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Reviews for Suffering

By : Catalina
  • From ANON - Eärelen on April 10, 2003
    Yoow, ow, when you first floated the idea for this story, I didn't really think that you could carry it off. I mean, how could these two people be so darn mistaken about each others' feelings?

    Now, I freely admit that I was wrong in that supposition. As Aragorn said, "Now we might cry, 'A plague upon the stiff necks of the Elves!'"

    I seriously hope you are not planning on dragging this out for much longer -- I am still in danger of exploding!

    Terrific writing -- I reallye the the way that you do transitions, setting the scene before you focus on the characters. Excellent, excellent stuff!
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  • From ANON - farewell on March 12, 2003
    awww. twins! yay! but HOW can they be so BLIND!! glorfindel, you REALLY have to start interrupting your lord! he's going to hurt himself soon! and don't yuo DARE extend this to valinor, us ofs of course you can keep writing chapters regularly. i start to wither when i can't read my losse's stuff... if you've got an idea for it, go ahead. but you'd better keep writing this. *brandishes arryn* i mean it! *arryn looks afraid and runs back to elrohir*
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  • From ANON - Lady of Legolas on March 11, 2003
    SWEET!!! The twins are were finally born.But they still think that the other doesn't love her/him.Wake up you two!!!YOU LOVE EACH OTHER!!!
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  • From ANON - alena on March 09, 2003
    Oh Elbereth. *sniffles, then bawls, then screams*
    You are evil, evil, evil. Erg. I want to both cuddle them and shake them violently by the shoulders.
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  • From ANON - Little she-bear on March 09, 2003
    Give her the letter! ARGH! ::bangs head against a wall::

    I have no words to describe how great this story is. I'm reviewing, not give advice, just to let you know that I'm reading and enjoying. Enjoying muchly.
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  • From ANON - Isa on March 09, 2003
    *does a happy dance*
    Yay! You updated!
    You are so cruel to make them so blind!
    I wouldn't have it any other way.
    Please, don't take too long posting the next one!
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  • From ANON - Rose Red on March 09, 2003
    This story is such an angsty good time! The tension in the first two chapters is so good, the way they are kind of circling each other.
    Honestly, I am just dying to know when they will both realise the truth! They must know that they couldn't have conceived children if their feelings weren't genuine, sniff. And the letter is such an evil device, I'm waiting for the moment when Celebrian finds it.
    Write more! :)
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  • From ANON - Cass the Heart Nut on March 09, 2003
    ::sighs:: How wonderful... I am so glad you updated this story! I was waiting on the edge of my seat, and I was not disappointed byt his chapter. Please tell me Celebrian will find the letter! Please, please, please! Don't let Elrond give it to her as she sails to Valinor, please! ::begs for angst-relief::
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  • From ANON - silindro on February 26, 2003
    oh good god. this fic was so good. ouslously, it shows real tension. i wnat more, and i want it now.
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  • From ANON - Blacknoise on February 20, 2003
    I thought there's be more!!
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  • From ANON - sarah on February 14, 2003
    Please continue! This is very good.Such misunderstandings.I love the way you show how two two people can get from understanding each other.I feel for both of them.Sarah.
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  • From ANON - Eärelen on February 11, 2003
    AAAAUUUUUGGGGHHHHH!

    Losse, how can you continue to torture us like this? How can you keep them apart any longer? You cruel, cruel thing!

    This is another great chapter -- your writing is excellent, I really feel for the characters, while at the same time wanting to smack them upside the head.

    Talk about the "stiff necks of the Elves" -- sheesh!

    Please don't drag this out too much longer, okay? I might explode.

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  • From ANON - Anon on February 09, 2003
    "he wondered what or who had engendered this in her"

    I think Glorfindel should stay away from couples filled with jealousy...:p

    Great fic, and great angst, hoping for more.

    A series of unfortunate misunderstandings...

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  • From ANON - darksilver on February 05, 2003
    Ooh! I love it! You've updated much faster this time :)...perhaps even faster for the next chap? -hopefully-
    Things are getting more and more interesting...poor elfies. -cackle-

    When will they find out they truly love each other, though? I can't wait!

    Bloody brilliant!

    Silver~
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  • From ANON - farewell on February 04, 2003
    get him, arryn! get him!

    god, how STUPID can they BE?!?!?! *smacks glorfindel* damn his not just interrupting elrond!!! that stupid blonde thing could have spared those two so much grief... but i WAS ready to start beating my head on the desk in the "rape" scene (in the words of elrond) when he realized that she was drunk, and was saying that he shouldn't be taking advantage of her, etc etc etc. i mean GOD man, GET A CLUE!!! how can ANYONE who is supposedly so WISE be so STUPID!!!!

    lovely chapter, as always. i can always count on you to get my spirits up. or get me enraged beyond measure-- i'm not really sure which. possibly both at once.
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