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From ANON - Mawgy on February 02, 2004
Why? I'd love for Haldir to make advances on Leggy, but Glorfindel be overbearing and protective of out young Princeling and fight Haldir away. Not only would it assert how much Glorfindel loves Leggy, but would build Leggy's self-asteem knowing that despite everything, people are still able to find him attractive. Ok, and, even if you don't put it in any time soon, then maybe once the story is finished, you could go back and add it in, please? For me? (I know, I ask a lot of things).

Unless... You plan for Erestor and the Elves of Imladris to be turning up eventually, and Haldir and Erestor are going to shag, in which case it would be stupid for aldir to go after two Elves. So, is that it? Is Erestor and Haldir going to shack up, or have I got it wrong for a change?

Ok, well, you can expect the pic in the next 24 hours or so (stupid scanner's playing up again).

Anyway, I just LOVED the scene between Leggy and Haldir about hunting. SO cute! Though I was expecting a little tent action, and am a little disappointed it wasn't there, though I'm sure there'll be a lot of Elf smut eventually, so I can wait.

Ooooh, so, all the Elves are on the brink of battle, eh? I hope all goes well for them. Especially wittle Legsie. Though, with Glorfindel watching his back(side *g*), I'm sure he's in good hands.

By the way, I thought it was so sweet when Leggy said he wouldn't mind Glorfindel sleeping naked on the beach. That was just adorable. Course, gotta feel sorry for Glorfindel being embarassed like that.

Anyway, can't wait for the next update.

Luv Mawgy
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From ANON - lilith on February 02, 2004
I just love Haldir in your fic. He�s so much like me :P Too bad he won�t be �interest� in our favourite prince of Mirkwood...Would be fun to see Glorfindel�s possessive side.
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From ANON - giggle on February 02, 2004
Legolas was very sweet when he expressed his link with the woods and it's inhabitants. I read another story where the prince wouldn't kill anything to eat and got sicen hen he watched others eat meat.
The story from Haldir was cute, mean spirited a little bit but cute. As Legolas said, thinking of Glorfindel naked in the sand is not a bad thing at all.
Here goes Thranduil again. All my fault. Why is it always about him? Elrond's answer was good for him though. And now it begins. SPIDERS!! Icky. And ORCS!! Nasty.
Yes Glorfindel and company go and burn up the baby spiders. Then they won't become big spiders and give me total creep-outs. I know they fulfill a purpose in natures grand scheme of things. I just don't want to have to see them do it. giggle
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From ANON - Lomawien on February 01, 2004
-bow- Thank yeh for the present! cha chapter and this one. ^_^ And it's okay with spelling, I know the feeling of wng tng to get something down before it *spoofs*. Elr Elrond took Theoden's line! -dance- I noticed! Not like I'm... I'm... -searches for a word- Angry..? about it, but normally I don't notice, but I did!

Aww, Zipper sounds so nifty. It's really funny because your's is a four year old, mine's twenty two! -anime style sweat drop- Yeah, she can drink /and/ drive /and/ smoke all at the same time, if she wanted too that is. she's only fifteen two hands, but I'm short, it all works. A bay I tht sht she was, but then people are saying to me she's a liver chestnut...So now I'm very confused, but a bay she stays. She's adorned with a star and all four socks, with proves to be quite annoying to clean for shows and the like. She's a thoroughbred something... Unknown! That's it, unknown! ^^ But she used to be a polo pony at some fancy-pancy rich girl boarding school, then she retired and got shuffled off to me. She'sl swl sweet, does anything really but she sometimes has an attitude problem. I let her be used for younger kid's lessons and it's very funny to watch them try to get her to do something, and she has this habit of craning her neck around and staring at you with this look, it's hilarous. I crawl under her belly all the time, though -looks around- Shh! Nobody's supposed to know that! I break the rules with her, it's so fun. But she hates ponies and donkeys, kinda sad really. To her there are miniature demons in disguise. I could talk about them forever and a day if i could. ^^
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From ANON - HaloHaldir on February 01, 2004
Wow! your really got me hooked... i come to this site almost every day to check for updates. you really do have quite some skill. anyidea when the next chapter will be out and how long this story will be? i love it!!!!!!
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From Aduial on February 01, 2004
Though I have not yet reviewed, you are doing marvelously! This is excellently written; you put a lot of feeling into your story and characters, and it shows.

However, for your latest chapter, 21, I have found something I find a little...odd. You wrote:
"Elrond had recognized me from his childhood and he and I became quick friends and he even dubbed me his second in command should anything ever happen."
I don't know if you stated before whether your story is AU or not (if you had, you may disregard this), but this is not possible. In the history of the Silmarillion, Earendil was the son of Idril Celebrindal, daughter of Turgon who was king of Gondolin, and Tuor, a mortal Man; Glorfindel was one of twelve lords of Gondolin at this time. The Fall of Gondolin occurred in FA 510 (or 511 according to some sources). This makes Earendil only seven years old when Gondolin fell and all but a two or three of its lords killed; Glorfindel was among one of these lords as he protected Tuor, Earendil, Idril and the survivors of Gondolin. Elrond would not be born until about FA 525, some 15 years later.

According to this history, Elrond would not be able to recognize Glorfindel. Unless you are saying Glorfindel was reborn in Arda, went to Aman and then was sent back to Arda but I did not get that impression when I was reading the chapter. I thought you would like to know in case you missed that fact. I'm fairly well-versed in the comings and goings surrong Gng Gondolin and its Elves (have to be otherwise I wouldn't get so many nice reviews about canon and continunity for The Flower and The Fountain).

In any case, I look forward to reading more. Can't wait for the next chapter; don't keep us waiting too long! :)

~Aduial
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From ANON - Ryou\'sMistress265 on January 31, 2004
Lol. I always loved the "because i wanted to," excuss.

Apperently they are using the same people. It wouldn't make sense if they had a different Elrond. I mean, those eyebrows are forever imprinted in my mind. There's no getting rid off it!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Lomawien on January 31, 2004
Adore the story -bows before the author-master- And I hope I'm not being a annoying nag, but yeah. -innocently whistles and points to spelling-
huff beats=hoof beats
up most =utmost
up-most pleasure=utmost
And I might be wrong(nope, I'm always wrong! ^_^) and not to be critical of the Elvish your using, -has loved learning new words- But I always thought 'Namarie' was spelled with two a's like 'Namaarie' ... Might just be me. -runs away, burying face in hands- I'm a spelling freak! -goes to cry in corner for being such a percfectionist-

-gasps- You have a horse! O_O What breed? I have a horse too! -hugs mare- She's a.. a... -ponders- thoroughbred with an orc attitude sometimes. ^_^

And I love the little Leggy flashbacks and scenes, the one with Gandalf was so funny. Little Legolas is so adorable, him having tantrums and bringing Nuarhir home. Could Nuarhir come back?! -puppy-dog eyes- He's sooooooooooooo cute! -wants to glomp Nuarhir-

-bows again- I am under the power of the author! Lovely, /lovely/ story and every new chapter is as good as the last, which they are all great!
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From ANON - lilith on January 31, 2004
Oh no ! More angst ! I can�t take it anymore... Please ! Just don�t kill anyone !
And I must say you made me blush slightly with this chapter :P
I just love Haldir in your story even though he appeared for a short time. There will be more of him, right ?

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From ANON - Mawgy on January 31, 2004
Oh yes, very sated. Thanks

And I like that Haldir and his brothers are in it. Gives the story a lot more scope. Any chance Haldir might notice Leggy's good looks and try to seduce our favourite princeling? Or have I got this prediction wrong for a change? *g*

Just one thing, 'up-most' should be 'ut-most' and 'shutter' should be 'shudder'. Not that it's a big deal as people know what you mean anyway, I just thought you might want to know.

Luv Mawgy

(way too many late nights and early mornings. falling asleep at the desk, sorry. I'll draw you ano pic pic to make up for this very short review, yes?).
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From ANON - giggle on January 31, 2004
That little Legolas and Mithrandir was just so cute arecirecious. I love him when he is little and come to think of it when he is grown up too.
Now here they go off to war. At least they will kill all the spiders they can. I really hate spiders.
I read two chapters at once so I need to comment on them both.
Yes go burn the old icky spider's babies. I always say no babies and no horses killed in stories I read but in just the last week I read a dwarf mommie and baby being burned up by a dragon and somone killwo hwo horsies. I have been devastated this so so to make up for it I will just think of spiders being destroyed and the queen and her eggs being burnt up. See I feel better already.
That was a very loving sandwich scene. How old is Legolas by now? He seems to be getting quite an education lately. I am glad that he will get over the orc attack. He doesn't deserve to have his life ruined by nasssty orcsss.
Thanks for the new chapters. I may have missed one because of my running around but I did get caught up. On to battle, ruin and a red sky. giggle
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From ANON - Steph on January 31, 2004
ch. 20 - Yeah, just when I think it can't get better you throw Haldir in the mix. Not to mention the amazing Legolas sandwich. But in all seriousness, aside from the awesome characterizations, your ever thickening plot is really well thought out. I love the whole scene where they decide who will go on the special mission, and that Legolas is stepping up to do his part. I hope you make him heroic or something, because I'd like to see him impress the others with his skill. And if I'm not mistaken, this is the first time Legolas has met the three Lorien brothers, so that is intersting addition to the story. Thank you so much for the fantastic update!
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From ANON - Silent Archer on January 30, 2004
I always thought Orohpin was Thranduil's father... slightly confused here. but that's okay... lol. GO KICK SOME ORC ASS! ^_^ lol okay well update again soon and i'll review you soon again.

GO PANTHERS! I don;t care if I'm from NE I hate the PATS and Panthers rule!
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From ANON - Mawgy on January 28, 2004
OH! I just LOVE that scene between Leggy and Gandalf! I can just imagine Leggy's little arms being elbow length covered in Gandalf's beard! It was SO cute! And Erestor smiled! I especially loved that bit! *g*

Anyway, thanks so much for the update, it was really very good, just like all the others. So, the big battle scene is approaching, hmmm? Excellent, can't wait for it and the outcome of it. Oh, and I liked how Thranduil spared a moment to ease Leggy a little before giving his last little speech, very nice moment.

I don't suppose you want to surprise us again with another quick up, do, do you?

Luv Mawgy

P.S. No, 'cos if I was on one of those shows, I'd give away all the secrets you have lined up for the rest of the story, and I hate it when people do it to me, so I don't want to do it to anyone else. Besides, if I did, then you wouldn't get as many readers and/or reviewers, as they'd already know the main aspects to the story and might be put off reading over what they already know.
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From ANON - jaylen on January 28, 2004
I like the additions you added in the opening chapters about when Legolas first came to Imladris, but this is a repost of an old story. Are you going to be making any other changes or is the storyline staying the same?
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