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Reviews for Greenleaf&Imladris 20-Calenlass: Heart of a Prince

By : MPB
  • From ANON - lego forever on February 09, 2004
    Hmmm, I'm happy ;))). I can't wait for the actual binding. I wished though that maybe Thranduil can do the binding and that it will be in Greenwood. I really want Legolas' family to be there, not Aragorn and Arwen again!!! Well, you know better. Thank you for updating everyday.
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  • From ANON - Rainien on February 09, 2004
    *sigh* You're going to spoil us with these sweet, sappy chapters. But I am NOT complaining!
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  • From ANON - HHS on February 09, 2004
    They're finally going to be bonded!YEAH!!!
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  • From ANON - Eresse on February 08, 2004
    To Aelin-uial,
    I don't consider it a silly nitpick from a compulsive proof-reader at all. Why should I when I used to work as one? A proof-reader, I mean. :) I use the word "plains" in a figurative sense not a literal one. You know, as in the hills and valleys and slopes and clefts of one's body. But if it is distracting then I can switch occasionally to "planes." And, no, the series isn't anywhere near the end since I've got 10 parts to go covering them as a couple for a change. Hope you'll stick around for those. Thanks for the suggestion and the lovely feedback. It's much appreciated.

    regards,
    Eresse
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  • From ANON - Aelin-uial on February 08, 2004
    Together at last! On the other hand, I hope you're nowhere near the end because I'm enjoying this fic far too much. Are you planning a big bonding ceremony in Ithilien with all the elves present or just something private between the two of them? I know Elrohir is already bound, but there's nothing to stop him 'renewing his vows' is there? I suppose I'll just have to wait and see.
    I do find one small distraction in the sex scenes, and if you don't want to see a silly nitpick from a compulsive proofreader, please look away now! I believe that Legolas's and Elrohir's bodies have planes (flat surfaces), and not plains (large treeless areas).
    Again, thank you for the daily updates.
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  • From ANON - Inwitari on February 08, 2004
    he called him Melethron.. i love this.. great please write more.. thank you
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  • From ANON - Anita on February 08, 2004
    Aha! The mystery of Elr'sr's timely arrival when Legolas was assaulted is revealled! This is just prove that the bond between them keeps getting stronger. I liked this chapter, a little breather between the emotion filled chapters.
    Elladan's remark about Arwen's fierceness made me laugh :)
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  • From ANON - louise_oblique on February 08, 2004
    One word: wonderful

    huggs
    louise ;)
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  • From MJLuvsPolar on February 08, 2004
    "But so anxious was Legolas to store up uch uch of his Elf-knight’s loving as possible that, on the eve of the warrior’s departure, he recklessly took the risk of being seen by the wrong people at the wrong time and in the wrong place and spent the entire night with his lover in one of the inns of Minas Tirith itself."

    Yes Arwen I'd say there is a lot going on that you don't know about! God I love this story | ^_~ |

    Marie
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  • From ANON - lego forever on February 08, 2004
    Ha ha the clueless royal family strikes again. It's good Elladan was there. I think he was more forgiving of Legolas notwithstanding that he is Elrohir's twin because he also kthe the long history of the two and the times that it was Elrohir who did the hurting and Legolas the forgiving. Even Eldarion had more depth than his parents. Aragorn has always expected Elrohir's devotion and service and Legolas also but he has not exactly done something to make Legolas' stay prejudiced-free in Gondor being just there to react to race-motivated violence but not really showing his people that they should treat Elves with respect, no less a member of the feshipship. And I guess he was really reluctant to send help to Ithilien. How selfish! I care for for him and Arwen. They have not earned the right to hate Legolas and they don't deserve his apology. Another excellent chapter! I'm a happy person right now ;)
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  • From ANON - kirameki on February 08, 2004
    So sweet! I'm loving it (as always)! Will you delve into some he phe populace of Gondor discovering their relationship? That could prove interesting. Well, whatever you do is always interesting. But I hate to read about elves dying. It is such a sorrowful thing. Anyways can't wait for the next chapter. |^_^|
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  • From ANON - Kirui on February 07, 2004
    MOST satisfying :DDD~ Restraining myself from screaming like a bloody fangirl.... and failing miserably. And it hasn't ended yet! ::cheers:: Finally, the resolving begins! Mmn..... excuse me while I melt into a happy puddle. ::melts::
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  • From ANON - Mel on February 07, 2004
    Well, it's about time! I don't know, Eresse, call me vindictive but I k Elk Elrohir let Legs off a "little" easy. He's dying of a broken heart and lets Leggo have his way with him?? Before he even gets an "I've been so stupid" from him first! ARRGH!

    Ok, I feel better now (whew!) I'm glad Legolas finally came to his senses. I've been wondering when it was gonna be his turn to be in control (didn't expect it to be this time, though.) I can't wait to see how (or IF) he will face Arewin. I think he's lucky it was HER and not Elladan who saw him as he slipped out of town. I know Dan will be back in the picture soon, I'm curious to see how he takes things.

    Your story has me captivated! I look upd updates before going to bed, but they usually come while I sleep. I usually check before going to work, save them to a disk and read them on my lunch hour at work (Server won't let me access this "naughty" site from work.) SShhhhhhh!

    Breath in.....breath out......**sigh** Ok, I think I'm ready to move on to the next scene. First order of business - putting those nasty men in their place. Then --- Elladan going crazy with a lil' baby who LUVS Uncle Elrohir???????
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  • From MJLuvsPolar on February 07, 2004
    I was almost afraid to read this chapter Eressë because I was worried that after all the build up – narrative and emotional – I would be disappointed, however, nothing could be farther from the truth. Indeed, I find it is satisfying on many levels.

    Elrohir and Legolas have come full circle haven't they? This was masterfully demonstrated by the way Legolas, in conquering his fear and opening his heart, literally conquers Elrohir. And what a wonderful metaphor for love that is; after all aren’t we all at once conquerors and slaves to love? As he has guided Legolas in many ways during their friendship, Elrohir has now guided Legolas in the matter of his heart! I loved how everything Elrohir has physically done to Legolas in the past is turned back on himself and that by doing this Legolas truly experiences making love for the first time.

    In my mind Elrohir loses none of his dignity in accepting Legolas’ love without reproaching him for his behaviour. He *understood* if was fear that was motivating him and it was only his own insecurity over Legolas’ feelings for Estel that blinded him to the full realization that Legolas fear was so great because he felt far more for him than he ever would for Aragorn. Again the past echos; Legolas forgave Elrohir for his attack in much the same manner. As for Legolas - for him to be still so afraid of a rejection he knows he deserves and yet offer his heart anyway is all I needed to forgive him for hurting Elrohir. Let’s hope Arwen is as understanding!

    I was right Eressë; the whole encounter was just *combustible*! And yet wildly romantic – I just adore this:

    “Had his Twilight turned from him, he would have been lost.” *sigh* I think I'm more desperate for updates now than I was before. THANK GOD we still have 10 more stories to look forward to!

    Marie |^_~|






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  • From ANON - Inwitari on February 07, 2004
    Oh my God! YAY! I love this! Great Job! I love Legolas, and I absolutely love how Legolas came back, and Elrohir excepted him.... Please write more soon.. thank you thank you thank you

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