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By : Catalina
  • From ANON - HHS on December 29, 2003
    Oh for goodness sake!Why can't those two just get along and say I LOVE YOU to each other?
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  • From ANON - Tinni on December 29, 2003
    Well, no wonder Arwen was Elrond's favorite.
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  • From ANON - nefertari on November 14, 2003
    This fic is great!!!!
    please update!!!!
    Looking forward to it!!!
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  • From ANON - The first female super agent on November 08, 2003
    Have you finished this? If you have, I hate your ending, if you have not, hurry up with more.
    I need more, you see. Err, yeah....
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  • From ANON - Cass on September 24, 2003
    I am again awed by your remarkable ability to weave such magical, canon-like stories. I check this website everyday for updates for Suffering and everyday I am disappointed yet again. I hope the Muse has visited you recently and new chapters will appear soon. The way you write Elrond and Celebrian is just totally incredible- it's almost like I'm reading in Appendix A to ROTK- "Part of the Tale of Elrond and Celebrian." Of course, I'm not so sure that JRRT would go into such graphic detail, but it would be interestingly written- after thisthis was a novel written for teenagers and older to read. I eagerly await the next chapter, Losse! Keep writing, and make it a good one! ;)
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  • From ANON - Tinni on September 02, 2003
    Did I review this? I can't remember, anyway. Good chapter, so does this mean Arwen has been conceived? Will they finally admit their love for each other. Will that damn desk break and Celebrian end up seeing the letter? O please, please, please let the next cha be be a happy one. I think poor Elrond and Celebrian have suffered enough, I mean eight chapters is a long time.
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  • From ANON - alena on August 30, 2003
    I don't even know where to begin, with all the absolutely marvelous descriptions and the flow of words...Celebrķan's talk with her father I loved especially; it was just so right on the mark in every way. And all the descriptions of the house in the yuletide season, Elrohir and Elladan, and the short but wonderful bit about Glorfindel...And the frozen layer of that awful poise of El and Brķ. Gah.

    The "kisses bestowed and granted by fėar locked behind lidded eyes" are beautifully romantic and heartbreakingly sad at once.

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  • From ANON - Cassandra the Heart Nut on August 21, 2003
    Good God, woman! You really know what you're doing! I love how you've brought Celeborn into the loop. Hopefully he'll get to the bottom of this soon and seese ese silly elfies straight! *~^* The tumble in the bed was quite vivid... were they really dreaming the same dream? That says a lot if they're so in tune with each other that this would happen. I hope beyond hope that this resolves when they wake up- it's screaming for resolve here! However, the angst just keeps going and going and going far longer than I ght ght it would. You have done an excellent job putting this into the relationship. It seems to be canon, it's so good, Losse. I eagerly await the next installment!
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  • From ANON - Isis on August 20, 2003
    Uhm, the 1-0-0 looked so nice but I just HAD to review!

    As always, I love your description. I plant such great images in my head while reading and never does it feel wordy or unnecessary. And how seamless the description are connected with the dialogue! Well done. *Isis is in awe once again*

    And then of course, there is the plot. Evilness upon evilness! I'm surprised that El and Brķ don't burst from all the UST. Well, ok, *cough* it's not unresolved any more. Whoopee, hot dream sex that's all to real! That's going to be one hell of a "day after" wake up.

    Personally, I pray that Celeborn or Galadriel will figure something out. Celeborn has heard one side yet.... Eeep! The tension is killing me!! (Not really but... sorry, I'm a little hyper today... ;) )
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  • From ANON - Amy-chan/Ereinion on August 20, 2003
    Eeeeeeeeee! [bouncebouncebounce] I can't wait to see the morning after! Will Celebrian wake first and accuse Elrond of rape? Will Elrond wake first and wonder what in the world they've done? Will they both realize that they do indeed love one another and that love is returned?!! Write!! [begs and offers up an Ereinion-clone as incentive]
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  • From ANON - Pandora on August 20, 2003
    OMDE! I cant believe you left it at that!!!!! Please please pe wre write more soon! You have me on the edge of my seat.
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  • From ANON - Rose Red on August 20, 2003
    Ooooh, Hooded!Wet!Elrond... :D Very nice.
    I loved the father-daughter time with Celeborn and Bri too. :)

    Ah! Evilness! What are they going to do the next morning? Does this mean Arwen? *lil squee*

    Great stuff as usual! :)
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  • From on August 20, 2003
    Evilevilevilevilevilevil... *looks innocent* ;)
    Wonderful tension-building in here, the conversation between Celeborn and Celebrķan remains my favourite bit (I'm spoiled, what can I say?).
    Every time you do it again, showing that the love between Elrond and Celebrķan is there, and yet every time they come remotely near to confessing it they are both (usually) too stubborn.

    Now I'm very interested how the two of them are going to be confronted with the results of this dream... *cough* ;)
    Evilly good as usual. :D
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  • From ANON - linweseregon on August 20, 2003
    If ever I felt like banging two elves' heads together it is now.
    This is so well written, very much in the Tolkein style, well apart from the sex. Please keep writing and please make it a happy ending.
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  • From ANON - Nessamelda on August 20, 2003
    I loved the descriptions of the Wedding Celebrations - and the banners. Perfect and so sad.

    Your writing is just wonderful *huggles El and Bri again* :'(

    The smut was wonderful (but it wasn't just a dream was it?)
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