (even though you seem to be doing a lot that I want), I'll no doubt love it anyway.
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