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By : dawnenab
  • From ANON - Chrissy on April 15, 2004
    I am so happy that they finally had sex! Yeah!!! She finally did it......I am so proud of her and Orlando......so sweet and erotic.......I want another chapter!!! Please!
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  • From ANON - Moi on April 14, 2004
    Fina-frickin-ly!!

    I was so excited you updated that I couldn't even wait until after work.

    It was so wonderful I'm so happy she forgave him and they got together. You're such a great writer I love it!
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  • From ANON - Jennifer Bloom on April 14, 2004
    dawne!!!!

    you don't want to know how long i've waited for your update! haha...goodness...why do you write Orlando so well...of course I'm in love with him to begin with...but this story...it just wants me to change my name to Adriana....haha. and thank god it isn't over...i know ducks isn't out of the picture yet...but finally....finally...they can express to each other how they feel!

    wonderful job writing this chapter...and the way you wrote the intimate scene was really good too.

    continue! for the love of all that is good...please continue! =)
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  • From ANON - Eyesofanarrow on April 14, 2004
    Wee! Cant wait for another update!
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  • From ANON - Moi on April 12, 2004
    Alright, while rereading this for the umpteenth time (because you haven't updated *cough*) I finally remembered to tell you something I wanted to say the first time around.

    I LOVE that you have Liz disgusted with getting off the plane on the tarmac, it's such a cute difference from Baby. A very nice touch I think.

    Anyways. Yeah, just reminding you that you have loyal readers that are waiting impatiently for you to update. Happy Easter.
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  • From ANON - Chrissy on April 11, 2004
    I can't wait for the next chapter!! Good Story. I hope that she isn't mad at Orli....He does love her........
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  • From ANON - Lini on April 08, 2004
    Yay!

    I finally had time to get back & read Chapters 16 & 17...fabulous! Keep 'em coming! I like the way this is going!


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  • From ANON - Danni on April 04, 2004
    Baby can't be mad at him! They were nearly together! Please Please Please let her forgive him and update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Jennifer Bloom on April 04, 2004
    and of course...thank god he told her he was with baby! If I were Orlando, I wouldn't care about what the tabloids would say or even if Liz Hart destroyed my career...baby is so much more important than any of that. =) and baby HAS to forgive him. If she doesn't...well...then...I'll take him! hehe =) continue!
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  • From ANON - Jennifer Bloom on April 04, 2004
    dawne!

    i must say...DUCKS MUST BE BANNED FROM THIS EARTH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wa bia bitch...dammit...and I want to kick orlando for ever staying with her in the first place...but of course, so bloody happy it's up finally! good good...just make sure the ending of this story doesn't involve ducks of any kind... =)

    ~ Jen
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  • From ANON - Moi on April 04, 2004
    Yay! He blew her off! I was so afraid he was going to change his mind.

    *happy dance*

    I hope baby forgives him though. Cuddle session ahead?

    Another great chapter. :D
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  • From ANON - alice on April 03, 2004
    Damn Liz, I hates her. But I feel so bad for Adrianna. This is a great, heartfelt, beautiful story. I love it.
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  • From MJLuvsPolar on April 03, 2004
    Oh Ali, what a fabulous update! I adore the sardonic, self-depreciating undertone of this part; not to mention I can't help being a *teensy* bit satisfied with the whole coke-on-Orlando ending. I couldn't care less about 'Ducks' it's just not right to hurt Baby. Too right he better go sort things out with her now! As always, I'll be looking forward to your next update.

    Marie :-)
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  • From ANON - Moi on April 03, 2004
    No offence, but I'm gettting a little bored rereading this. I hope you update soon because this is really a fantastic story that I randomly find myself thinking about during my day. And I get SO SAD when I see you haven't updated and I'm still left with such a sad ending. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Lee Anne on April 01, 2004
    Hi

    Just wanted to tell you I love this story. I can't wait for more!! Post more soon please!!!

    Lee Anne
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