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Reviews for This, And My Heart Beside *added ch. 20/part 1*

By : jilly
  • From ANON - Twilight on March 14, 2004
    What a fun-loving and sweet action by Thranduil to lift up Hania's spirits. The elves in Ilandros must be very open about their feelings in front of others. Of course, I knew they missed each other tremendously, but I still marvelled how Uriong was so demonstative in greeting Belorfilad so passionately in front of his own men.
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  • From ANON - Sian on March 14, 2004
    Oh! He sounds so beautful! Very excited to see where this is going, and very glad to read another update! Thanks for the great read!
    D
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  • From ANON - Twilight on March 12, 2004
    Such a cute and heartwarming chapter with Legolas taking his leave of his family. His visit to Ilandros should be fascinating. Terrific story.
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  • From ANON - Brazgirl on March 10, 2004
    It was a very nice chapter! I loved the different moments and the scene that the king and the queen were together and his head lay on her lap was so sweet...
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  • From ANON - giggle on February 24, 2004
    Oh good. Another chapter.
    Hania sounds so sweet and real handful too. How could anyone, any female anyway resist Legolas' hair? She has my vote on this one.
    She doesn't speak. I like the healer's view. She's healthy and normal and once she starts talking she probably won't shut up. Enjoy the quiet. I knew is ths the wine that did it. I am glad. It was the best gift they could give. I like how earthy and sensual the Ilandrans (sp?) are.
    A two month visit plus travel time means Legolas and company will be gone quite a long while. At least the two warriors will get to make up for lost time. I look forward to that.
    The converation between the Princes was so wise beyond their years. The sun, moon and stars shine on us all. It unites us or at least it should.
    It was a very melanchly day when they all left. After all the good friends they made they know it will be a long time before they meet again. Of course they have an eternity so they will get to meet again.
    The green braid was a nice touch for the two warriors.
    I look so forward to you next installment. giggle
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  • From ANON - louise_oblique on February 24, 2004
    That was incredibly sweet

    huggs
    louise
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  • From ANON - Brazgirl on February 23, 2004
    Oh... Nice chapter! Legolas is old and young Hania is there! I loved the dialogue between Thranduil and Naniel. Nice done.
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  • From ANON - Sian on February 23, 2004
    Oh! I was so happy to see that you had updated! Wonderful and I can't wait for the two princes reunion!
    D
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  • From ANON - davie on February 20, 2004
    awseome!
    i dont usually ready fics with oc....but this is great!
    one thing i hope for, is that there'll be a large time gap, so the next time they meet they're both older
    but hey whatever you do im sure it'll be great!
    cant wait for the next chapter, please update soon!
    davie
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  • From ANON - giggle on February 09, 2004
    That was d*mn fine wine wasn't it? So now Legolas has to share his begetting day with a sibling. I am sure he will take it in stride. giggle
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  • From ANON - Brazgirl on February 09, 2004
    Cute ending they will have another heir I wonder how Legolas will react this time... I lohis his King too. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Brazgirl on February 02, 2004
    Hum... those captains were screaming their atraction to each other! How about the Nirkwood royal couple? Will they fall in temptation??? Update soooooooon!!!
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  • From ANON - Brin on February 02, 2004
    it may have been a short chapter but it was a good one ;D
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  • From ANON - giggle on February 02, 2004
    Legolas giving away his gifts to other less fortunate childlren sounds so sweet. I think that we (the fans) are the ones who have started this begetting day thing with presents and a big party. Think of how elves would deal with all those presents when they live forever. I can see this for a prince though, especially the one and only prince of a realm.
    The two captains eyeing each other is cute.
    The prince will never want to give away his bow and arrows. This couldn't have been a finer gift from Adar for our archer to be.
    Nice, very nice scene with one captain giving the other the pendant. Getting pretty warm there for both of them.
    Even at that young age Legolas is quite the squire asking Naneth for a dance and performing so gracefully.
    I loved the image of the two princes under the table watching the grown ups be less than grown up. It will be much more fun to go try out the new bow and arrows.
    I can't wait to see what that wine is going to do to Mirkwood's Royal Couple. They might have a night to really remember. Maybe they will have a double begetting day to celebrate in the future.
    Very nice scene with the two captains. It was written so they could both remain strong men. I do like that type of m/m scene. I don't always care much for feminizing one of the partners. You might as well write het slash if you don't want two strong capable men together.
    From canon we know that there were isolated groups of elves that did not ally themselves with the three most populous and strongest groups. To me I just think of this visiting group as one of the more prosperous.
    This is such an interesting story. Thank you for sharing it with us. giggle
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  • From ANON - giggle on January 12, 2004
    Oh parents. They have to kiss and cuddle don't they. Good thing they do or there wouldn't be any elflings around to bnoyenoyed by it.
    So we are just getting ready for the party here and have one excited elfling on our hands. I liked how much his parents care for him, adore him really. A little foreshadowing here about the prince as a grown warrior. Very nice.
    Well you have promised us a feast of words as well as a fictional feast in the next chapter and I look forward to it. giggle
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