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Reviews for The Forsaken

By : Shanastay
  • From ANON - witchseeker on September 10, 2006
    i like this story so far. you are a very talented writter. but what i would like to know is is there a story before this one? a prequel? something that tells us who shar is and how she and Haldir came to be together? and together in modern times? please write me and let me know for i would very much like to read any stories before this one that would inlighten me more to this story.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on July 20, 2005
    Found this today and read straight through. Will you give us more? We need to know what happened and who did these horrible things to Erestor.
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  • From ANON - Zelha on July 10, 2005
    Hey, Shana!
    I know it's been a looooong time, but I would like to keep reading about your stories...
    I also read that you only update with reviews (cheater xD), so here is mine :D
    Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease, end this story! PLEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAASEEEEEEEEEE!!!
    xD
    There you go, a plead and thumbs up!
    Congratulations for your stories!
    Zelha
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  • From dawnenab on October 10, 2004
    Really am looking forward to more on this one too. I want to see what happens with Tal & E. Please update soon, as there are still those of us who love your stories.

    ~Ali
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  • From ANON - Am on August 21, 2004
    =)
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  • From ANON - Tal on July 19, 2004
    OK. I have been following this on aff, but I noticed there are no reviews here yet. This is absolutely a wonderful story!!! One of the best.

    *Bows to the masta* This story is gaining immense depth. Your descrpitions of the network and explanations of where they have all been over time is great! It is wonderful how you are tying several of the stories together as well. I am so proud to have been part of this plot bunny.

    AWWWW Poor E. Another wonderful chapter to a very promising story. It is wonderful to see this nurturing side har har and Haldir. E definitely went to the right place!!

    Sam cracks me up. ADHD posterchild was precious. That "Who the hell are you" comment was so appropriate for her. She privdes the perfect amoutn of comic relief to this situation...ligthens things up a bit.

    This story has amazing potential at the hands of such a gifted writer. I really enjoy all of your stories immensely. They are helping me through a lot of issues we have in common.

    Poor E. Who could do such a thing? *cleans gun and looks around for sharp objects* Fear not people....We will be exacting revenge on his behalf. You know that, right? This was a painful chapter to read, but absolutely necessary to the story to understand what horrors he was subjected to.

    In spite of the heat here in AZ, I now have goosebumps nearly head to toe after reading the second half of Torment in its entirety. It gives me the much-needed resolve to survive the next few months here. I could not have put this into words any better myself. Beautifully written. Perfect lyrics....as always. My nerves of steel, spine of Jell-O self is waiting not-so patiently to make my exit and.....believe me when I say that likely this song will be blaring on my stereo on repeat when I do leave.

    MUSH WARNING: I thank you for being a friend and listening through all this crap. Its good to see it inspire such a wonderful story with enormous potential for offshoots. The lyrics you suggest are, as usual, right on the money!!!!

    I seriously cannot wait until the next update! You are foretelling my future, so to speak.

    You have such a way with words, it leaves me speachless. I rely on you to be my voice. I follow this story with eager anticipation.

    Great face off with Shar and Janessa. Sam's character brings another interesting dimension to the story as well. (E forgives Sam for the bum comment.)

    Tia - Tal


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  • From ANON - earth guide on May 05, 2004
    My my my! This is quite a turn of events. Janessa and Shar aka "clone" are certianly an interesting dvelopment! Poor Janessa! No actually I take that back...she's got Legolas! She's just being greedy now. Now, does this story reveal the eventual ending of Crux and Twisted? Or is it and AU offshoot of those stories? Enquiring minds want to know! IE finish Crux and Twisted ;) !

    the earth guide
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  • From ANON - Billy on May 01, 2004
    Hi. I noticed you deleted my review. I wish to apologize for upsetting you; it wasn't my intention. I honestly love your plot and will continue to read and love your fic. Ie lee learned my lesson and will from now on only leave an author a review that tells them what I like. I will no longer also tell them what I don't. I am new to reviewing and tho tha that an author wouldn't mind recieving an honest opinion.

    So, please forgive me.

    ~Billy
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  • From ANON - candy on April 30, 2004
    i love all your stories but you have to tell me the order to read them in please ..........AND write faster please haha THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR THEM CANDY
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  • From ANON - babmidnight on April 24, 2004
    interesting. I've never been around a person after they've been raped. It's a sad thing though I bet. I like how when you wrote this chapter, you gave a reason why E moved awaom oom others touch, without saying more than needed, like the Haldir and Shar's thoughts. Or perhaps it was shar only. Everything is described very well. Man, I was so waiting for the teen to get wacked in the head, and then bam! Elena wacks her. lol :)
    Brenda
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  • From ANON - babmidnight on April 24, 2004
    good chapter. Now I wish you would up date twisted again. Want to know what happened between Legolas, Janessa, and Haldir. *Pouts* That's amazing how Legolas and Haldir can sense when Janessa are Shar are in destress. Talk about an total improvement fron, tn, too bad they were born way before man. lol Man, wish men were like that. They need serious homing devices sometimes. Why couldn't they come with one? lol I like that scene with the ears. Very cute. Took me to minute to catch on. Vulcan ears, haven't heard of that one before...then again I was never into star trek too much. :)
    Brenda
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  • From ANON - Crimson Starlight on April 24, 2004
    Heh. Simply because you mentioned that you were doing the same sort of crazy-style disclaimers in your review, I came and checked out the disclaimers for this story. Great fun, all nd..nd...*nodnods*
    (I would actually read the story, and not just the disclaimers, but AU's aren't really my cup of tea, and I have a limited amount of time on the computer at the moment due to parents)
    So, yeah. Carry on with the insane disclaimers...*skims over the first chapter* And the good writing...hm. Maybe I shall read this...

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  • From ANON - Kieran Da Werewolf Elf on April 24, 2004
    Keep it goin'!I really like this story so far.
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  • From ANON - Alydar on April 24, 2004
    Aw...how terrible! please update soon if you can.
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  • From ANON - KnowInsight on April 24, 2004
    Good for Tia.
    *sends a hug to Erestor*
    You may not be great or even ok, but it'll get better.
    Am

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