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By : dawnenab
  • From ANON - Maria on February 07, 2004
    MORE! I love it!
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  • From ANON - Christie on February 06, 2004
    Found your fic two nights ago. Loving the fact that he isn't getting quite everything he wants all at once. After all, even if you are famous it doesn't mean that everything comes tu alu all at once. I love how you write your characters, they have the depth they need to be real. I wish the chapters were longer, but I do know that they will end up whatever length muse calls them to be. :)
    Keep it up
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  • From dawnenab on February 05, 2004
    Thanks. Glad you like it. The tension is building too... ;-)

    She already knows that the whole thing was his idea...and it is a 'working vacation' since he does have some re-shoots. Just have to wait and see what happens now. Chapters 7 & 8 promise some additional tension. I just love the cruelty of making us all (me included) wait.

    he he he he he

    ~Ali
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  • From ANON - jw on February 05, 2004
    This is good. The sexual tension between OB and your ofc (original female character) is believable. I can't wait till you post the chapter when your ofc realizes she's in Morocco for a vacation and that OB planned it for her.
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  • From ANON - Ali on February 02, 2004
    Thanks for the kind words. I have had some compy problems at home. I have the next 3 chapters ready to go & believe me...you will learn more about her. Thanks for saying she she's interesting...made me smile, cause I happen to think so too.

    If you'd be interested in being my beta...I would welcome the help! :-)

    ~Ali
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  • From ANON - Amanda on January 31, 2004
    Hey there I just ran across your fanfic and I think its absolutely awesome!! I cant wait for another chapter.. when you make it, be sure to add it to the Orlando Bloom Files website because thats where I found the first one. If I may, I'd like to propose a bit of advice for your next chapter(but you might have already thought of it yourself! lol) .. give a tad bit more information about the woman narrating the story. She seems very interesting and I'd love more backround info ;-) Your writing really is great, keep up the good work!
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  • From dawnenab on January 27, 2004
    Thank you all for your kind words.

    I am indeed continuing the story, however I am having problems with my home compy & cannot get online at the moment...which will make for a longer chapter for you all...maybe 2 chapters. Hopefully it will be up and running today & I will post ASAP.

    Thanks again for the encouragement.

    ~Ali
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 27, 2004
    Enjoyed the beginning you should continue
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  • From ANON - Maria on January 26, 2004
    I like it! Please more!
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  • From ANON - Stefanie on February 06, 0000
    That was a wonderful story! I could easily read more if you decided to continue it.
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  • From ANON - Rainien on January 25, 2004
    I like what I've read so far. Hope you continue. I'd say more but words don't seem to be my forte today. Maybe next time. *S*
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