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Reviews for Two Towers

By : Tahina
  • From ANON - VampireJesse on January 02, 2004
    That was very sexy, loved it... I've seen *a perfect Murder* yesterday and somehow I can clearly visualize Viggo doing this, *gg*.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on January 01, 2004
    Good story, hot for sure, but one thing:

    Hthe the time I didn't know whose POV the story was from, and that's a big problem. You always need to clearly differentiate which character is doing what, it's just not good writing if you don't. Also, it's a bad idea to switch POV's every paragraph or two.
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