Click Here!

Reviews for Greenleaf & Imladris 13 - The Choices We Must Make

By : MPB
  • From ANON - mel on January 02, 2004
    Does my mind forsee a double wedding in the future?? I hope Nimeithel takes matters into her own hands, not only with Elladan, but her (blind) big brother as well. He loves Ro but doesn't even realize it himself! What will it take to make him see?
    I LOVE the fast updates -- thanks for not makingwaitwait weeks or even months for the next chapter. This is one of my favorite fics right now. I can't wait for Ellado uno unleash his feelings for Nimeithel.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - viewerv on January 02, 2004
    Ooooh two weddings! Well about time.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Tinni on January 02, 2004
    Good.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - MJLuvsPolar on January 01, 2004
    Ah Legolas, blind, blind, blind! I couldn't help but be really saddened for Elrohir at Legolas' rash statement about never giving his heart. Silly Elf, how 'bout you think about *why* you couldn't bear to lose Elrohir you git! I find it actually a bit annoying that he *still* doesn't realise that he has indeed given his heart away. The fact that Legolas is worrying about something happening to Elrohir that *he* cannot prevent is the thin edge of the wedge really isn't it? I can understand his reluctance, but I fear the only thing that will really open eye eyes to how he *really* feel about Elrohir IS for something terrible to happen to him. Okay, that was a depressing thought! Well my comfort is that Nimeithel seems to have a good handle on her feelings (and *she* also experienced first hand the death of her mother) and doesn't seem the least backward in telling her siblings when to get their heads outtheitheir...er... you get my drift! Eressė, I think perhaps you need to post another chapter. Thanks.

    Marie :-)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - viewerv on January 01, 2004
    O I hope there is at least one wedding by the end of this part.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Gilraen on December 30, 2003
    Hmmm .. I am not sure if i like Elladan and Nimeithel as a couple :/. I just don't like her for HIM! Well it's your storry and I love it so far so I'll just have to wait and read! Please more updates!! :)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - MJLuvsPolar on December 30, 2003
    Oh I see, so Legolas trusts the twins with his life but not with Nimeithel's virtue! ROTFLOL. I was especially amused by his direction thae noe not be left alone with either Twin! Bit jealous are we Legolas??

    As usual a great part. Next one please.

    Marie ;-)

    Report Review

  • From ANON - Tinni on December 30, 2003
    Well.... what is going to happen next I wonder.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Aly on December 29, 2003
    So is Thranduil going to loose two of his children to the twins? It's sure looking that way, even if Legolas is still in denial. Can't wait to see how this turns out.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - spiffy on December 29, 2003
    Your work continues to be a delight. You are so very talented and imaginative and I'm always very pleased and
    curious when I see you've added a chapter. Loved your recent plot twists. I can only hope you will want to continue
    to write for as long as I'm prepared to read. That, my friend, will be for a very long time indeed!


    Report Review

  • From ANON - Gilraen on December 29, 2003
    Oh this was good!! I knew it ws Elladan all the ime but yeah i guess everyone did! lol
    Great storry please update often cos i live for it!!!!!!!! lol
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anita on December 29, 2003
    *lol*!!

    Bottom it is than *bg* Oh dear...what I said in my previous review was just a casual comment. I had no idea I would be right (although I very much wanted to be right :) )!!
    Anyway...as you have guessed, I really like this turn of events *g*. Will something more come of it or is the sister going to jump Elladan?
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Eresse on December 29, 2003
    Hi Pervy Elf,

    I'm not fond of replying to reviews publicly and much prefer to respond via email but you raised a subject I've been receiving mail about. Re the names of the original characters--they were mostly either names created by Tolkien himself which he ultimately did not use in The Hobbit, LOTR or The Silmarillion (like Ailios, Almariel and Grithnir) or I put together names based on Sindarin words. Hence, Melthoron means golden eagle, Brethildor is roughly beech lord, Nimeithel is white spring, Ithilwen means moon lady, Sirgon is river stone, Mithrael means grey lake, Heledir ingfingfisher, Tathariel is willow maiden and so on and so forth. If we go by Legolas' name in particular it seems the Greenwood Elves had very poetic, nature-inspired names and I wanted to capture that. A very few are completely meaningless I admit (such as Helmir and Iorwen) but I tried to keep them as elvish-sounding as possible.

    As for Melthoron readily accepting Elladan's advances, well, let's just say that r fir five years of simultaneous temptation and repression, he was ripe for the picking with someone kne knew how to do it. Considering the twins' experience and expertise in that area... you get the picture. But it's ok if you feel uneasy with this premise. I don't expect everyone to agree with me on this. The more opinions, the merrier and the more interesting.

    There will definitely be more elf-loving between Elrohir and Legolas as you put it. They are the point of the whole series after all. But Elladan does get his moment in the spotlight. And yes, I will include events from the War of the Ring but not extensively or in great detail. I only used events that will directly affect Elrohir and Legolas' future together.

    To Shattered_Light, I can't promise I'll never stop writing! But I can promise several more stories, including three novellas, before this series comes to an end and maybe a couple of unrelated fics afterwards (also Legolas/Elrohir) that I wrote just for the fun of it.

    Thanks for such wonderful reviews. I always learn something from your feedback. Hope you're all enjoying the holidays.

    warmest regards,
    Eressė




    Report Review

  • From ANON - Pervy Elf on December 29, 2003
    Forgive me for misspelling Nimeithel's name. It's very late, and I don't know what I was thinking...Good lord I wasn't even close! Sorry again. I never was that great at spelling.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Pervy Elf on December 29, 2003
    I don't think that I have mentioned how much I absolutely *adore* your story lately. Alas, I have been to engrossed in waiting for the next chapter to review properly. Which seem to be getting shorter as the story progresses, but that could just be me.

    But that's not the point. I love how you handled Melthoron in these chapters. Melthoron learing of his own wants from one that he doesn't care for (to say the least), was amazing. I love how unnerved he is when Elladan reveals himself. The twins are absolutely wicked, but that's why we love them so. I don't quite know why, but Melthoron accepting Elladan's advances so readily bothers me. Not that it's a problem, just a minor tick.

    I don't know if this is just me, but everytime that I read Melthoron's name, I keep thinking of melethron. Was this sort of intentional, or just my overactive brain?

    Anyways, I'm curious as to see how Elladan handles Nemethiel's attraction towards him. Will he accept it, or turn her down because she is Legolas' sister? Your story has me constantly in suspense. Mayhap we will see more elf-lovin' with Elrohir and Legolas? Then again, I have a horribly dirty little mind when it comes to those two.

    Oh, I was wondering if you also plan to include the events during the war? It should be interesting to see how Elrohir and Legolas' relationship evolves.

    As always, wonderful writing and I look forward to the next chapter. Soon, I hope...
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!