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By : bluegold
  • From ANON - armytramp on April 19, 2004
    I liked the premise and enjoyed the first few chapters, even though the writing style could use some refinement. However, the tale is just dragging on at this point. Chapter after chapter of Erestor getting punched and abused is just too much. I for one am about to give up unless this starts going somewhere. There is not enough suspense to keep me interested, my sympathy for Erestor's plight notwithstanding. At this point, the story is just an exercise in domestic torture with no resolution in sight. The plot development is, quite simply, too slow. I wish you the best of luck with your writing and will check in for a few more chapters, but I would strongly recommend that you pick up the pace.
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  • From ANON - Lady Rowena on April 14, 2004
    I have to say your style of writing is really good,not boring and complicated,but very functional and 'easy going',elegant yet essential.
    The plot is good,but I cannot stand Erestor,heheee,sorry that depends on my personal taste;I don't like the way you made Thranduil and Legolas be,but,of course,that too depends on me ;)
    I'm sorry,I meant no offence with my opinion about the characters,but I only wanted you to know that you are really a good writer,though there are things I personally don't like (for I LOVE Thrandy and Leggy,especially when they play the nice guyz,eheheeee,^_^)
    Keep writing girl!
    Rowena
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  • From ANON - Wooster on April 14, 2004
    Mmm, maybe it's Elladan turn to think over the matter? To see the bastard he has for a father must be enough to make him think a lot. And Glorfindel is back, yay!!! Please, keep writing and posting, I actually LOVE your story.
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  • From ANON - Amanda on April 14, 2004
    He freaked out because they put him in the bed he got raped in didn't he. He's been avoiding that room like the plauge since the first chapter. I'm not suret het he was apologizing for though. Was it because he tried comminting suicide?

    Legolas is showing some intresting aspects. The apple dosen't falr frr from the tree or maybe it's a case of mistaken identity. Lets asume that Thranduil didn't do it which leaves us with two blonds: Glorfindel and Legolas and Glorfindel wasn't there.

    I hope you bring in Gladriel to straighten things out just because I love her character.

    Update soon and often.
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  • From ANON - giggle on April 13, 2004
    HMMM. That little scene with Elrohir asleep and being molested by Legolas was very interesting. Does the r fam family in Mirkwood have a little problem with boundaries perhaps? Sopmething about the word NO they don't quite understand? If Legolas got drunk what would he do to one of the twins? This has put a whole new slant on things. I like where this is going.
    OK now for Erestor. Did he fall or was he trying to end it all? Well no never mind Glorfindel is back and all ready to defend Erestor from the twins and Legolas and Elrond for that matter. I have been reading a few stories about bad Elrond lately and I am well and truly ready for someone to kick his elven bootie really hard. So if you want to I will applaud. giggle
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  • From ANON - daughterofthemidnightmoon on April 13, 2004
    You updated! Finally! I was so afraid there for awhile you weren't ever going to update! I was *dying* to read more of this... but then you kind of fell of the face of the planet there for a couple of weeks. You do know this is one of my fav stories right now...

    Anyway, great chapter. Can I assume that maybe Elladan is starting to feel a little less hatred and a little more sympathy towards Erestor? I hope so. That poor elf... he spent so much time caring for the twins when they were younger and then Elladan goes and tells him he hated him in the other chapter and treated Erestor so horribly. My poor little heart almost broken! So is Glorfindel actually back? And what was Erestor going into hysterics for? Was it because he tried to commit suicide? I hope Elrond gets his head out of his ass soon and starts giving Erestor a break! Geez! I want to just smack him and everyone else trying to beat up and berate that poor advisor.

    You know, if it wasn't actually Thranduil that raped him, how much can I bet that it was Legolas? He was there at the banquet and had just as much opportunity as anyone else. Plus, if it was dark, how could Erestor have told the difference between father and son and just automatically assumed it was Thranduil since he was the last one he saw before the incident. I mean, come on! Especially with Legolas acting so... I don't know... persistant (?) towards Elrohir with wanting to get him in the sack right now. OOOOOOHHH!!! What if he actually thought it was Elrohir in the room when it was really Erestor, and this whole mess is just a horribly gone wrong case of mistaken identites! OOOOOOOH PLOT BUNNIES!!!

    Sorry... i know I'm getting a litte carried away, I know, but sometimes i can't help it... Anyway, how much longer until the baby is born? Is Elrond still going to try to take it away from Erestor when it's born or is the truth finally going to be revealed? I think you should have a huge scene with Erestor beginning to fade from grief after the baby's born and Glorfindel has to bond with him to keep him from dying...

    Ah! I'm sorry! I'm sorry! I'm going off on tangents again! You'll have to forgive me... ^_^ But mulling over this story in my head, I'vee upe up with so many ideas, I can't help trying to speculate how it's going to end. I hope you update soon! Maybe with Glorfindel here now, Erestor can find a bit more courage to go on. PLEASE update soon! PLEASE!!! I always look to see if this story's updated every day! Do hurry with more soon or i will be forced to sic my hoard of mini balrogs on you! ^_^

    -daughterofthemidnightmoon
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  • From ANON - Wooster on April 02, 2004
    God, this is getting better and better! Poor Elrohir, it must be traumatizing for him to be mistaken with Glorfindel after pour his heart out! Oh, please, make Glorfindel return quickly. or those three are going to make poor Erestor life a living hell (not that he's living in a paradise right now, isn't he?). Keep on writing and posting, please.
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  • From ANON - louise_oblique on April 02, 2004
    poor erestor

    huggs
    louise
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  • From ANON - Taelin on April 01, 2004
    More precioussss we wants more!!!
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  • From ANON - Brin on March 27, 2004
    Aww ... you made me cry ... poo Erestor!
    I wonder will Elrohir join Glorfindel as one
    of Erestor's champions? I hope so, he needs
    all the friends he can get. So, as always ...
    More please & soon.
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  • From ANON - louise_oblique on March 27, 2004
    poor erestor, wonderful fic
    huggs
    louise
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  • From ANON - HHS on March 27, 2004
    Like I said at the yahoo site,there's no honor for what Legolas did.Assaulting a pregnant elf is unforgivable in my book.
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  • From ANON - Wooster on March 27, 2004
    Oh, my! What a bunch of nasty elves, bulling poor Erestor. And Elrond, so cold towards him, I actually hate him! Waiting for Glorfindel to came back and make allies with Elrohir... seems to be the only hope to Erestor. Keep writing and updating, you're doing a pretty good job!!!!
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  • From ANON - MyGirlCrais on March 27, 2004
    Get Glory back to help him!
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  • From ANON - Iamme on March 24, 2004
    Poor Erestor! And Elrond! The nerve of him!
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