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Reviews for Greenleaf&Imladris 11-In the Silence of Our Hearts

By : MPB
  • From ANON - Twilight on December 12, 2003
    Another great chapter! So much hurt and pride between the two now. First, it was Glorfindel's clumsy hurtful words that humiliated and scarred Erestor. Now, it is Erestor's harsh angry words that has wounded and crushed Glorfindel.

    I enjoy the feisty and frank character that you have given to Arwen. It is often very hard to resolve misunderstandings or painful conflicts. Fortunately, the Twins, Arwen and Legolas are there to give Erestor and Glorfindel the hard spoken truth.
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  • From ANON - giggle on December 11, 2003
    The big question. Is it truly over between the two of them.
    Nice angst here. And overweening pride. And hurt feelings and on and nd ond on.
    Nice to know elves have trouble with saying they are sorry also. There could possibly have been a few less kinslayings if they had been a little more forgiving.
    Now it is Erestor's turn to be humble and bend the knee. giggle
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  • From ANON - HHS on December 11, 2003
    I want them to reconcile.
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  • From ANON - Aly on December 11, 2003
    Awwww... Poor Glorfindel! Bears his heart and gets it stepped on. Hmm... wonder how long it's going to take Erestor to take him back. :)
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  • From ANON - Anita on December 11, 2003
    As much as I symphatize with Erestor, calling Glorfindel 'Noldo' was a bit below his standard. That was uncalled for, but it does reflect very well how hurt Erestor is...he is so hurt and angry that he just lashes out without a second thought.
    Very good chapter (as always :) ), so much emotions going on here and you have captured it very well...am I going to make you blush now *bg*
    And, as always again, I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - louise_oblique on December 11, 2003
    Oh I want to cry :( that was brilliant!!!!! :):);) so emotive. you just want to bang their heads together. anyway will hopefully get sorted. sorry short again, yep u guessed it uni (luckily just this week and the next to go)

    huggs
    louise
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  • From ANON - Twilight on December 11, 2003
    Wow, great discourse and interaction between Glorfindel and Erestor! Glorfindel really spoke his heart and feelings with eloquence to Erestor. More please!
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  • From ANON - Pervy Elf on December 10, 2003
    You know, I really love the way that you don't end such revelations as Glorfindel's on a happy note. The suffering and actions of Erestor are quite understandable, and all too often do authors resort to characters unrealistically reacting to certain situations such as these. In my opinion, if Erestor had readily forgiven Glorfindel and the two becamlovelovely, dovey' without any confrontation, the effect of your story might have been slighted. As I said, I think that in having Erestor reject Glorfindel you made the right decision.
    Anyways, I'm quite fond of Erestor and Glorfindel, so these chapters are a real treat for me. Especially with you writing them.
    On a side note; I've never really been fon fond of Arwen, but somehow I feel inexplicably drawn to your Arwen. Grrr...how did you do it?
    As always, another wonderful chapter.

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  • From ANON - giggle on December 10, 2003
    Well, I am amazed. The little quartet had good advice to give and Glorfindel took it. One thing about straight talking people when they finally get it right they just lay it on the line. So now the ball is in Erestor's court. So do you think they have a form of tennis in middle earth? Well, no matter.
    Poor Erestor. So hurt and now to learn he could have had what he wanted so long ago if it hadn't been for Glorfindel's naivete. Well at least when they finally get together they can make up for lost time. Sometimes things are sweeter when you have waited because you don't take them for granted. giggle
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  • From ANON - HHS on December 10, 2003
    That's sad!I hope that Erestor and Glorfindel reconcile soon.
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  • From ANON - Twilight on December 10, 2003
    Terrific next day meeting bet Glo Glorfindel as the embarassed one, and Erestor as the unexpectedly pleasant and secretly hopeful one. Despite all his experience and age, Glorfindel has not learned to be more diplomatic or sensitive in saying certain things or reading people well.

    I agree totally with Glorfi in in him not getting involved with an under-aged hero-worshipping elfling like Erestor all those years ago. Although, it would seem to me that Glorfindel would have to deal with many hero-worshipping pupils who fall in love with him over the years. He should have known how to handle it in a more gentle manner, unless Erestor was his first to deal with this situation.

    Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - HHS on December 10, 2003
    How sad!I want Erestor and Glorfindel to let go of the past and move on.That is to say with each other.
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  • From ANON - louise_oblique on December 10, 2003
    Fantastic. love the Erestor Glofindel pairing, looking forward to the next part. me running to tutorial now ;)

    huggs
    louise
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  • From ANON - giggle on December 10, 2003
    Some elves obviously do not have a way with words. They don't know how to let other elves down easy. Glorfindel is such an elf. What a mess he made of things.

    As far as the four youngsters helping, this is the blind leading the blind. Someone has to straighten these two out but I hate to think of the trials all the adults are going to have to face before things mellow out around there.

    Poor Erestor, nursing a broken heart for all these many years. So much pain and angst. I love it. More please. giggle
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  • From ANON - Anita on December 09, 2003
    *lol*

    A nice inter her here! I am a fan of Glorfindel/Erestor things...even though we really don't know anything about Erestor (he just has a few lines in 'The council of Ed')d') and yet I have formed a complete mental picture of him, solely based on fanfics, I now realise!
    Anyway, I like this and look forward to the next chapter.
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