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Reviews for The Price of Pride

By : ArielTachna
  • From ANON - Aysha on April 18, 2004
    wow! You're a fast writer! Fortunately!!! =)
    I prefered this chapter to the ones before - it was so... - tense in some way!
    Please go on! *waits for next chapter*
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  • From ANON - Aysha on April 18, 2004
    Seems like a little glimmer of hope for Leggy comes in sight... ;-) MORE!!!
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  • From ANON - Aysha on April 17, 2004
    More, more, we wantssssss more!!! =)
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  • From ANON - Aysha on April 16, 2004
    Wow! I like your story! Poor Legolas - allways falls in love with one, he actually can't get... *sniff*
    I'm looking forward to the next chapter! =) Hope you'll post it soon... ^_^

    Aysha
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 12, 2004
    i like how the relationship with Estel is developing gradually
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 10, 2004
    Excellent characterization and motivation. Response to emotion--not expressing it--is very credible.
    I'd like to see the somewhat perfunctory framing device (remembering from Valinor) developed in more depth, possibly toward the conclusion.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 10, 2004
    Excellent characterization and motivation. Response to emotion--not expressing it--is very credible.
    I'd like to see the somewhat perfunctory framing device (remembering from Valinor) developed in more depth possibly toward the conclusion.
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  • From ANON - Wanderer on April 07, 2004
    Wrong, all wrong, and still wrong! LOL But I love it! I think it's going to be a good thing that Legolas harbors these feelings towards Estel, cause that would make it easier for him to see Arwen with Estel, in the long run. Better to have two people you love each other than to have someone you love with someone you hate, right? Keep it coming...I'm totally engrossed in this tale!
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  • From ANON - Gionareth on April 07, 2004
    This is a wonderfull story... Really sad (from Legolas point of view); but still good. I wish Legolas could end with Arwen somehow, even thou you wrote she had died and he is speaking in retrospection. I'm a huge Arwen/Legolas fan so please at least think about it..... It's breaking my heart to see Legolas suffering so.....
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  • From ANON - Wanderer on April 06, 2004
    I've read all of the chapters thus far, and am dying to learn the rest of this tale! Please, don't keep us waiting for too long! Your characters are well developed, your plots are intriguing, and your relationships are able to tear forth a plethora of emotions from the reader. Keep up the wonderful work!
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  • From ANON - Rozzan on March 26, 2004
    Oh God I have just read your first three Chapters. This is just utterly beautiful. Definitely on my faves list now!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 10, 2004
    Hi Ariel!
    Started reading and got this sense of Deja Vu...
    I said to myself...
    "I've read this somewhere before!"
    Me thinks you are posting this at one of my groups...
    HQ?
    Anyway.. I love your story..
    enough romance eep eep the elves happy...
    and my personal favorite.. grief and suffering!
    Poor Legolas... so cute.. but so good at being mournful.
    Keep it up! ~ Keep it dark!

    Shirl
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  • From ANON - Rainien on February 28, 2004
    I'm really enjoying this. Well done so far. *S*
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  • From ANON - Phairesse on February 21, 2004
    This just gets more complicated
    poor Legolas
    Good chapter

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  • From ANON - Donna on February 20, 2004
    Excellent story!!! This is already shaping up to be one terrific tale and I look forward to reading more t. Yt. You have a great talent for storytelling. I feel sad for Leggy though lol.
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