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Reviews for This, And My Heart Beside *added ch. 20/part 1*

By : jilly
  • From ANON - Brazgirl on January 12, 2004
    Nice, cute chapter!!! Awwww 'you are not going to kiss againhow how cute is that??? Hum... warriors trainning without tunics? That is a very interesting view... But I want more!!!
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  • From ANON - Cariad on January 03, 2004
    Multicultural elves - yay!!! Adorable elflings - yay!!! Drama, suspense, romance - yay! yay! yay! *dances around room smiling foolishly* What a great AU fic - I stumbled upon it for the first time today, just read all 5 chapters and am completely in love with it! I'll be high all day from all the lovely treacly sweetness. Belatedly - I hope you're all recovered from your fall. Thanks for this wonderful tale. I am totally psyched for your next update - can't wait!!!!
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  • From ANON - Brazgirl on January 03, 2004
    Cute chapter! Little Legolas scared... aww!!!
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  • From ANON - Sian on January 03, 2004
    Ah, you make me smile with every update. They are so sweet and wonderful. I can't wait for them to grow up, I know I'm way ahead...
    Please continue with your wonderful story!
    D
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  • From ANON - giggle on January 02, 2004
    Yes the ollo berries would have been ruined if anyone had died when the prince had to be rescued.
    Now magic. You know Galadriel tells Sam, in the book, that elves don't really do magic. It is just they can do things that Men can't and so Men think of it as magic. Prince I says it was a gift that all elves had long ago but it has to be taught so to us it would be elven magic but to tit wit would just be another lesson to learn and Legolas gets to learn it. That is very cool.
    I can't wait to see what you have in store for these two princes. giggle
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  • From ANON - Brazgirl on December 27, 2003
    Aw! Poor little prince! I am glad Legolas found him! Please, update soon, I am sooooo curious!
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  • From ANON - Sian on December 27, 2003
    Yea Gods! I am so loving this story! Wondly wly written! I am already in love with the young princes, please post more soon!
    Thank you
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  • From ANON - Twilight on December 27, 2003
    Very sweet fot foolish of Isalith to try to gather those berries for Legolas. Don't see how he thought he could climb down the steep cliff to get to them, unless he is used to climbing steep places.

    It was a nice daring rescue of the elfling, though the details of the rescue effort and the mechanics of it was rather confusing to me. A side lstorstory between Belorfilad and Uriong sounds interesting.
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  • From ANON - kiki on December 26, 2003
    Aww poor Ishalith.But at least he was rescued and wilve.Pve.Pliz more.
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  • From ANON - giggle on December 26, 2003
    Poor Isilath broke his leg and who knows what else just for a begetting day present for Legolas. At least that is what I suspect. And now the Mirkwood guard captain is also hurt. Well they will just have to get better in the next chapter. Thanks for an update in the holiday season. giggle
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  • From ANON - giggle on December 21, 2003
    I am trying to get caught up after the flu. I am so sorry you fell and broke your wrist. Pleasee cae care and you can just think about plot bunnies till you are better. Due to the flu and the winter holiday season a lot of people aren't able to post anyway. Also lots of time at the movie is probably slowing things down.

    I love the way the two elfling princes are getting along. I hope Isiliah (sp) didn't go to pick those berries for Legolas for his begetting day present. And now Legolas might be in big trouble. He never listens to warnings in any story I have ever read about him. Stubborn elf. giggle
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  • From ANON - Rose on December 21, 2003
    I am very sorry to hear you hurt youself and particually in the middle of such a good piece of fic, it really is wonderful and very original, hope you have time to write more soon.
    Rose
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  • From ANON - Twilight on December 21, 2003
    Wondering where could the other prince have gone to, especially since he is so shy and timid? So nice to know that both princes now have a friend in each other. Their friendship is so heartwarming to read since both are so lonely. Update soon please, don't know what has sneaked up on Legolas.
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  • From ANON - Brazgirl on December 21, 2003
    Your fic is really nice. I liked the story and the friendship between the two princes. But I am curious about the effects of the perfume... Take care of your wrist!
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  • From ANON - Teri on December 21, 2003
    Jilly, I love all of your writings. I really appreciate relarelationship between Legolas and Thranduil. It warms my heart. This new character Isalith is intriguing not to mention these new type of elves from Ilandros. Did you make them up or did you read of them somewhere else? In your second chapter you said you thought you broke your wrist. Hopefully, you are not in too much pain. Please take care.
    Teri






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