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Reviews for Always Be Here

By : dawnenab
  • From ANON - Rainien on February 28, 2004
    Where can I get my own Orlando Bloom body pillow? I'd also like to place an order for an Elijah body pillow and Viggo body pillow. LOL Different moods require different pillows, ya know. *S*
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  • From ANON - Marla on February 27, 2004
    The story gets better and better. What is Orli thinking?! Thats only gonna make Adriana upset and leave. This story is better than some of the soap operas I watch. LOL I can't wait for the next chapters!
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  • From ANON - christie on February 26, 2004
    I have been reading this story for a e noe now. I love the double posts to see both sides of the story. I love how the story is well thought out. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Danni on February 22, 2004
    No Way. Orlando cannot bring her her woman out to morroco. How unfair would that be to baby? I hope she knocks some sense into him. Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From MJLuvsPolar on February 21, 2004
    Oh man I got *three* chapters to read all a once - there is an upside to being too busy to check for updates! Ali I'm so enjoying the way this story is panning out. I LOVE the fact that Adrianna didn't just cave and say ok to Orli. And Orli, *snort* such a guy - jealous as hell one day, dumb as a hammer the next! I can just imagine how ugly things will get if this mystery woman actually does turn up. LOL I'll stop now before I get even more carried away! Please update again soon.

    Marie :-)
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  • From ANON - Marla on February 21, 2004
    OMG! This story is awesome! Altho I was disappointed that was was just dreaming lol. You're a very good writer. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Janna on February 19, 2004
    Ali,

    I dont generally read these things since most sound like they are coming from a 14 year old trying to mimic something they've heard or read. I just read the first chapter, and I think its wonderful. Very believeable, almost like you have really experienced such a morning. I will continue to read, and most likely enjoy it! Keep up the great writing!

    Janna
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  • From ANON - Toni N. on February 14, 2004
    I can't believe after all this time and anxiety that they finally get together and it's only a dream! Are these two ever going to get there in real life?
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  • From ANON - jw on February 14, 2004
    *wags finger while laughing* You really had me going there for a minute. Thought they finally got it together then you pull the ultimate fake out and make the entire love scene a dream. Very good writing.
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  • From MJLuvsPolar on February 13, 2004
    Umm...I think I need to take a cold shower to! LOL - Very, *very* hot chapter Ali. Pity it was just a dream. Then again I guess we have the 'real' thing to look forward to now. Please, please update again soon.

    Marie :-)
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  • From ANON - Rainien on February 13, 2004
    LOL That was mean! *S*
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  • From MJLuvsPolar on February 13, 2004
    Well this conversation should be interesting! I wonder if Adriana is going to tell Orli about 'John' or just fob him off?? Loving the alternating POV's btw - it's always so interesting to see how 2 people view the same circumstances so differently. Update again soon please!

    Marie :-)
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  • From ANON - Meme on February 11, 2004
    This story istasttastic, I keep checking back for updates like everyday. The tension and unwavering friendship is wonderful and you write it so well. I hope to see more of it soon. That is if Baby doesn't get annoyed and kill Orli before he explains himself.
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  • From ANON - Rian on February 10, 2004
    Very well written! I like it alot! Please keep going with it.
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  • From MJLuvsPolar on February 09, 2004
    Ali this is such a great story. I'm really enjoying the alternating points of view and the kind of diary style narrative style. And I tend to agree with you - Adriana isn't a Mary Sue (thank goodness!). So where are we headed now that Orli has gone and kissed her?? Please come back and update soon.

    Marie :-)
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