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Reviews for Greenleaf & Imladris 16 - Strange Fates

By : MPB
  • From kirameki on January 16, 2004
    Oh, I really like how you explained Legolas' reasons for wanting to go on the quest, uncertain as it was. |^_^| And Gandalf and Elladan's discussion was very well concieved. There are so many mysteries concerning the twins after the book ends.
    *turns on legolas threateningly* And you had better get your act together mister! *shakes head sadly* He's so clueless... I can't say much because I'm rather clueless when it comes to things like that as well, but I think even I'd catch on if it was staring me in the face for centuries... He's *beyond* clueless...
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  • From ANON - AngelGirl on January 15, 2004
    Wow, poor Elrohir, he's just going to be torn for the rest of his life.... I love how you handled keeping the twins in ME longer. I'm kinda wondering how the twins took their little brother falling in love their sister... you kinda skipped over that. I'm so loving the story, My day lights up when I see that you update.
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  • From ANON - Lupusdragon on January 15, 2004
    Ah, literary loopholes, what would we do without them? This was a spectacular chapter! Starting with a quote from Tolkien was an excellent approach; it further strengthens your fiction to tie it so closely with the original work. If you were to footnote the passage, rather than add the explanation in parentheses, the flow would be nearly seamless from his words to yours. You have such a sophisticated style.

    I am very excited by the possibilities you present here. I find it interesting that the binding need not be reciprocal for Elrohir to remain in Middle Earth without choosing the fate of Men. Of course, it is the unfortunate nature of love for even the purest of loves to be one-sided from time to time. It is also unfortunate, though not entirely unexpected, that Legolas fears his desire. Absence makes the heart grow fonder... perhaps the time away from Elrohir will do him, both of them, good.
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  • From ANON - louise_oblique on January 15, 2004
    I really really love this just want to bang Elonir and Legolas's head's together and get them sorted. it's justy so gahhhhhhhhhh........... fab though very well done. sorry short review i seem to be doing them late this week, i hate insomnia :)

    huggs
    louise
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