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Reviews for The Phoenix's Griffin

By : Havetoist
  • From AshleyLeigh on May 04, 2018

    Oh, I should have known better..... Really amazing work and now I need to sit somewhere and cry for awhile. But really, it was awesome.


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  • From ANON - havetoist on July 24, 2004
    Don't quite know where to begin--overwhelmed.....loved this story and love your writing. Very well plotted, couldn't put it down. Really evoked a lot of emotion in me and I have greatpectpect for the female heroine you've creatred.
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    Marcia, thank for for liking Phaila.
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    es mes me wonder if you write professionally. I'm going to recommend this to all my lotr fanfic friends. Thanks for a great story, and please add an epilogue to this one. Now, I'm off to read everything else you've got posted.
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    Not a professional writer, but only someone who has written stories for fun since she was a little girl.

    This started out as a completely original story I was playing around with that morphed into this fanfiction. I never would have thought...I suppose the epiloge is in "The Pheonix and The Griffin", with ground work laid for the family quarrel in "The Feud of Shadow and Light". Again, all original characters. You will have to, however; wade through almost an entirely original character 'cast' and deal with much more story that does not involve Haldir. It will, eventually.
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    marcianightengale spw@pacbell.net 2004-07-21 id # 254578
    Oh, since you're nice enough to respond to questions, maybe you'll help me understand what Phaila means when she says, "I would be a gentle ghost, Sheriff, not a tyrant...?" I don't get it and am sad not to understand.......
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    What she's trying to tell him is to remember her fondly, and not with anger, nor bitterness.


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  • From ANON - marcianightengale on July 21, 2004
    Oh, since you're nice enough to respond to questions, maybe you'll help me understand what Phaila means when she says, "I would be a gentle ghost, Sheriff, not a tyrant...?" I don't get it and am sad not to understand.......
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  • From ANON - Anna on March 12, 2004
    It's taken me two days to finish your story andd it is by far one of the best I've read. I became so enthralled with the characters, the language and the storyline, that I feld whd when it was over. I hope you write a sequel. I'm just starting "Amaras and Phaila". I'll bet I will enjoy it just as much. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Havetoist on January 19, 2004
    Her last words to Haldir are "The heart is never neuatral."
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  • From ANON - Jana on January 17, 2004
    Quite possibly the best story I have ever read on FanFiction. What is the translation of the last words Phaila says to Haldir at the end of Chapter 18?
    I hope you do add a prequel or sequel. This was marvelous!
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  • From ANON - Chris on January 16, 2004
    An absolutely enchanting story. I can hardly stop reading. I'm so pleased I caught your note about a re-write or I might have missed this. What a tremendous amount of effort this was (is).
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  • From ANON - Havetoist on January 12, 2004
    M ~

    From Chapter 15 - Chapter 19. There was so much rewritten, new dialog, etc....the prior chapters, minor editing.....

    T you you for reading.


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  • From ANON - M on January 10, 2004
    Hi, I am enjoying the story, but am a little confused. Which chaptere bee being changed? I see 19 chapters each time it is moved on the updated list, but have no way of knowing what is new or if you are just making minor edits. Could you please mark what is updated somehow so that i can go back and read the new part? Thanks!
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