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Reviews for Nirnaeth am mbar (Homesickness)

By : elfinesse
  • From ANON - Chloe Amethyst on December 01, 2004
    I just stumbled across this story on LoM last night, and became so enchanted by it that i stayed up well past midnight to finish reading it all. My frequent yawns today are well worth it, for it was a great story. I loved the characterizations, the very believable emotional issues the characters had to deal with, the delightful, unusual pairing--all of it. I'm looking forward to reading the sequel, but it looks as if aff may have corrupted it when the site had its nervous breakdown awhile ago? The chapters aren't really showing up. Are any chapters of the story archived anywhere else? Thanks so much for sharing your hard work and talent with we readers!
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  • From ANON - Deathangelgw on March 25, 2004
    I was just tootling along and I saw this rec'd by Eresse and figured, aw hell, since she is a picky author, this should be good. I was SO right. OMG this is so incredible! I absolutely loved it and was just dying for more!! Wonderful!! I am reading the sequel and I can already tell that I shall be begging for that as well...evil brat. Gah wonderful!!
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  • From ANON - Soledad on February 21, 2004
    A beautiful story - ans you even managed to give us a happy end. :)
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  • From ANON - Soledad on February 21, 2004
    Ouch! It's not the finest manner for his parentsleavleave without a word! At least Gildor was friendly enough.
    But Erestor the creep? I wonder what Lindir would say to that.
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  • From ANON - Twilight on February 08, 2004
    This angsty story was quite good. The scene where they were speaking about baby steps and then the next scene having sex was a bit confusing to me. They bonded during the sex? Was this act done directly after speaking? Or some time after taking baby steps with Filigwi learning to open up and trust Elladan? It would seem wiser to wait to bind where both were more secure in their relationship.

    I'm happy to see that Filigwi has accomplish his goal of being an apothcary and confident in his skills and knowledge as shown in the epilogue with Frodo. The pairing of Filigwi and Elladan was great. I look forward to seeing a sequel with Elrohir and any other stories that you may write.
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  • From ANON - Twilight on January 31, 2004
    Did Filigwi give himself to Elladan that night because he was fearful of losing him to another if he did not? I was confused by the Twins' conversation at the end of chapter three. Is Elladan not sleeping well? Was that the point? I love how tender and caring Elladan's behaviour is towards Filigwi. Looking forward to your next update!
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  • From ANON - Orchyd Constyne on January 31, 2004
    This is a lovely story. Very compelling and well written. ^^ I'm glad I stopped by and started reading it tonight. I look forward to your next installment!
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  • From ANON - HH on February 05, 0000
    I wonder if Elladan is afraid to admit that he truly loves Filigwi or what Elrond would do if he finds out that he bedded him before his majority?
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  • From ANON - Kryspen on January 25, 2004
    I'm hopelessly in love with this story! ^_^

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  • From ANON - Kim on January 25, 2004
    Love it so far! Keep up the good work. I can't wait to read more, ande the they find their way to each other.
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  • From ANON - Twilight on January 25, 2004
    Elladan with his kind and compassionate heart seems so right for Filigwi. Filigwi's fear of abandonment, insecurities, and lack of feeling loved is so real and so very sad. And now with Elladan leaving, he will be even more lonely and miserable. I hope he finds another elf to befriend him...hint, hint,please. His loneliness and alienation is breaking my heart. Update, soon please!
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  • From ANON - Twilight on January 22, 2004
    My heart goes out to Filigwli and the loneliness that he is feeling. I want to give him a giant hug. Can not understand why his parents did not come to Imladris. Enjoying your story very much. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - HHS on January 21, 2004
    That's so sad!His parents practically abandoned him!How awful!
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  • From ANON - Teri on January 21, 2004
    Very nicely done. Well written. I enjoyed this story very much but now I am very anxious because of your ending. Poor Filigwi will be devastated about his parents. I need the next chapter soon. Please! :):):) Filigwî is an interesting name especially the spelling. I like your explanation of the Figwit versus Melpomaen interpretations.
    Take Care,
    Teri

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  • From ANON - Mystkyten on January 21, 2004
    Great story, can not wait to see where this goes. This is the first fanfic I have read with Figwit in it and I love it so far. Please update soon.
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