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Reviews for Always Be Here

By : dawnenab
  • From ANON - Jennifer Bloom on March 31, 2004
    just finished chapter 15. one more to go til i tell you to hurry up and update, hahaha. I LOVE ORLANDO, (as if everyone didn't know already), but i love him SO MUCH MORE in this fanfic and somehow hope to dear god that he's like this in real life! hehe...okay...off to read 16. =) (YOU ARE SUCH A TALENTED WRITER BY THE WAY...I love how you use two different points of view, and the fact that they're so unlike and REAL makes this story so much GREATER!)
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  • From ANON - Jennifer Bloom on March 31, 2004
    just finished chap 13...I love this boy even more now, and it sucks how she said no. it hurt reading chap12, her interpretation...but it KILLS reading how he took it. he's...just...the darling...sweet...bloke...he is...and...to see him (read him) hurt like that...*sigh*...that's why I'm here for him...hehehe...off to read again....and imma gonna kill ducks, whoever ducks is, haha....gonna read chapter 14 now... =)
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  • From ANON - Jennifer Bloom on March 31, 2004
    just finished chapter 10....IT WAS A BLOODY DREAM!????!??!??!? dear god...going to read again now...i think *I* might need a cold shower after this, ali!
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  • From ANON - Jennifer Bloom on March 31, 2004
    okay...read more chaps. just wanted to keep on reviewing intermittently instead of just one at the end of everything to tell you as much as i can remember. some of this stuff makes me laugh so much! her quips and everything...and him...he's just fabulous...especially in this story you've made! I get all giddy now...especially just after the kiss they shared when she got home from clubbing. the rose?! she wonders who the rose is for?! bloody heck, is she dense? hehe...really sweet story...one of my fave, if not my fave Orlando one. =) going off to read now...
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  • From ANON - Jennifer Bloom on March 31, 2004
    read first four chaps...really sweet! I'm all giddy with Orlando...god i wish i were 'baby', though I would be less jerk-ish, hehe, i'd want him to stay forever *sigh* =)...imma continue reading now.
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  • From ANON - Janna on March 24, 2004
    I love the two POV! You make it very interesting to read basically the same story twice... with hits of characters thrown in... its wonderful. Keep it up! Cant wait for an update!!!
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  • From ANON - mia on March 23, 2004
    EEEEEEEEEK!!!! moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore!!!!! NNOOOOOOO!!!! Must have more now!!!!! Seriously!! I'll start to go **twitch** insane**twitch** if you don't write more!!!!!!!!!EEEEEK!!
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  • From MJLuvsPolar on March 18, 2004
    Wow how did I miss another update? *shrug* This story is just fantastic. I adore the alternating points of view because it's so true that two people can see the same situation in such different ways. I really think you have found a great 'voice' for both Adriana and Orlando - both of them seem very well rounded and not just flips sides of the same coin if you know what I mean. I'm pleased Adriana told Orli her story - he really needed to know where she was coming from. I hope he can made things 'alright' for them both. And I'm *so* looking forward to finding out just how the next 'holiday' week is spend! Please update again soon.

    Marie :-)
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  • From ANON - Moi on March 16, 2004
    I can't remember if I reviewed or not, but yeah.

    I like it. Very very much. I think it's a very endearing story, and very well written (writtin? oh, it's late and I can't spell anyways).

    I hope you update very soon. I shall just have to continue reading it over and over again.
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  • From ANON - Danni on March 10, 2004
    Awww I love this story! I'm glad baby opened up to Orlando, I really hope she is reconsidering. They are soooo sweet together. Hope your okay too, keep us updated on how you are!

    Danni xxx
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  • From ANON - Marla on March 10, 2004
    Awww..I love Orli. I have a feeling it's still going to be a bumpy road ahead for them. I almost forgot about the phone call to his ex. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Marla on March 09, 2004
    Awww...I'm so happy that she finally told him. I can't tell you enough how good this story is. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Lini on March 05, 2004
    Ok Ali, you're making me stay up way past my bedtime just to keep reading your stuff! I hope you're ok and are finding a good new place to live. I like this style. I like this story. I see the influence of Dallas in that one chapter!!!! :P Can't wait to read more of it, it's really good reading. Take care, dear.
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  • From MJLuvsPolar on February 28, 2004
    "I think uld uld tell the man that I sacrifice kittens and puppies by the light of the full moon and he’d just shrug and say ‘To each their own, luv’." I just about choked on my coffee reading this Ali! Too funny. Fantastic part this - I'm glad Adriana has come clean about 'John' and now I'm really keen to read this scene from Orlando's point of view. *sigh* I can tell I'll be forced to k evk everyday for updates!

    Marie :-)
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  • From ANON - Danni on February 28, 2004
    I'm so glad she decided to open up to him. I hope she makes up her mind and they get together. Another great chapter, especially the snuggling bit at the end. lol I'm a hopeless romantic.
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