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Reviews for Suffering

By : Catalina
  • From ANON - LaJiggles on June 03, 2003
    Poor, injured El. And Celebrian gets to nurse him back to health! Those scenes are so tender and loving. I just wish they would get to the point and realize one another's love alreay, though. It's so frustrating! ;)

    And that part where they are agreeing to live a life together yet separate. How evil. You know what you are doing to me? Do you know how this is driving me into utter madness?

    *pokes you to write more, quickly*
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  • From ANON - LaJiggles on June 03, 2003
    GRRRRRRRR...... This was a simply evil chapter. EVIL!!!! >:( You are so mean to the El and the Bri. Why are they not acting out those dreams instead of fighting so much? WHY!!!

    But the boys are just precious, and the scene with El and Bri, all that tension, really. It was very well done and it just broke my heart to see her cast off her ring like that.
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  • From ANON - LaJiggles on June 03, 2003
    Aw... lil elflings. And for a moment there it's almost like they're a family. They let themselves go for a tiny moment, and their tenderness shows through. Loverly, really.

    And I have a feeling we'll be seeing that letter again. Most definitely. *cough*
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  • From ANON - LaJiggles on June 03, 2003
    *growl* We don't like Luinen in the least, precioussss.... Child-bride indeed! *scoffs*

    Ah, that scene was just... um... loverly. The passion. I love the way they let themselves go here. And an interesting way for the twins to be concieved.

    I was just thinking. This does seem to offer a most interesting idea about why Arwen was born 129 years after the twins. She was the product of love, maybe, after all of this is resolved.
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  • From ANON - LaJiggles on June 03, 2003
    Gah! Chapter 2 is annoying. I just want to shove them together and tell them to get it on! ;) Why can't they see what is so obvious, and when will Gofi quit being so dense? (yes, I have read the rest, and do know what happens, but I still think he's dense)
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  • From ANON - LaJiggles on June 03, 2003
    *cough* That first part there was... intriguing. And enlightening. Let's just say I have a myriad of ideas for that smut challenge ;)

    This is a new way to look at El and Bri's early relationship. I've always liked to think that they loved one another from the beginning, but this is definitely a highly plausible (and angsty) interpretation.
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  • From on May 28, 2003
    I've finally gotten around to reading this! It's... magnificent! Well deserving of all its reviews, and more! It's so well written - you write smut so damn well, but the emotional depth of this story is incredible. *sighs* I'm so stressed out by it all...and so addicted! I promise to review more regularly in the future but for now, all I want to say is... WOW!
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  • From ANON - viewerv on May 24, 2003
    This is so good. O please post the next chapter as soon as possible.
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  • From ANON - Isa on May 22, 2003
    This chapter is so sad!
    It's a pity that Elrond and Celebr�an aren't able to see how much they love each other.
    I'm really curious to see how you'll get them to conceive Arwen in this situation.
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  • From ANON - Hela on May 21, 2003
    This is such a great story! I hope you can update again soon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Furius on May 20, 2003
    *bawls* Every chapter ending's a cliffhanger. Poor Elrond, to punish himself through torments of memory. And Celebrian..it just seems to dastardly futile at times, in fact, at the rate you are going, it does look like it's going to be futile. We can only wait and hope..and of course..that's part of the addiction to this story...

    This is wonderfully sad and tragic. But I wonder if Elrond ever speculated on who her lover is, or is he too noble an elf to think such thoughts?
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  • From ANON - Lady of Legolas on May 20, 2003
    Whew!I thought that Elrond wasn't going to make it.
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  • From ANON - kalurien on May 20, 2003
    Gahhh! You are so evil! Poor Elrond after all that he went through, he only gets dream smut? I am in agony here with them. Beautiful, though, as always. Telling stories to his children is just so Elrond-y. :D
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  • From ANON - alena on May 20, 2003
    *wails*
    The love scene was so sweet and so...fleeting. It just makes what comes after that much harder to bear...
    There was a lump in my chest which kept on rising while I was reading this...I think I'll go weep now.
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  • From ANON - farewell on May 20, 2003
    by the way, i thought you did a fantastic job describing the Marshes. Very heart-wrenching.
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