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Reviews for The Forsaken

By : Shanastay
  • From dawnenab on April 13, 2004
    Ok...so I find myself here once again...reviewing the bloody disclaimers. LOL I wouldn't except...they're just so damned good! I haven't laughed so hard in a very long time. Thanks for this Shana! You have once again blown me away.

    *runs off to read the rest of the new ones*

    ~Ali
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  • From ANON - rossui on April 12, 2004
    I'm an addict! Love the humor, the detail, the "disclaimers", the human/elfen touch. More, please!
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  • From dawnenab on April 04, 2004
    Poor Erestor. Glad he has Shar and Hal to comfort him. Intrigued with where the 2nd part is going. Yet another reason to 'stay tuned'

    A+ as usual

    ~Ali
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  • From ANON - Tia - Tal on April 03, 2004
    First things first. Poor E. Who could do such a thing? *cleans gun and looks around for sharp objects* Fear not people....We will be exacting revenge on his behalf. You know that, right? This was a painful chapter to read, but absolutely necessary to the story to understand what horrors he was subjected to.

    Second: In spite of the heat here in AZ, I now have goosebumps nearly head to toe after reading the second half of Torment in its entirety. It gives me the much-needed resolve to survive the next few months here. I could not have put this into words any better myself. Beautifully written. Perfect lyrics....lwaylways. My nerves of steel, spine of Jell-O self is waiting not-so patiently to make my exit and.....believe me when I say that likely this song will be blaring on my stereo on repeat when I do leave.

    MUSH WARNING: I thank you for being a friend and listening through all this crap. Its good to see it inspire such a wonderful story with enormous potential for offshoots. The lyrics you suggest are, as usual, right on the money!!!!

    I seriously cannot wait until the next update! You are foretelling my future, so to speak.

    Tia - Tal

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  • From ANON - Rainien on April 03, 2004
    Poor Erestor! And, somehow, I don't think we've been told all of what happened to him. If Tia is busy, you just send that poor Elf my way. I'll take him in. *S* Hmm...maybe that didn't sound *quite* right. I'll take care of him! Wait...that wasn't right either. I'll make it all better! Oh, hell. LOL All of those sound almost sexual and that's NOT what I meant! Erestor always did bring out the "mommy" instincts in me. He always makes me want to tuck him in bed and feed him chicken soup.
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  • From ANON - Amber on April 01, 2004
    Awww... poor Erestor. Good luck on healing Erestor.
    Liked Sam. =)
    Am
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  • From dawnenab on March 30, 2004
    Ok. This is me begging. I don't usually beg, but I am more than willing to bend my neck if you will jusVE MVE ME MORE!!!!!!

    I feel like a junkie over here.

    *prostrates herself & begs*

    PPPPLLLLLLLEEEEEEAAAAASSSSSEEEEEE!

    ~Ali
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  • From ANON - Tal on March 28, 2004
    AWWWW Poor E. Another wonderful chapter to a very promising story. It is wonderful to see this nurturing side of Shar and Haldir. E definitely went to the right place!!

    Sam cracks me up. ADHD posterchild was precious. That "Who the hell are you" comment was so appropriate for her. She privdes the perfect amoutn of comic relief to this situation...ligthens things up a bit.

    This story has amazing potential at the hands of such a gifted writer. I really enjoy all of your stories immensely. They are helping me through a lot of issues we have in common.

    Tal
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  • From dawnenab on March 27, 2004
    Ok Shana, I am really starting to sound like a broken record here. First of all, GREAT UPDATE! Second of all, you need to know that you have completely spoiled me for Haldir fiction. I have only found one other author that I can even bear to read with regard to our beloved Marchwarden, and you've even inspired me to try a Haldir fic out myself. Maybe I'll let you know when it's posted and you could tell me what you think?

    At any rate, You are the best girl! Keep up the updates, cause I go crazy with the waiting!

    ~Ali
    Proud member of the Tattooed and Pierced Women of the World
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  • From ANON - Rainien on March 27, 2004
    Oh excellent! This is one of my favorite stories of yours. i'm so glad you updated! *S*

    Poor Erestor. Whoever hurt him needs to be shot. Several times, actually, beginning with the ankles and working upward, waiting a few days in between shots.

    Well done, my dear friend. I'm looking forward to more.
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  • From dawnenab on March 25, 2004
    Shana,

    I feel like you may get bored reading my reviews, but I can't help telling you each time hwo fabulous they are. Yve tve taken me ina whole different direction. Made me dislike someone I really like (reserving that for this pculacular fic tho...lol) and made me laugh so hard I nearly spit my drink all over the desk. LOVE the T-shirt!

    I am looking forward to yet another update. *runs off to read another of Shana's great stories*

    Later!

    ~Ali
    Proud member of the Tattooed and Pierced Women of the World
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  • From ANON - Tux on February 26, 2004
    LOL Shana! Were you a *teeny* bit miffed at me when you wrote this?! ;) j/k
    Anyway, things are getting interesting, what next?!

    *hugs*
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  • From ANON - Maria on February 26, 2004
    I enjoyed your story. It was well written and i hope you plan on updating soon.
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  • From ANON - Rainien on February 26, 2004
    Well done! And we get Erestor's story next? YIPPEE!!! Can't wait. *S*
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  • From on February 23, 2004
    This is definately intriguing. I love your writing style. Keep it up :) Great job :)
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