Click Here!

  • 1

Reviews for Two Hour Version

By : Undomiel
  • From on May 31, 0000
    haha that was great! I loved it. I have been checking back everyday for an update and dang it you take for ever to update the damn story! but hey it was worth the wait! lol haha

    So hurry up and update faster this time! just playin!

    Katie
    Report Review

  • From ANON - D on February 13, 0000
    Nice fic (I loved this episode and Alicia was absolutely beautiful).
    You should really work on your formatting. Everything was all bunched
    together and you didn't know when the talking started or stopped.

    FYI.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - kirameki on February 28, 2004
    Phew! *fans herself* That was rather steamy! Well done piece of work.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Iamme on February 16, 2004
    Beautiful!
    Report Review

  • 1
T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!